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♥ Dead Pan Plague ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: July 26, 2005 at 05:02 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 832 views
Dead Pan Plague 
Dead Pan Plague


Dead face, dead leaves, dead pan
Listen and listen good to me
I've never before been in this situation
It is not a commonality
I don't think I can handle it anymore
This walking out of my back door
Picking up after your love is such a chore
My heart is breaking and my back is sore
There's times when I sleep it away
And that can sometimes be good
But when I get restless again
I'm feeling worse than I should
What's the soltion in a plague?
Can anyone run for cover at all?
Or do we sit and get a realy nice tan
Until the reaper comes to call

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Comments & Reviews

melissa
December 15, 2005

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excellent piece, very well written! I look forward to reading more of your poetry! It is an absolute pleasure to read!
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brokenhearted
August 26, 2005

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kewl!!!!!!!! THAT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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drowning_in_you
August 21, 2005

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The beauty of your work appeals not just to the mind but to the heart as well and as I have mentioned in the past you really have a grasp on your readers.Its as if everything you write is like a rose blooming in the ash of a forest fire...so beautiful and so unique.
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drowning_in_you
July 27, 2005

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Picking up after your love is such a chore
"My heart is breaking and my back is sore"..I like that,its quite original.As for the rest of this it is excellent but I feel like maybe you could have made it a little longer.Regardless it is still worth five stars
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brenda95670
July 27, 2005

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Excellent write and read
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