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Fragile



Author: MagicMJ
Created: May 30, 2010 at 12:14 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 227 views

Fragile 
I see your misty eyes again
Your shoulders hang too heavy
From the burdens no one seems to care
As I see those tears fall from your eyes
I felt a stabbing pain through my heart

Coz you're a fragile lady
Breaking in front of me
A shattered glass I wanna pick
But my hands can't seem to hold
Afraid to be cut, have a bleeding heart

My lovely lady I wanna see
A smile of sunshine in your lips
Forgive me for I'm such a chicken shit
To take just a single step
And wipe away those tears

My fragile lady
Your misty eyes
Are killing me
So please just smile
Even for a while


Author Notes
Just wrote this before I sleep. Just like to share.


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

Kassandra
July 18, 2010

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Moving
This is a moving piece and could just as well be said in a mirror to oneself. I enjoyed it a lot. Good work,
Yours Kassie

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dazedforever
May 31, 2010

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Nice
Nice poem, full of love and caring, i loved your phrasing, and word choices, really add to the subtle depth of this piece, great work !

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X_da_writer
May 31, 2010

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It was a good read ^_^ thanks for the sharing

~X~

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agnipadmo
May 30, 2010

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lovely one
very beautiful.

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