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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 26, 2005 at 04:37 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Non Fiction | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 379 views

~The Memento~  

~the Memento~

Please mend this gash
Of a memento
In my heart of hearts
It hurts
It smarts
please make me calm and docile
With your sweet eyes
And perfect smile
So in my reminiscence
Please show me forbearance
And mercy with lenience
As I muse, ponder
Reason and reflect
Yes, my usual shine
Has become suspect
Please guide me with your patience
For tho I may be dispirited
For a while
There's nothing compared
To the way I feel
When you make me smile
Say something wild
And fill the milk of your honey
Into my ow-ies


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



MELONIE
September 25, 2006
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Beautiful poem.. Touching and sentimental.


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MaryJane
December 15, 2005
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excellent piece, beautifully written!!


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drowning_in_you
July 27, 2005
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Why only three stars? This might actually be the first "sadly cute" poem ever. Its just another testimate to how incredible you are.The body is written pretty well and your word use is original but its the ending!


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brenda95670
July 27, 2005
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good read and write


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