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MaryJane
Tue Jun 23 10:12:30 2009

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My Review of So many things in this life by Monty
Wow what a beautiful write, and so true, they say that "the best things in life are free" and I completly agree with that. You clearly described that here in a great intriguing way. Great write!!
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MaryJane
Sun Jun 21 15:05:43 2009

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My Review of Ink Clot by LifeScene
Great work, a very imaginative way to describe heartache and loss, I absolutely love that. I love the uniqueness of this piece and it's originality. I think that it takes true talent to make this subject intriguing because it is a subject that is so often wrote about that it takes something really special to not make it once again interesting and fresh. Great work, You are truly gifted!
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MaryJane
Sun Jun 21 14:59:55 2009

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My Review of Faith by LifeScene
Wow these are absolutely beautiful lyrics, I really wish I could write half as well as you in this. I love the flow and the rythm and I love the ryhming as well. Great choice of words, and great emotional expression I always look for that in any kind of writing. I am truly impressed and you are truly talented. Great Job!!
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MaryJane
Sat May 9 16:30:57 2009

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My Review of My Soul by Leopassion7
Sometimes we look outside of ourselves for some validation, we look to others to tell us that we are amazing and that we are worth a damn, but like you I have learned to value myself not because of what others think but because of what I think of myself. It is never too late to make a new beginning. You go girl!
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MaryJane
Sat May 9 16:26:56 2009

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My Review of Life -vs- Me by Leopassion7
Hmm I can honestly say that I feel deeply for you here. It seems as though sometimes in life we are just handing some 'bad' cards, and I believe that we should play them as best we can. I believe we are handed lessons to learn from, and trials and tribulations to make us strong. We are defeated and sometimes we lose so that we learn to appreciate more and not take anything or anyone we care for for granted. I believe that everything happens for a reason ... even when were not wise enough to see it. Keep the faith love, I hope God will see you through.
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MaryJane
Sun May 3 16:19:21 2009

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My Review of I am closing my feelings by anna_marques
Great write girl, I admire your strength here. To be able to close the door to the past, and not wallow in what could of been takes strength. Love the emotions in this piece as well, great depth and uniqueness! I really enjoyed this. Keep on writing!!
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MaryJane
Tue Apr 28 15:24:41 2009

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My Review of Black Fallen by xfallen
I love the uniqueness and originality to this piece, your def. one of a kind in your writing and I can appreciate that very much. Great emotional expression I can feel just where your coming from, great flow and great use of language. Well done I am truly impressed!
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MaryJane
Mon Apr 27 16:06:34 2009

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My Review of Take my Breath a way! by anna_marques
Wow I love how this piece seems unrefined and I guess you could say 'raw'. I honestly have a personal preferences for pieces like that/this. Your emotions in this piece are very strong and out there and that's the best part here, however there is no structure and that takes away alot , other than that great write!
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MaryJane
Mon Apr 27 15:59:18 2009

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My Review of * I Love Him * by anna_marques
What a sweet write this is right here, I absolutely love it and absolutely feel for this person. Your emotional expression is wonderful and you haven't left out any important details here, you've really made the reader feel you and feel where your coming from. Great use of language as well and great flow/rythm. Loved it! Keep writing!
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MaryJane
Sun Apr 26 15:38:43 2009

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My Review of Your lifes been hard by JustDanielle
Wow great piece girl! I really loved this, great expression I can feel just what your saying right here. I can so relate to this piece, I have def. been here before in my life and it's hard to be in a place like this but you just got to keep pressing on and hopefully you will see brighter days. Great write, keep writing!!
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MaryJane
Sun Apr 26 15:30:52 2009

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My Review of The Scent of You by Leopassion7
Great write, and I completly agree with you. My ex-boyfriends smell used to drive me crazy!! I really Like the brevity of this piece and great use of words and rythm. For some reason I tend to enjoy shorter pieces rather than looooong ones with unnessecary information and just to much details. This is great, there's not to much being said here and also not to little. Love your work!!! Keep writing!!!
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MaryJane
Sat Apr 11 13:33:25 2009

