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Author: ThunderStorm

Created: June 07, 2010 at 10:25 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Fantasy | Sad | Love

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 171 views

Winds of howling

For the days the leaves, I see the winds howl at full force.

It sounds almost like a Tornado, Transforming to a mighty cloud.

Seeing the frightened animals, it just brings tears to their eyes.

Seeing their precious home, to blown away in little pieces.

Now all the animals have no home, to stay warm and cozy.

It brings the sadness inside of me, to see their Farm all smashed.

But sometimes you got to start over, from the very beginning.

It Brings the Courage, of the Future is upon.

For the Horses and their beautiful, baby colts.

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RobinD
June 07, 2010

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lovely

So sad but gives hope at the end.. Great job Mr. Thunder!

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elfqueena
June 07, 2010

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awesome babe

awe this was so sad and beautiful i really like this and no one thinks mainly of the nimls in tornado , its really quite sad , very sweet poem babe, the line seeing their precious home to blown away itf you lose the to the flow would be better , but this is
a really cool poem liked it thanks for sharing babe.

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DeviantWriter88
June 07, 2010

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Awesome! I loved it. A beautiful short story in a poem that ends with a ray of hope! :clap: :clap: :clap:

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Retto
June 07, 2010

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Epic dood

I really like ur avatar and the imagry posted here is amazing, like the chilli peppers sing, "destruction leads to a very rough road but it also breed creation" awesome write dood keep it up ^_^

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