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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 15, 2005 at 08:32 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 380 views

~~Ecstasy~~  

~~Ecstasy~~

Ecstasy is not just a word,
So I won’t confuse the issue at all,
One can rest and be assured
It is the moan of the lovers’ call.

“Oooh oooh oooh” is almost how it sounds,
and “Ahhhhhhh is another you may hear
.”Uh huh, uh huh” and “mmmmm’s all abound
and ‘Yess, yes, that’s it right there!

Ecstasy, yes ecstasy, I long to feel it’s flow,
It’s a feeling that not enough
Can be said about it.
What an experience to know
No doubt, not one about it.


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July 15, 2005
truly great poem and a great satisfying read, vivid imagry I can hear every sound, well done


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drowning_in_you
July 15, 2005
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Few(that I know of) dare try a hand at erotica seemingly because of a fear of perhaps not being able to capture the trues essence of the concept and perhaps fall short in an attempt to stimulate both the body and mind. This how ever is different. I have said before that your greatest strength lies in Erotica


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GarrettE
July 15, 2005
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Intresting love poem, and definition


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