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My Review of So it's Your birthday today by chocoletdrop052
Truly a beautiful piece right here. I can def. feel the love in here, it is so touching and honest and sincere, I wish that someone would write such a beautiful piece like this one about ME lol! Great emotional expression, great flow and a great choice/use of words. Well done and a HAPPY BIRTHDAY to your wonderful firstborn!!!
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MaryJane
Thu Apr 9 15:48:03 2009

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My Review of My Jewel by Linkop
Wooooowww I'd honestly have to say that I am SPEECHLESS, I don't even know what to say. This took my breath away and I feel absolutely honored to have the privilige to have read such a great piece as this one right here! Where did you come up with this?? This was so beautiful, but the best part is the very beginning. I love how you can feel such the 'protection' and 'love' that all mother's inevitably have for the daughters. Absolutely love the title of this as well!!! I'm taken away!!!
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MaryJane
Thu Apr 9 15:27:04 2009

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My Review of If I were God by Linkop
Wow this is absolutely phenomenal!! I loved it, I loved every bit of it. I loved the honesty in your expressions, and the way it seems to flow so freely and naturally. I think it's just perfect, you've clearly touched my heart with this piece. I couldn't of said it better, def. one of the best I've read today!! Great write!!!
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MaryJane
Tue Apr 7 16:00:19 2009

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My Review of A Tear by MindofaPoet
Real deep and raw emotions in this piece, seems like you've sunk to the bottom and their is no way out. I can so relate to this piece you've def. told my story here. I love the rythm and the ryhming in this piece and I also love the choice of words and structure. I love a poem that I can really feel what the writer was feeling while writing the poem. Great emotional expression, it was what I wa slooking for.
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MaryJane
Sat Mar 28 13:28:32 2009

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My Review of He s Free by smilton17
Must of took alot of courage to write this. This truly brought tears to my eyes, I will never know the pain you can feel from losing a child and I hope that I'll never have to experience such pain and suffering. In dffucult times like these it helps to share your story and your suffering with the world and I encourage you do to so. I am truly and deeply sorry for your loss. This piece is absolutely beautiful. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
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MaryJane
Mon Mar 23 13:20:59 2009

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My Review of A little too late by My_ink_heart
Typical of everyone man out there .... they only realize what they've had once it's over and done with. I like the brevity in this piece. I love the strength you display as well, seems like you have made a decision and you will stick to it I admire that very much. I beliece you coukd have perhaps added some ryhming to maybe make it more interesting, and maybe alittle more exciting. Maybe structure it alittle better as well. Great write!!!
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MaryJane
Fri Mar 20 20:06:31 2009

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My Review of Because I love you by PRINCESSAMBBY
Great write, I love the originality in this piece. I like how you express this subject with subtly in it's emotion and feeling. You make it seem quite light, because it's hard to give yourself to someone fully without being afraid of falling flat on your face. Not to mention standing your ground and living your beliefs when other people tell you otherwise is hard so congratulations. Great work!
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MaryJane
Sat Mar 7 21:05:53 2009

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My Review of Betrayed by Deadserious
Great rythm and ryhme. Great expression and love the emotions that you potray or/and write with. I def. know how it feels to be in that type of situation as I have been there once before and it def. sucks. But regardless of all that you've got to keep the faith or you'll end up like me cruel and bitter. hehe ...... andddd that aint too great .... at all.
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MaryJane
Sat Jan 10 16:16:00 2009

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My Review of Looking Ahead by treeboston
Yes, your defenitly right on that one! Great write, loved it!
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MaryJane
Thu Jan 8 04:27:42 2009

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My Review of Morning Time is Near by KeithJay
Defenitly The Best I Have Read So Far!!!
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MaryJane
Thu Jan 8 04:26:55 2009

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My Review of Morning Time is Near by KeithJay
Heeyy Great write, truly uplifting and inspiring! I loved it!
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MaryJane
Thu Jan 8 04:23:03 2009

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My Review of Angel in my Pocket by KeithJay
Great write. A wonderful tribute for a women! I completly agree!
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MaryJane
Tue Jan 6 23:45:37 2009

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My Review of Certainty by AncientOne
Really nice, Loved it.
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MaryJane
Tue Jan 6 23:43:54 2009

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My Review of Love Unbound by AncientOne
Very nice. Great write.
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