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MaryJane
Thu Jun 19 11:52:14 2008

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My Review of Desert Rain by Janice85
Great description, very vivid and compelling.
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MaryJane
Sun Jun 15 12:19:44 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) One Star by GuillermoVera
Great write! You took the words right out of my mouth, I feel the same way as you do. Thanks for your empowering words I'm sure that everyone else who has been dissed
about their poetry will appreciate this piece!
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 12 12:02:10 2008

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My Review of Lady Of Words by Angeltears
Nicely done!
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MaryJane
Mon Jun 9 21:53:20 2008

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My Review of The Greatness Shines Galore Sent Straight From The Lord Above by ClarkthePoet
Great write, really uplifting and inspiring.
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MaryJane
Mon Jun 9 21:32:09 2008

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My Review of For my husband by mich2good
I am really impressed with this piece. I really like how you stated and made sure to mention that there is always ups and downs in every relationship. I like how you are really truthful in this, I love how you've captured the reader into the wonderful emotions that you are feeling.
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MaryJane
Mon Jun 9 21:26:47 2008

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My Review of When It rains, It floods by mich2good
I can honestly say that I have felt this way for so long ... I really appreciate this poem because I feel that it takes alot of courage to come out and say the truth of the matter. This is so truthful and powerful! I just loved it, I think you have spoken for alot of us and I think that we all appreciate a great piece like this.
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MaryJane
Mon Jun 9 21:20:52 2008

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My Review of Loosing by mich2good
Beautiful piece. I loved that it is so blunt and straightforward and you have managed to say so much with so little of words. I really like that it is sad yet it has alittle bit of a positive twist to it. Great work, I really enjoyed this.
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MaryJane
Mon Jun 9 10:37:17 2008

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My Review of If I Fall by Poetic_Rain
Very nice.
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MaryJane
Fri May 30 13:48:37 2008

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My Review of The Day Has Come by DewmanX4
They say that "you can only understand a mother's love untill you are a mother yourself." I really enjoyed this poem very sweet and also well expressed only thing is a few grammar errors ... I believe in the beginning and also I think that you could elaborate alittle more on the subject I find it alittle short maybe alittle too brief so I guess that's it other than that well done!
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MaryJane
Tue May 13 11:40:22 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) Reminisce: A Whisper From A Lie by GuillermoVera
Very well crafted with great idea's, but I would say that in my opinion I almsot find it alittle too long. I think that in the beginning, there are alot of parts that don't serve the poem so well.
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MaryJane
Thu May 8 10:25:22 2008

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My Review of Innocence Lost by clutzyconehead
Very deep, the subjecy also very clear. Although I believe that maybe you could of structured it different maybe consisting of 5 different stanza's, not to mention makng it alittle longer, maybe including more words and description. That's just my opinion ...
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 16:57:07 2008

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My Review of The Walk (Existence Verse X) by War_Machine
Well done!
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 16:55:56 2008

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My Review of The First Time (Existence Verse IX) by War_Machine
Wonderful write!
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 16:54:43 2008

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My Review of The Call (Existence Verse VIII) by War_Machine
Very nice!
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 08:59:31 2008

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My Review of OH THOSE GOLDEN YEARS by carolann
Lol! Very inspiring j/k
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 08:56:29 2008

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My Review of Gonna Change T oday by carolann
Perfect, I can defenitly relate to this. I think most people can. I like how it says so much with so little words.
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MaryJane
Fri May 2 08:25:22 2008

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My Review of Close To My Heart by TempestOfNature
Looks like a great love song!
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MaryJane
Thu May 1 15:20:12 2008

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My Review of Men and Women by Honesty27
Very nice!
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MaryJane
Thu May 1 15:18:39 2008

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My Review of I Have Awaited The Taste Of Beautiful Pure Love by ClarkthePoet
Well done!
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MaryJane
Thu May 1 15:17:21 2008

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My Review of This Is The Life I Wish I Once Had by ClarkthePoet
Excellent write!
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MaryJane
Tue Apr 29 13:16:23 2008

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My Review of The Pain Of This Boy, His Soul Never Set Free by ClarkthePoet
Pretty powerful!
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MaryJane
Wed Apr 23 23:21:10 2008

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My Review of Existence Verse (Part V) - The Wait by War_Machine
Wow,this is quite sad, good choice of words. Very well expressed! Great job!
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MaryJane
Wed Apr 23 23:18:58 2008

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My Review of Existence Verse (Part IV) - Gone Away by War_Machine
Really like this!
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MaryJane
Wed Apr 23 23:17:42 2008

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My Review of Existence Verse (Part III) - Help Me by War_Machine
Well written
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MaryJane
Wed Apr 23 23:15:04 2008

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My Review of Existence Verse (Part II) - The Street by War_Machine
Excellent!
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