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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 13, 2010 at 06:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Horror | Horror
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 178 views

Bad dream  

everyday i lie down in my bed, seeing these horror bad reality.

For each passing nighttime hours I see the reaper dancing in my skull.

I have been seeing the eye of the devil,who stands his back turn.

As I play my Deathmetal music he Screams, he has the anger to fight.

I play the music he hates it so much I play the Sonic wave needle.

Pierce his ears with the anger and the passion for Greed.

I will never Fight you, besides this is my dream.

I will use the Same anger to beat the Reaper with.


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darkelegy
April 14, 2010
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Awesome! So awesome dark piece of black poetry my brother Goth! I really really enjoy the read cos you know its my alley brother! Bravo wolf for the job welldone! Keeps on brother my shadows is always here! I am darksyn...


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HungGarKid
April 13, 2010
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Very well put together..I really like "I will never fight you, besides this is my dream." that says a lot just that one line, pretty much sums up the whole poem..In my opion anyways, great work keep it up!HGK


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SilverMythCurse
April 13, 2010
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Very well told. I would'nt habe put it in better words myself. This is something not everone can come across so. Sweet!!! I love it!! It's breathe taking in my little upside down world(lol). Outstanding!! Keep up the good work

-SMC


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