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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 22, 2010 at 05:03 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Romance | Dark
Upload Stats: 3.5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 294 views

Puzzle piece lost  

By each passing day for Strange Reason I canít solve this puzzle.

I canít think of the outside Realm it is like putting a piece-by-piece setting it together.

I will solve this puzzle to seek the answer I just hope it is the right one.

Or maybe to find the answer inside your heart just write it out of your pure inside.

Maybe I will suffer my total gasp of screaming lungs I will be total Rotten till I see my flesh eating by maggots and flies.

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August 14, 2010
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Very well written
i very much liked your work, its very different, and it may need a little work, but a say youve done an amazing job.

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May 30, 2010
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wow. u use alot of emotion when you write.
Thats good

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April 22, 2010
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Hummm.. wonder what the puzzle is.. I like puzzles.
I'm with ElizabethStark on this one.
I enjoyed it, how it is different, and unsettling.
Interesting read indeed.
Be well

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April 22, 2010
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This is quite experimental. Bold is an adjective that comes to mind if I were to describe this work in one word. Total gasp of screaming lungs... what a chilling and visceral phrase. You have talent. I look forward to reading more from you.


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