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melissa Mon Jun 9 21:32:09 2008
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| My Review of For my husband by
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| I am really impressed with this piece. I really like how you stated and made sure to mention that there is always ups and downs in every relationship. I like how you are really truthful in this, I love how you've captured the reader into the wonderful emotions that you are feeling. |
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melissa Mon Jun 9 21:26:47 2008
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| My Review of When It rains, It floods by
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| I can honestly say that I have felt this way for so long ... I really appreciate this poem because I feel that it takes alot of courage to come out and say the truth of the matter. This is so truthful and powerful! I just loved it, I think you have spoken for alot of us and I think that we all appreciate a great piece like this. |
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melissa Mon Jun 9 21:20:52 2008
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| My Review of Loosing by
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| Beautiful piece. I loved that it is so blunt and straightforward and you have managed to say so much with so little of words. I really like that it is sad yet it has alittle bit of a positive twist to it. Great work, I really enjoyed this. |
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melissa Mon Jun 9 10:37:17 2008
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melissa Fri May 30 13:48:37 2008
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| My Review of The Day Has Come by
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| They say that "you can only understand a mother's love untill you are a mother yourself." I really enjoyed this poem very sweet and also well expressed only thing is a few grammar errors ... I believe in the beginning and also I think that you could elaborate alittle more on the subject I find it alittle short maybe alittle too brief so I guess that's it other than that well done! |
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melissa Tue May 13 11:40:22 2008
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| My Review of (Ja_B) Reminisce: A Whisper From A Lie by
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| Very well crafted with great idea's, but I would say that in my opinion I almsot find it alittle too long. I think that in the beginning, there are alot of parts that don't serve the poem so well. |
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melissa Thu May 8 10:25:22 2008
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| My Review of Innocence Lost by
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| Very deep, the subjecy also very clear. Although I believe that maybe you could of structured it different maybe consisting of 5 different stanza's, not to mention makng it alittle longer, maybe including more words and description. That's just my opinion ... |
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melissa Fri May 2 16:57:07 2008
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melissa Fri May 2 08:56:29 2008
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My Review of Gonna Change T oday by
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| Perfect, I can defenitly relate to this. I think most people can. I like how it says so much with so little words. |
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melissa Fri May 2 08:25:22 2008
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melissa Fri Apr 18 09:54:59 2008
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My Review of Demons by
Angel22
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| Very nice! Well said with so little words. I admire that. |
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