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Author: MagicMJ
Created: May 29, 2010 at 05:10 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 298 views

Lights 
Countless lights have caught my eyes
Like speeding fireflies they went by
Some stayed for a while, enjoying my stare
But others in a blink of an eye have gone away

But there are some that shined best
Though they got me blinded
And barely got a glimpse of them
But still I remain dazzled in their brightness

Sitting here, watching this busy street
These passing lights have brought me in
Realizing some matters of life, though
They have been laid right in front of my eyes

Lights of passing cars, shared a bit of my life
Like people who have come and passed me by
Some stayed longer, others just a bit of time
And a few dear ones who have touched my heart

No matter how fleeting some have been in our lives
Sometimes they are the ones whom we will treasure a lot
Like a bright light from a speeding car
We never get a full picture but it struck our eyes


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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

silverwings
June 02, 2010

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So true
This is so true Magic...Life is a journey where some people become part of your heart and others come in and out of life that only glimmer occasionally...great poem...Jules.....aka...Silver wings...

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dazedforever
May 31, 2010

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wOW!
So true...such a beautiful poem, people come and go, yet some shine on forever.
reads effortlessly, and yet, it is so profound and meaningful, to be honest i am jealous, it is an idea i have never been able to put into words. i loved it, thank you for sharing. this deserves spotlight, !

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Hannah92
May 29, 2010

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A very good job
This was really well written...i loved the way you expressed....and the different approach to the matter was very original....very well done ......good write

MagicMJ
May 29, 2010
(Creator)
Many thanks to you Hannah!!!
your words are like fireflies giving me a bright smile...)






      

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