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My Grandma's song

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 14, 2010 at 06:07 pm
Entry Type: Music, G (All)
Category: Romance | Romance | Romance
Entry Stats: 1 comments 147 views
My Grandma's song
Sweet little dreamer,you are so magical as a sweet poetry king.

You are my little angel,even in death I will always to Comfort you.

Soon you will Treat your girlfriend,even the ladies to Have Respect you.

You still have the will, the charisma to have inside your Heart Everyday.

Take Care my sweet little prince.

Love you Always...


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HauntingWords
April 14, 2010

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It is easy to see this song would be a comfort to you. I imagine the song would be sung in a soft almost whisper-like voice whilst kind nurturing eyes look upon you. It is a song which makes the heart warm.

There are a few lines that do not seem to bridge together properly, closer to the beginning. It appears as though a few small words may have been missed. I suggest looking over this again in the event that I am correct.

Thanks for sharing.
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