
MaryJane Fri Oct 10 12:21:28 2008
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My Review of Insecurity by
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Very well expressed. I have def. been at this point in my life and it's terrible to feel that way, but with time it gets better. I hope. I like how you used very little words to say alot. I like how you've used words that evoke emotions of what's it's like to feel that certain way. Very well done. |
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MaryJane Fri Oct 10 11:47:37 2008
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My Review of I Want by
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Very nice. I love the love in this piece lol. Great work. |
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MaryJane Sun Sep 28 22:11:22 2008
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My Review of dREAMING!! by
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Really enjoyed this. Short and sweet, I got no complaints |
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MaryJane Thu Sep 25 13:24:03 2008
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MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:13:13 2008
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My Review of (Ja_B) To the one who knows by
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Wow this is really well done, I can so relate to this piece. I have gone through this type of "love" in the past.... but I'm truly grateful for this piece. Very well done. |
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MaryJane Tue Sep 23 21:09:30 2008
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My Review of (Ja_B) My Music by
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Really loved this piece, wonderfully written. You have defined your love for music in a very pleasant way, with "not too much or too little" of words. Well done. Love the simplicity. |
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MaryJane Thu Jul 24 10:10:05 2008
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My Review of Shadowed love by
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Maybe alittle short, you could elaborate on your feelings alittle more. You can't quite feel the depth of your feelings with the so little words that you use. I think you could add some more to this piece, but other than that I enjoyed. |
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MaryJane Mon Jul 14 09:23:47 2008
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MaryJane Mon Jul 14 08:57:31 2008
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My Review of Sad Girl by
War_Machine
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Wonderful use of words, and great description. You have a few grammar errors though I would check that out and revise. |
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MaryJane Sun Jul 13 23:41:38 2008
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MaryJane Fri Jul 4 11:58:29 2008
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My Review of Disappointed by
War_Machine
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You can defenitly feel the emotions you are dealing with in this piece, I can defenitly feel the disapointment as well. Very strong, and very powerful. I would remove the paragraph " and she's gone away ..." as I believe you don't need to repeat it so many times, I think you should use that paragraphy only once in this piece. |
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MaryJane Fri Jul 4 11:45:47 2008
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My Review of " I Sit Away " by
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This one is really deep, I love how you've managed to say so much with so little words. I'm really impressed. I love it. |
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MaryJane Thu Jun 26 12:08:09 2008
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My Review of Your Illusions by
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Great way of expressing your hurt, this speaks with alot of emotions I like that , but I would maybe change the last line as the words that you use are kind of powerless and don't really match up with the stlye of the rest of it. |
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MaryJane Thu Jun 26 12:02:53 2008
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My Review of THIS IS ME!!! by
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I really liked this, it's brief but it says alot. It's uplifting, great way of expressing who you are, and your love for poetry. |
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MaryJane Thu Jun 26 11:59:16 2008
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My Review of Remember This!! by
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Enjoyed it I like that it conveys a powerful message with so little words only thing is I think you could of ended it alittle different. I find the words used in the last two sentences are almost powerless compared to the rest. |
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MaryJane Sat Jun 21 14:45:02 2008
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My Review of Thank You Mom!! by
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Great work, it's short but yet it still says alot. I really like this a great tribute. |
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MaryJane Sat Jun 21 12:15:33 2008
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My Review of Mother by
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This is defenitly a lovely tribute to a mother but I feel as though their is not enough being said when you can say so much. I think you need to add some more verses, I don't think the reader gets to feel the appreciation that one has for a mother. |
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