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I'll be alright



Author: MagicMJ
Created: May 02, 2010 at 07:49 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Love | Heartbreak
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 147 views

I'll be alright 
I can still remember
the day when you left me
It seems like yesterday
I can still see you walking
out on me

You said you had to wander
Have to find yourself with no me
And you told me you love
Just needed some time to be free

So I pretended, I was not hurting
And said I'll be alright
As long as you're happy
Then I'll be just fine

But my heart got heavy
As you walked out that door
I can't seem to feel my feet
But I found myself running at that door

Outside the rain was pouring
As heavy as my breathing
And my tears were like rain
They drenched myself completely

And I said to myself
I'll be alright
As long as you're happy
I'll be just fine

And now as I remember
The day when you left me
Today it's not raining
But I'm soaking again in tears

Saying I'll be alright
As long as you're happy
As long as you're alive
I'll be just fine

But I won't be alright
'Cause I'm saying goodbye to you
With flowers in my hand
Staring up to the heavens
Where you'll forever stay

So please say to me
That I'm gonna be alright



Author Notes
I'm trying to make this a lyrics, but I don't know if it's gonna be good...
lol.... though I feel this doesn't sound good as a poem too...
just wanted to share..


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

AuthorSandraRain
May 02, 2010

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It's an emotional poem...song.
I like it.
I could help you come up with some stuff if you'd like?
I write songs all the time.

MagicMJ
May 29, 2010
(Creator)
Many thanks!!!!






      

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