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Faith in Me

Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 29, 2010 at 12:37 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Personal | Society | General/Other
Entry Stats: 2 comments 164 views

Faith in Me
Faith in me
This I cannot see
To trust myself
Seems hard for me

Why does it always takes
someone to tell me
that I'm much bigger than
what I think I could be?

Can I see what their eyes see?
Believe what they think I can be
Sure that I can go beyond my limits
But I guess I'm miles away from self esteem

I guess I'm confident when not seen
Able to be at my best silently
I just don't like to be noticed
I'm contented just behind the scene

A simple appreciation
A gentle smile of approval
A burning rejection
A sigh of discontent

All of these I can take
As long as they are thrown
Only at my direction
And not right at my face

And it would be great
If I remain out of sight
Forever invisible from
Scrutinizing eyes

Author Notes
I often times feel this way..


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

May 01, 2010

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Good poem, i have enjoyed reading it very much (: I liek the deepness and how personal this poem is. I can really feel your emotions speaking out, and put my self in a zone where i can feel your emotions. Good job. (:

May 01, 2010
I forgot to rate this but i think you deserve a 4.5 (:

May 02, 2010
Million thanks Kayla...)

April 29, 2010

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this was great to read.. i know what you mean.. i feel that way sometimes too
but then i find it somewhere in me to just do me and not think about anything else

May 02, 2010
Million thanks to you ManiiMae...)


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