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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 29, 2010 at 12:37 pm
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Personal | Society | General/Other
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Faith in Me

Faith in me
This I cannot see
To trust myself
Seems hard for me

Why does it always takes
someone to tell me
that I'm much bigger than
what I think I could be?

Can I see what their eyes see?
Believe what they think I can be
Sure that I can go beyond my limits
But I guess I'm miles away from self esteem

I guess I'm confident when not seen
Able to be at my best silently
I just don't like to be noticed
I'm contented just behind the scene

A simple appreciation
A gentle smile of approval
A burning rejection
A sigh of discontent

All of these I can take
As long as they are thrown
Only at my direction
And not right at my face

And it would be great
If I remain out of sight
Forever invisible from
Scrutinizing eyes



© MagicMJ - all rights reserved

Author Notes


I often times feel this way..


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



KaylaLuckett
May 01, 2010
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Good poem, i have enjoyed reading it very much (: I liek the deepness and how personal this poem is. I can really feel your emotions speaking out, and put my self in a zone where i can feel your emotions. Good job. (:



I forgot to rate this but i think you deserve a 4.5 (:

 KaylaLuckett replied on May 01, 2010


(Author)
Million thanks Kayla...)

 MagicMJ replied on May 02, 2010




ManiiMae
April 29, 2010
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this was great to read.. i know what you mean.. i feel that way sometimes too
but then i find it somewhere in me to just do me and not think about anything else



(Author)
Million thanks to you ManiiMae...)

 MagicMJ replied on May 02, 2010






      

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