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A thousand



Author: MagicMJ
Created: May 22, 2010 at 07:25 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 171 views

A thousand 
I took a thousand steps away from you
A thousand heartbeats away from the blues
Drove a thousand miles from your eyes
To escape this feeling that I hide

I took a thousand strokes and swam away
A thousand gulps of air to breathe you out
Washed my body a thousand times
To remove these yearnings kept inside

I read a thousand words but not the word love
A thousand crosswords to puzzle my mind
Wrote a thousand songs of heart breaks
To remind myself to stay away

A thousand ways I have done
A thousand times I have tried
To walk away and hide
From your loving eyes

A thousand miles away I wanted to be
A thousand seas between you and me
A thousand mountains a far from you
But don't make a single step towards me

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

dazedforever
May 31, 2010

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Wow !
Such a touching and lovely poem, loved the idea of this one and it was very nicely penned with your delicate and skilled hand, great work once again, i am your fan !

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Aly_707
May 22, 2010

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Heart felt
This poem was well written, showing heart felt emotion. I can relate, I too have tried to get away from pain and people who have tried to hurt me. Trying to erase the memories is a hard thing to do. All in all this was a touching piece.Well done.

MagicMJ
May 24, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot Aly... It made my heart smile that you find this piece touching...)



elfqueena
May 22, 2010

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cool
nicely done good write and very sad , you didn't put cr but would like to do one on one line the second if you'd take "away out the flow would be better , its a really nic e poem and like it a lot ,way to go babe,

MagicMJ
May 24, 2010
(Creator)
Hi elfqueena!

Thanks a lot for reviewing this piece. I'm so glad you liked it..)

elfqueena
May 24, 2010
you so welcomed






      

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