I feel tempted to pose a cryptic question along the lines of; "Where is the poem?" but I will not stoop so low. I take it that it is a 'prose poem' and it is the content and the imagery that make it poetic.
It is quite intriguing in the questions that it leaves unanswered. I would take a guess that the writer is fairly young and is into RPG games and 'Dungeons & Dragons' fantasy.
A few suggestions about form and style:
it is quite acceptable to use lower case and play around with syntax but you need to have some continuity in what you do, random capitals amidst lower case where caps should be used looks strange. Try to play with your line length. Build a rhythm or beat into your words. Use imagery and/or metaphor rather than superlatives. Read your work before submitting and edit - everyone has to do this to 'craft' a poem.