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Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 15, 2010 at 11:24 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | Spiritual | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 146 views

I need you 
When loneliness has swallowed
this unfeeling heart
And emptiness has dug
a deep hole inside this soul
With body too heavy to move
away from this sorrow
And mind caught in rage
of stormy thoughts
When life no longer feel
the sense of living
And welcome in its arms
the death of sufferings
Help me find you in all this darkness
Let this soul lay in your hands
Caressed this unfeeling heart
with your loving touch
And still the thoughts
inside this stormy mind
For alone I cannot win
these battling pains
I need your hand to lift me
from despairs
I need you Lord for me stay
and hold on to the life
that nailed you in your death





Author Notes
I'm in this state right now...


 

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Comments & Reviews

nina
April 15, 2010

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these are very strong words written in at a time you may not be feeling that strength. but if nothing else you have a talent in the words you write just dont let things get you down too much and if they do write them out!

MagicMJ
April 17, 2010
(Creator)
thanks a lot nina....)






      

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