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MaryJane
Mon Aug 24 14:39:33 2009

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My Review of Sunrise by mugenpower89
Whoa, absolutely beautiful!!! Very romantic and infact breathtaking!! This is def. one of my favorites around and as well as the best. Keep it up, absolutely loved it!!
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MaryJane
Wed Aug 19 14:21:10 2009

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My Review of So Very Lonely by ThePriestess
I guess deep down inside we are all so very much the same, it kind of funny how you think you'll never move on(and perhaps some of us don't) but most of us do and we begin to realize that it wasnt all that bad and we can survive long after we thought we'd die. All the heartbreak and hardships making us stronger and better. Loved this piece!
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MaryJane
Wed Aug 19 14:17:35 2009

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My Review of It Seemed I Didn't Care by ThePriestess
Lmao!!! You know your very on point with the ' I thought I was going to die If I couldn't have him' . It reminds me of myself and my first love, I can't seem to let go and move on but you learn that after you've believed you cannot go on you do and things change and get better, which is wonderful. Love this piece, great description only thing is I thing you should of added alittle more as you really don't get the feel and despair of the situation, other than that loved it!
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MaryJane
Thu Aug 13 19:42:11 2009

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My Review of A Deserving Woman by ClayEnos
Very touching and very sincere I absolutely love that. I also really like the simplicity to this piece. Love the flow and the ryhming as well, we defenitly can feel that this is a real kind of love between you two and/or for you wife, I admire it. Great piece keep it up!!
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MaryJane
Sun Aug 9 18:54:44 2009

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My Review of A Cycle of Hate by wayneleon
Wow you are so right with this piece right here it is very sad and it truly brought some tears to my eyes to just know how right you really are. I really love the structuring of this piece it is quite unqiue and original, love the ryhmes and the choice of words. Very well done I absolutely loved it!
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MaryJane
Sat Aug 8 14:16:55 2009

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My Review of My Bottle and Me by simplisticwriter
This is one great write, very very well done, everything about it. The only thing is I guess the alcohol addiction that you are suffering it is a terrible terrible addiction and it destroys life's and tears family's apart I hope that you are free from this now or will be soon I know you've got the strength to oversome the addiction!
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MaryJane
Sun Aug 2 17:43:10 2009

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My Review of I Am The Breath by wayneleon
HHmm this is pretty deep, I really like it I have percieved it as a "dark kind of love poem" I am not sure whether my perception is right however I am infatuated by this poem. Absolutely loved you are a very talented person, keep it up!!
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MaryJane
Sun Aug 2 17:37:47 2009

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My Review of No More Time To Think by wayneleon
Wow this is really well done, very well expressed great flow and ryhtm and I love the ryhming. I love the severity of this piece and the darkness as well. I am absolutely impressed, please keep it up!
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MaryJane
Sat Aug 1 13:10:32 2009

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My Review of Two Angel Miracles by Amandamic21
How terribly terribly sad, life is cruel somtimes ... but no matter what I guess we must endure and be strong and keep moving on. This piece is very well expressed, and very straightforward I like that, a great flow and great use/ choice of words/language. Very well done, thanks for sharing.
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MaryJane
Thu Jul 30 10:57:13 2009

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My Review of Sick Sad World by TheTinGirl
HmM it sounds like a song to me, I really liked the depth of this piece and I can so relate to it as well, you are so so right! The only thing is perhaps a few more lines in your verses or maybe an extra verse somewhere ... other than that a absolutely great write!
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MaryJane
Tue Jul 28 16:15:51 2009

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My Review of Some place else by Peaches
I def. feel for you here, I truly know what it's like to feel that way ... I really liked the depth of emotions that is portrayed through your words and you painted quite a vivid picture of what it's like to feel sad and hopeless. Absolutely a great write, only thing I would suggest is perhaps adding a few more line... Other than that a Great write
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MaryJane
Tue Jul 28 16:09:34 2009

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My Review of Changes by Peaches
HhMmm it is pretty impressive, makes you ponder quite alot in just those 7 short lines. I really like it and I think it needs no adjusting particularly because it seems to be written straight from and with your emotions and I truly admire that!! A wonderful write!
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MaryJane
Mon Jul 27 14:44:08 2009

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My Review of With The Opposite Sex...Friends Is Where It Ends by ThePriestess
I feel so sorry for you here, and it truly sucks how men are sometimes. I've lost all faith in men cause of someone who broke my heart and I swore I would never love again but you grow out of that and you realize that you will not stop your life and your love for one man. Great write!
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MaryJane
Sat Jul 25 15:39:43 2009

