My Comments & Reviews:

MaryJane Fri Oct 10 12:21:28 2008 Helpful: My Review of Insecurity by Karrie53 Very well expressed. I have def. been at this point in my life and it's terrible to feel that way, but with time it gets better. I hope. I like how you used very little words to say alot. I like how you've used words that evoke emotions of what's it's like to feel that certain way. Very well done. visible MaryJane Fri Oct 10 11:47:37 2008 Helpful: My Review of I Want by SailTheFail Very nice. I love the love in this piece lol. Great work. visible MaryJane Sun Sep 28 22:11:22 2008 Helpful: My Review of dREAMING!! by carolann Really enjoyed this. Short and sweet, I got no complaints visible MaryJane Thu Sep 25 13:24:03 2008 Helpful: My Review of Angel's Muse by Lost_Prospekt Wow that was amazing!! Absolutely phenomenal!! visible MaryJane Thu Sep 25 13:21:12 2008 Helpful: My Review of This Paper-Thin Heart Bleeds by Lost_Prospekt Wow this was amazing, I love the use of words you have chosen. Very beautifully expressed, you've def. captured my heart. Well done. visible MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:21:19 2008 Helpful: My Review of As Every Image Fades Away I Am Left Alone To Sadly Pray by ClarkthePoet Well done, sincere and deep. visible MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:19:45 2008 Helpful: My Review of No Matter What I Just Cant Seem To Let You Go by ClarkthePoet Yeah we probably have all been here before. This is well written though I think you should put it into some paragraphs ... other than that I think it's great. visible MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:13:13 2008 Helpful: My Review of (Ja_B) To the one who knows by GuillermoVera Wow this is really well done, I can so relate to this piece. I have gone through this type of "love" in the past.... but I'm truly grateful for this piece. Very well done. visible MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:09:30 2008 Helpful: My Review of (Ja_B) My Music by GuillermoVera Really loved this piece, wonderfully written. You have defined your love for music in a very pleasant way, with "not too much or too little" of words. Well done. Love the simplicity. visible MaryJane Thu Jul 24 10:10:05 2008 Helpful: My Review of Shadowed love by PoeticPirate Maybe alittle short, you could elaborate on your feelings alittle more. You can't quite feel the depth of your feelings with the so little words that you use. I think you could add some more to this piece, but other than that I enjoyed. visible MaryJane Mon Jul 14 09:23:47 2008 Helpful: My Review of I'm Gonna Miss You by tenderangel Really enjoyed, excellent description and expression. visible MaryJane Mon Jul 14 08:57:31 2008 Helpful: My Review of Sad Girl by War_Machine Wonderful use of words, and great description. You have a few grammar errors though I would check that out and revise. visible MaryJane Sun Jul 13 23:41:38 2008 Helpful: My Review of If this is What it Takes by RichieRich Really love this, absolutely adore everything about this poem. visible MaryJane Fri Jul 4 11:58:29 2008 Helpful: My Review of Disappointed by War_Machine You can defenitly feel the emotions you are dealing with in this piece, I can defenitly feel the disapointment as well. Very strong, and very powerful. I would remove the paragraph " and she's gone away ..." as I believe you don't need to repeat it so many times, I think you should use that paragraphy only once in this piece. visible MaryJane Fri Jul 4 11:45:47 2008 Helpful: My Review of " I Sit Away " by RichieRich This one is really deep, I love how you've managed to say so much with so little words. I'm really impressed. I love it. visible MaryJane Fri Jul 4 11:42:22 2008 Helpful: My Review of I want you by RichieRich mhm ... I love it anthony! visible MaryJane Wed Jul 2 18:41:56 2008 Helpful: My Review of Our home grown Dew by PoeticPirate Great write. visible MaryJane Tue Jul 1 00:10:14 2008 Helpful: My Review of Heaven's Missing An Angel by RichieRich luvs it visible MaryJane Tue Jul 1 00:07:58 2008 Helpful: My Review of " You're My Everything " by RichieRich I'm speechless ... I absolutely adore visible MaryJane Tue Jul 1 00:05:14 2008 Helpful: My Review of Please forgive me by RichieRich Love it visible MaryJane Thu Jun 26 12:08:09 2008 Helpful: My Review of Your Illusions by Jay098 Great way of expressing your hurt, this speaks with alot of emotions I like that , but I would maybe change the last line as the words that you use are kind of powerless and don't really match up with the stlye of the rest of it. visible MaryJane Thu Jun 26 12:02:53 2008 Helpful: My Review of THIS IS ME!!! by carolann I really liked this, it's brief but it says alot. It's uplifting, great way of expressing who you are, and your love for poetry. visible MaryJane Thu Jun 26 11:59:16 2008 Helpful: My Review of Remember This!! by carolann Enjoyed it I like that it conveys a powerful message with so little words only thing is I think you could of ended it alittle different. I find the words used in the last two sentences are almost powerless compared to the rest. visible MaryJane Sat Jun 21 14:45:02 2008 Helpful: My Review of Thank You Mom!! by carolann Great work, it's short but yet it still says alot. I really like this a great tribute. visible MaryJane Sat Jun 21 12:15:33 2008 Helpful: My Review of Mother by Angel22 This is defenitly a lovely tribute to a mother but I feel as though their is not enough being said when you can say so much. I think you need to add some more verses, I don't think the reader gets to feel the appreciation that one has for a mother. visible

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