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MaryJane
Fri Oct 10 12:21:28 2008

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My Review of Insecurity by Karrie53
Very well expressed. I have def. been at this point in my life and it's terrible to feel that way, but with time it gets better. I hope. I like how you used very little words to say alot. I like how you've used words that evoke emotions of what's it's like to feel that certain way. Very well done.
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MaryJane
Fri Oct 10 11:47:37 2008

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My Review of I Want by SailTheFail
Very nice. I love the love in this piece lol. Great work.
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MaryJane
Sun Sep 28 22:11:22 2008

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My Review of dREAMING!! by carolann
Really enjoyed this. Short and sweet, I got no complaints
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MaryJane
Thu Sep 25 13:24:03 2008

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My Review of Angel's Muse by Lost_Prospekt
Wow that was amazing!! Absolutely phenomenal!!
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MaryJane
Thu Sep 25 13:21:12 2008

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My Review of This Paper-Thin Heart Bleeds by Lost_Prospekt
Wow this was amazing, I love the use of words you have chosen. Very beautifully expressed, you've def. captured my heart. Well done.
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MaryJane
Tue Sep 23 21:21:19 2008

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My Review of As Every Image Fades Away I Am Left Alone To Sadly Pray by ClarkthePoet
Well done, sincere and deep.
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MaryJane
Tue Sep 23 21:19:45 2008

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My Review of No Matter What I Just Cant Seem To Let You Go by ClarkthePoet
Yeah we probably have all been here before. This is well written though I think you should put it into some paragraphs ... other than that I think it's great.
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MaryJane
Tue Sep 23 21:13:13 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) To the one who knows by GuillermoVera
Wow this is really well done, I can so relate to this piece. I have gone through this type of "love" in the past.... but I'm truly grateful for this piece. Very well done.
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MaryJane
Tue Sep 23 21:09:30 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) My Music by GuillermoVera
Really loved this piece, wonderfully written. You have defined your love for music in a very pleasant way, with "not too much or too little" of words. Well done. Love the simplicity.
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MaryJane
Thu Jul 24 10:10:05 2008

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My Review of Shadowed love by PoeticPirate
Maybe alittle short, you could elaborate on your feelings alittle more. You can't quite feel the depth of your feelings with the so little words that you use. I think you could add some more to this piece, but other than that I enjoyed.
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MaryJane
Mon Jul 14 09:23:47 2008

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My Review of I'm Gonna Miss You by tenderangel
Really enjoyed, excellent description and expression.
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MaryJane
Mon Jul 14 08:57:31 2008

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My Review of Sad Girl by War_Machine
Wonderful use of words, and great description. You have a few grammar errors though I would check that out and revise.
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MaryJane
Sun Jul 13 23:41:38 2008

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My Review of If this is What it Takes by RichieRich
Really love this, absolutely adore everything about this poem.
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MaryJane
Fri Jul 4 11:58:29 2008

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My Review of Disappointed by War_Machine
You can defenitly feel the emotions you are dealing with in this piece, I can defenitly feel the disapointment as well. Very strong, and very powerful. I would remove the paragraph " and she's gone away ..." as I believe you don't need to repeat it so many times, I think you should use that paragraphy only once in this piece.
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MaryJane
Fri Jul 4 11:45:47 2008

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My Review of " I Sit Away " by RichieRich
This one is really deep, I love how you've managed to say so much with so little words. I'm really impressed. I love it.
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MaryJane
Fri Jul 4 11:42:22 2008

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My Review of I want you by RichieRich
mhm ... I love it anthony!
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MaryJane
Wed Jul 2 18:41:56 2008

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My Review of Our home grown Dew by PoeticPirate
Great write.
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MaryJane
Tue Jul 1 00:10:14 2008

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My Review of Heaven's Missing An Angel by RichieRich
luvs it
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MaryJane
Tue Jul 1 00:07:58 2008

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My Review of " You're My Everything " by RichieRich
I'm speechless ... I absolutely adore
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MaryJane
Tue Jul 1 00:05:14 2008

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My Review of Please forgive me by RichieRich
Love it
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 26 12:08:09 2008

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My Review of Your Illusions by Jay098
Great way of expressing your hurt, this speaks with alot of emotions I like that , but I would maybe change the last line as the words that you use are kind of powerless and don't really match up with the stlye of the rest of it.
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 26 12:02:53 2008

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My Review of THIS IS ME!!! by carolann
I really liked this, it's brief but it says alot. It's uplifting, great way of expressing who you are, and your love for poetry.
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 26 11:59:16 2008

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My Review of Remember This!! by carolann
Enjoyed it I like that it conveys a powerful message with so little words only thing is I think you could of ended it alittle different. I find the words used in the last two sentences are almost powerless compared to the rest.
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MaryJane
Sat Jun 21 14:45:02 2008

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My Review of Thank You Mom!! by carolann
Great work, it's short but yet it still says alot. I really like this a great tribute.
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MaryJane
Sat Jun 21 12:15:33 2008

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My Review of Mother by Angel22
This is defenitly a lovely tribute to a mother but I feel as though their is not enough being said when you can say so much. I think you need to add some more verses, I don't think the reader gets to feel the appreciation that one has for a mother.
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