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My Review of I Choose To Embrace Life by Amandamic21
You are absolutely right life is truly a gift and like you said although it isn't always fair and it isn't always easy we must still celebrate the journey, and be grateful. A very inspiring and uplifting write. Great job!
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MaryJane
Thu Jul 23 13:03:26 2009

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My Review of Breaking Down by TheTinGirl
Whoa now this was one powerful write. It cut me straight to the heart. I feel very sad for you here, and it's funny how you seem to remind me of myself here maybe when I was just a few years younger. This piece is very well written, great job. Good use of language and good structure as well. Love the simplicity to it, and the straightfowardness. Great write!
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MaryJane
Mon Jul 20 15:43:33 2009

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My Review of Break the glass by TheTinGirl
I can so relate to this piece and it seems like alot of us can. I think we are all fighting a hard battle and yet we are all also in the same boat together. I guess that is life. This was very well expressed, great use of grmmar and language as well they only thing is the structure, I believe you should have put some paragraphs ... it's makes it easier to look at and read other than that great write
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MaryJane
Sun Jul 19 15:47:45 2009

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My Review of Sweet Revenge by Downeygirl
Lmao!! I loved this, somehow it's kinda empowering to/for me. Great expression, rythm and ryhming, you really got a knack for this kind of stuff it seems. Like the use of grammar and the structuring as well. I love the attitude and the " I couldn't care less about you anymore" vibe. Great job I absolutely love this!!
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MaryJane
Fri Jul 17 11:56:15 2009

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My Review of ****17 Signs That You REally Like Someone*** by agreatpoetj06
Lol! This is def. accurate and on point, I liked it alot. Loved the little part of humor about missingnumber twelve, you almost got me there (hehehe)
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MaryJane
Sun Jul 12 14:15:08 2009

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My Review of A F**ked Life by ThePriestess
I am wondering whether this is a personal poem or not ... it does seem quite negative and dark .. how sad and depressing but very poetic indeed Lol! Great rhyme and great flow and emotional expression, I def. feel for you here.
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MaryJane
Sat Jul 4 14:16:40 2009

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My Review of Philosophy Behind My Future by ThePriestess
Very inspiring and uplifting, and the message is so true really for all of those who don't believe and think that their future's lie in someone else's hands well they are wrong. Very wrong only we have the ability to shape our future as we please. Great write, and very well expressed, really enjoyed this piece.
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MaryJane
Sat Jul 4 14:12:54 2009

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My Review of If Only I Had A Manual by ThePriestess
You know I think you have spoken for all the mothers out there. Being a mother is the hardest job on this planet .. it really is, and I have so much repect for every mother out there. This piece is really well written and expressed, your very on point right here. Great write, I enjoyed it!
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MaryJane
Sat Jul 4 14:07:52 2009

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My Review of No Sense by ThePriestess
HmM this is quite an interesting write, and I SO feel the same as you. This world doesn't seem to FUNCTION correctly to me, it seems that this life is unfair and most of all unfair to all of the GOOD people out there as well as the kind. I wait for the day that us GOOD people will prosper and the EVIL & WICKED will finally get what they deserve ...
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MaryJane
Fri Jul 3 12:50:29 2009

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My Review of Most Precious Gifts Of All by Amandamic21
It seems that often times alot of us forget what we have and the beauty that is around us everywhere. Life is really precious, and we should be grateful for it. I'm really thankful for this piece, and for your reminder of how precious life really is and what a gift it is be alive. Great write!
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 25 15:33:40 2009

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My Review of My Life! by Deadserious
I absolutely feel where you are coming from on this subject, as I have had my share of those people. The ryhming is exceptional in this piece, I love that you've incorparated that here, I think it always makes poetry more intriguing plus it is not so easy to ryhme like that, it takes talent so I really admire that. I can really feel the emotions here that you write with as well. This poem is absolutely excellent my only 'personal' complaint would be that it's perhaps alittle too long and maybe alittle repititive in certain areas .... Great work!
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MaryJane
Thu Jun 25 15:22:51 2009

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My Review of Fake Living by TheTinGirl
I am awe struck by the depth of this piece. It's so real, and their is no inhibitions to telling it like it is in this piece whether people like it or not. I admire that and I admire you for that! Great expression in this, you've painted quite a vivid picture for me. Just keep your head up and keep hope alive ...
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