Profile Home My Writing About Me Latest News

      

Authors, Share Your Book with Millions of Readers





poetry
Message Me Writers-network Members Area Upgrade to PRO
 
A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: May 02, 2010 at 03:37 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Science Fiction | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 5 comments and 290 views

Snake eyes  

Once every night the snake is hissing, with his snake-eye glow looking something.

For his late night snack, snakes are afraid of piranhas if a whole school of piranhas attack a snake.

Do not stare at a king cobra’s hood, you be paralyzed you can’t move.

Not a single inch, now a King Cobra’s enemy is a mongoose mongoose.

Loves Cobra’s eggs they have a very source for Cobra’s Eggs.


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


The author would love to hear your feedback but you must be logged in to do that. If you are a member of Writers-Network click here to login and review this writing entry.

Not a member? Not a problem! You can register here, it's free for everyone

Comments & Reviews ( X 9)



DeviantWriter88
July 29, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
Woven with thoughtful words the webs of the prey and predators, I liked it a lot and think you can elaborate it more. Very Creative, I have to say.

Keep Writing and Rocking Brother

-Deviant Writer-


There are no comments on this review.




justashadow
May 02, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
this was great : Do not stare at a king cobra’s hood!! loved reading it, this was my first read of this kind of poem but i liked it,..hope u write more

justashadow


There are no comments on this review.




Kassandra
May 02, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
:)
God one Storm, this one says a lot in so short a space. snakes are awesome creatures huh. Good one Storm, yours Kassie


There are no comments on this review.




AuthorSandraRain
May 02, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
Like
I like this


There are no comments on this review.




cluckyduck78
May 02, 2010
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down
excellent
this poems explores a fascinaation for snakes and their odd complexities so very well done


There are no comments on this review.





 

Sponsored Ads By Members



  Writers-Network.com was granted non-exclusive rights to display this work
  All poetry, stories, columns, and other member contributions are owned solely by the poster
  © Writers-Network.com - All Rights Reserved
  Free Poetry Site!  |  Read Todays' Poems  |  Upgrade to PRO  |   Writing Community