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A Series by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: May 10, 2010 at 06:14 pm
Upload Type: Series, A (18+)  
Category: Horror | Dark | Ghost
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 291 views

Chapter 1 the Haunt  

Chapter 1. The Haunt

It begins in a creepy Smelly old haunted house live for 3,000 years; soon it got pitch in darkness not for very long though where 3 kids look at the old creepy haunted house holy shit said matt this place Reeks as rotten Cheese it Rot to my bad taste soon the girls got there.

Soon the Haunted phantoms came in to the haunted House look at the Scenery it smells awkward in a freaky way, oh much better yet matt said Liz it smells like Dead Sneakers pee-ewe Damn Right it is smells like old Rotten Eggs Said Liz well what the hell we doing here.

What happens if this place brings the Ghosts here, now Liz said matt there is no such thing as ghosts besides they are Not Real they are only Super natural beings soon Enough the Ghosts enter the Bed of Liz and matt we are the Friendly Ghosts we mean no harm what so Ever.

Oh what the Fuck now we got friendly ghosts, spying on us having our time and peace donít worry matt I will Scare them with my ghost repellent spray you sure that will work babe it said it keeps ghosts witches phantoms and other stuff like that well Damn Babe spray it on their sorry ghost asses.

For disturbing wait before you spray us are we here guys Dakota and Beth Damn Guys you give us a frightened scare, of a lifetime well we are here what we suppose to do now guess we can find Candles in this Thick hell hole yes please I hate the Darkness.

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Chapter 1 of 30

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Comments & Reviews

May 11, 2010
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well man. It's in a different style. So i say it was good. Being normal is overrated. Im not normal myself lol. Just look at my writign style lol. I say good job.

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May 10, 2010
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clap, clap wolf gave me goosebump here...I like it and the the characters quite cool too!
I'll be following this haunting chapter...keeps on!


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