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♥ ~~Lover's Sonnet~~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: July 15, 2005 at 08:47 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 390 views

~~Lover's Sonnet~~ 
~~Loverís Sonnet~~~

When you sing your silent song of the loverís sonnet
I see the moon and stars in your eyes
I just canít keep it under my bonnet
And that should really be no surprise
Thereís words unsaid by just the understanding
In the conviction of your tone
And the rhyming that youíre landing
Says that nothing of our love has gone
Itís the sexiest of songs my love
And Iíll remember every word
Like from Godís lips straight to my ears
And I am hypnotized and lured
What more is there to say about this
That youíve not already sang to me?
Except the never ending sense of bliss
Poignantly brought on by the purity of security
The future may hold many twists and turns
But weíll face them side by side
You know for what it is I yearn
And thereís nothing between us to hide.

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July 15, 2005

beautiful, awesumme write and read, loved it, take care

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July 15, 2005

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I am amazed by this beautiful piece, excellent job

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July 15, 2005

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Very good flow, good job!

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