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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 16, 2010 at 07:40 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Love | Dark
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 323 views

Night Ritual  

Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the stroke of death falls against my eyes.
It wounds me, and darkly my
life's blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In a haze of shock I call your name
while oblivion takes my hand.
Now alone, my love falls upon cold eyes.

This is my Hell

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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July 17, 2010
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Death is only the beginning!

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April 17, 2010
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I love this poem, it's different! I reminds me of what I lost and wishing I had that second chance, you know!

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April 16, 2010
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love it
this is really good, I enjoyed the flow of this one and the subject
great read Thunder

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April 16, 2010
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Awww man
Why is everyone writing sad tonight ? Another really good write here Storm, well done my friend. Kass

haha Kassandra, it comes and goes in short bursts, I've found if you write something dark, then you get all these dark poems comming out, if you write something lighter the same and so on.

 Mastema01 replied on April 16, 2010


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