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A Short Story by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 19, 2010 at 08:53 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Love
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 254 views

Vampire's Daughter  

In a cold dark night, a little girl is in the graveyard seeking for a poetic father.

Then she turned around looking at a red glow, it was a vampire bat she paused for a moment or two.

She asked the vampire bat if you are, my poetic father what is your name little girl.

My name is Marie L. hope, he gazed at little Marie suddenly the vampire look in the picture.

He sudden gasped his heart start, beating he finally found his daughter.

They hugged each other to death; he took Marie under his wing.

To become a successful writer, you got to remember these 3 things.

1..have a very good writing persona.
2. gain the Respect of other writers and their work
3. make the best friends you make on the writing world

So Marie did just that, she wrote very well became a very good poet writer.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

August 22, 2010
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ah hope I find more poems about vampires *grins*

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June 20, 2010
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Good start
Hey this has potential and fits in with the community we have here. I like how this tells like a child's story, maybe you could take these characters and develop an actualy short story? I would read that!

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June 20, 2010
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awe this was very good with a powerful message ,you have to chose which life you wish to live in this world , the choice is all ones own , the twist in this was great thanks thunder for sharing.

you are very welcome i wish was a book writer right now instead of a writer for poetry

 ThunderStorm replied on June 20, 2010

oh keep at it babe you'll make it one day , it takes a while to learn all there is about how to write one so keep chin up as its taken me long time to find my style , so keep writing

 elfqueena replied on June 20, 2010

June 20, 2010
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hah I love the twist at the end, in the world and not just in writing you have to know how to play the game, like the vampire you start out young but if you want to live you ahev to learn 3 things
1. you will not stay with your parents for long, that is their gift to you
2. learn fast by others without asking for help or perish just as you were born... alone
3. and finally fight your way to the top or let others kill you slowly
like the wolf this is the harsh lesson in life, so you either gotta make it or let it break you. how do you plan to play the game? live or die

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