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MaryJane
Tue Jan 6 23:42:51 2009

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My Review of Letting Go by AncientOne
Very nice, I enjoyed. Great write!
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MaryJane
Wed Dec 24 03:19:33 2008

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My Review of If Only by HPGreg
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Wow I truly loved this, so sentimental and spoken straight from the heart! Great job!
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MaryJane
Fri Dec 19 14:06:11 2008

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My Review of How did it feel? by SailTheFail
Wow really powerful, emotional questions. This is a topic I myself don't take very lightly, I am also aware of how many people in this life do take their own lives, and how many more will. It's terrible for the ones who are left to deal with such a gruesome loss, it's just terrible.
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MaryJane
Fri Dec 19 11:11:07 2008

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My Review of My Heart by JustDanielle
Wow, I really love the beginning, it's absolutely perfect but the ending is alittle weak compared to the expression and feelings in the beginning. I would def. change the last two lines as they seem to make this piece alittle light when it's actually quite a deep poem/topic, other than that great write!
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MaryJane
Fri Dec 19 11:07:54 2008

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My Review of MISS YOU by JustDanielle
Love this, very well expressed and written. Great write!
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MaryJane
Mon Dec 15 14:53:46 2008

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My Review of Karma by agreatpoetj06
Yes karma is def. a bitch. What goes around ALWAYS comes back around. Great expression and emotion. Well said, great job!
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MaryJane
Wed Dec 10 03:22:24 2008

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My Review of Haunted by Mystique
Great questions, I think alot of us deal with the same issues. I love how you've said quite alot with so little of words. Grammar and sentence structure might be alittle off though, other than excellent.
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MaryJane
Wed Dec 10 03:18:59 2008

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My Review of Just Me by Mystique
I really loved how you started it, very poweful. I also really love the honesty of your emotions and the flow. I almost imagined it ending in a rather different way though. It seems as though it ends alittle eprubtly as though you could of gone on for another verse or so, other than that great work!
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MaryJane
Tue Nov 18 13:11:03 2008

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My Review of My Heart Never Left!! by carolann
I really enjoyed this. It's quite an emptional piece, but my only complaint would be that it seems to not have a deeper impact than I would have expected or liked. It seems like you've only scratch the surface when you could of elaborated alittle more on the subject, maybe used deeper words ... but that's just me I guess ... lol.
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MaryJane
Tue Nov 18 13:06:16 2008

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My Review of Happy Thankdgiving To My Family by carolann
Very nice. Wonderful feelings of gratitude.
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MaryJane
Sun Nov 16 14:30:39 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) Leave by GuillermoVera
I really like these short pieces, there's some kind of magic in not saying so much. I really loved the beginning I love the emotion in it, but the end is alittle weak to me personally. I almost feel as though the words you chose to use are not powerful enough ...like maybe not the right choice words. The ending makes the subject and the piece seem quite nonchalant ...
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MaryJane
Sun Nov 16 14:22:56 2008

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My Review of (Ja_B) Blink by GuillermoVera
Loved it! Truly amazing.
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MaryJane
Sat Nov 8 15:46:47 2008

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My Review of The Diary of A Love Struck Teenager by Black_Paint
Wow, I really enjoyed this. I really love the repitition in this, it completly makes this poem what it is. Great flow and choice of words, great rythm as well. Love it.
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MaryJane
Tue Oct 28 13:25:41 2008

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My Review of YOU by poetrymaz
I love the emotions that you write with here. I love the depth and sincerity as well. Great expression and rythm as well. Beautiful.
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MaryJane
Tue Oct 28 13:22:32 2008

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My Review of The Worst Poet by poetrymaz
This was absolutely amazing, I love the charisma about this piece. Great expression and great rythm as well. Quite a powerful piece. Great Job!
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MaryJane
Sat Oct 18 14:12:08 2008

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My Review of Daisy by SailTheFail
Wow this is literally one of my favorite pieces as of yet. Very very beautiful. I love the choice of words that you've used and again I like how you say so little but yet so much. This is quite a gem. Excellent.
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MaryJane
Sat Oct 18 14:09:05 2008

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My Review of If You Ever by SailTheFail
I really enjoyed this piece. I like how it's really short and brief but still very powerful. I like the ryhming that you've intergrated always makes a poem that much more fun, and interesting. Great piece, I loved it.
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MaryJane
Sat Oct 18 14:05:54 2008

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My Review of Just Fall Girl by SailTheFail
This was really great, I love the emotion in this piece as well as the depth and sincerity. Very well expressed. Great job.
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MaryJane
Thu Oct 16 13:08:55 2008

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My Review of What Was Once Dark Can Always Follow The Light by ClarkthePoet
This was quite impressive. I love the flow, the rythm and the ryhme in this piece. I like how it's really short but it says so much. I also love the message about this piece. Great work.
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MaryJane
Thu Oct 16 13:05:33 2008

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My Review of Sent From Heaven Above, The Only One I Have Ever Truly Loved by ClarkthePoet
I really liked this, and I can def. feel where your coming from. I think I've been at the same place at one time in my life ... I really like the honesty of your emotions in this piece, great expression. Wonderful.
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MaryJane
Thu Oct 16 13:02:35 2008

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My Review of Nothing Will Ever Stop Me From Loving You by ClarkthePoet
Love it. I love the sincerity in this piece. I like the authentcy as well, it seems like it just flows straight from the heart, I really like that. Great job.
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MaryJane
Mon Oct 13 18:51:19 2008

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My Review of Lone Friend by SailTheFail
I really liked this, I love the originality in this piece. You def. highlight parts of what it's like to have to live in this way and in this type of situation. I like the emotion and truth that you use in this piece. I really enjoyed this. Well done!
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MaryJane
Sat Oct 11 17:41:53 2008

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My Review of The Doors Of Life!!! by carolann
Very nice, quite short but you've managed to say quite abit in so little words ... Great work
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MaryJane
Sat Oct 11 17:39:13 2008

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My Review of Where Is The Girl I Once Knew? by carolann
I can def. relate to this piece. I think we all lose ourselves at times ... I really liked this, great work.
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MaryJane
Fri Oct 10 12:25:30 2008

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My Review of Relation in a Ship by Karrie53
Hmm I think this piece thoughit is a little plain and boring.... The subject matter is there and you write with emotion emotion but I think you need to add some more verses and maybe go alittle deeper into it. I think you need to elaborate alittle more because I don't think there is enough being said here.
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