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Faith in Me



Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 29, 2010 at 12:37 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Personal | Society | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 210 views

Faith in Me 
Faith in me
This I cannot see
To trust myself
Seems hard for me

Why does it always takes
someone to tell me
that I'm much bigger than
what I think I could be?

Can I see what their eyes see?
Believe what they think I can be
Sure that I can go beyond my limits
But I guess I'm miles away from self esteem

I guess I'm confident when not seen
Able to be at my best silently
I just don't like to be noticed
I'm contented just behind the scene

A simple appreciation
A gentle smile of approval
A burning rejection
A sigh of discontent

All of these I can take
As long as they are thrown
Only at my direction
And not right at my face

And it would be great
If I remain out of sight
Forever invisible from
Scrutinizing eyes



Author Notes
I often times feel this way..


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

Hannah92
June 04, 2010

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Perfect
This couldnt be described or written any better....because you said it all....it truly came from you....and i loved it!!...Love Hannah

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silverwings
June 02, 2010

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Excellent
Wow majic...I think you just descibed my life...very well writen...definately spotlighted!!

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MichaelFrost
May 31, 2010

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MJ, a huge hug for you. This is a pure form of self expression which I greatly applaud you for having the bravery to share and yet it can so easily fit into so many people's lives.

Very well written and now another hug for you.

--Michael

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MsButterfly
May 31, 2010

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You did a beutiful job of showing your emotion
You know how to manipulate your words to flow with such content
When i first read this it made me sad and kinda opened my eyes
Good job

~msbutterfly~

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