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Cards down

Author: MagicMJ
Created: May 01, 2010 at 06:19 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 200 views

Cards down 
Hey, you got me confused
Lost in your game of love
Am I your lover or just another
Please lay down all the cards

You want me to call you honey
But you won't come when I say it
You want my attention
But you seem lost in my direction

You tell me I'm your baby
But why I always see you
In another's arms honey
Oh, this made me go crazy

You tell me you're just friendly
Am I to believe that story?
But just a kiss from you honey
Melted all my worries

Darn, I maybe blind
Your beauty struck my eyes
So don't tell me lies
Cause like a shadow, I'll follow you around

You know I love you
So don't make it hard
Don't send me in a maze
Where only you can find the way out

So please lay down all the cards
Let me know if I'm the king of hearts
And not the joker
You keep fooling around

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Comments & Reviews

May 01, 2010

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great wording and flow, fantastic sentiment, keep up the great work

May 02, 2010
Many thanks Keely!!!


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