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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 11, 2010 at 06:02 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Romance | Love
Upload Stats: 4.81 Stars by 8 users with 12 comments and 244 views

Music of my life  

The sun is a red-orange, glow it so gazing upon the sunís rays.

It seems all hope is lost, but is sure not to see your baby sister.

Growing up from a baby, to a adult watching your baby sister growing.

Taking care of her own baby, it brings a sadness in her very own eyes.

Watching her own daughter grow, to become a teenager and a adult.

Soon your own daughter will be a veteran, of the magical world of poetry.

It seems like only yesterday, I see my daughter starting to walk.

For the very first time, saying her very first word she say momma.

She filmed her own daughter, saying her very first word.

Now she is a proud writer, writing a very good best seller.

I am proud of my baby girl watching, her to grow and big.

Taking care of her mom, she is so happy to see her grand daughter


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


thanks dom for the great challenge


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



MagicMJ
July 31, 2010
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this is touching... and yes it seems like a story in a poem...
well penned and it flowed very well..
The first lines lured me into it... captivating...


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Icinia
June 12, 2010
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ThunderStorm: How lovely! A great tribute to family. This is my favourite: "...the magical world of poetry". It IS magical, isn't it? Great job.


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Hannah92
June 12, 2010
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Lovely
I felt great emotion from your simply out and spaced sentences.....but that really is the art of poetry...you caught me from the start...a very beautiful read....well done!!


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RAYVHENWING
June 12, 2010
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INTREGUEING
I found this hard to read as a poem for some reason,saw it more as a shortened story a journey of ones life, but thats just me,it was captivating and yet different,very good,keep writting..~Vlada~



(Author)
thanks vlada and welcome to writers-network i hope you like it

 ThunderStorm replied on June 12, 2010




Lehvak
June 12, 2010
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Now this is totally different from all the other ones i've read, Very interesting approach you took to all this. Life is a strange journey indeed. Nice addition to the challenge. I hope mine can at least stand next to urs ^_^ keep up the great work


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icedcreations
June 12, 2010
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That was very different.
Life itself is "music in my life".
Well done I liked this alot.
Christine


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Dom1n1ck
June 11, 2010
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Yep
I enjoyed the read Thunder. Art is indeed in the blood, it is a part of what and who we are and it is perhaps the best gift that we can pass on. Nice job capturing a sentiment ths complex with brevity and assurance. Nice work. D


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MichaelFrost
June 11, 2010
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Smiling here
Such a wonderful submission that follows the theme so perfectly. I was so amazed at the flow and the smile which it brought me. Very well done, without a doubt!

--Michael Frost


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GABSTBOZ
June 11, 2010
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A family musical
Hi Thunder
A very sweet poem of yours, "Music of My Life", shows a caring heart, and yes our family is the truest form of music.

Smiles
Gabs


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elfqueena
June 11, 2010
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awe
such a sweet poem it its a delight to read such a warm caring piece and so beautiful
you show so much love in this makes my heart melt , love it babe very sweet.


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carmurr
June 11, 2010
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I liked it
Very different from the rest. I'm sure many people on WN can relate to this write. Thanks, carmurr


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colorfuldreamer
June 11, 2010
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I like it
It was great! Thank you for the awesome read. It shows so well growing up from the parents point of view. Great job, keep up the great work!
Love
Kenzie
colorfuldreamer


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