melissa Fri Oct 8 17:40:36 2010 Helpful: My Review of tkme4grntd by tkme4grntd Great lyrics, very well expressed. Very easy to read and like you said straight forward, I like that! Keep writing I look forward to reading more from you in the future. visible melissa Fri Oct 8 17:37:31 2010 Helpful: My Review of I Can Hear You Suffering in Silence by tkme4grntd These are really excellent lyrics I can hear invision the song and the music with these lyrics and I can defenitly tell you that it would be nothing less than a hit!! Great job and keep it up, I look forward to reading more from you in the future! visible melissa Wed Oct 6 03:44:33 2010 Helpful: My Review of Love Condemned by bianca WOW! One of the best I have read of yours. A favorite of mine of all poetry I have read. Honestly! Very original piece, love the structure, the ryhming, the rythm, the choice of language. Vivid images and description, went straight to the heart. Absolutely loved it!! I want to see more like this one right here in the future. visible melissa Wed Sep 22 02:24:09 2010 Helpful: My Review of Mirrored Moments by JonLondon Very well done. Great expression and great flow. Keep it up! visible melissa Wed Sep 15 16:20:38 2010 Helpful: My Review of GANGSTA by JonLondon Very well done! Great flow and rythm as usual, great expression and use/choice of words/language. You are a very talented writer, keep it up! I look forward to reading some exceptional work from you in the future! Take care! visible melissa Tue Sep 7 00:10:04 2010 Helpful: My Review of :::R:::A:::I:::N::: by JonLondon Such a beautiful write, you are truly gifted! You have a wonderful way with words, rythm and flow keep it up! I look forward to reading more!! visible melissa Thu Aug 12 17:48:43 2010 Helpful: My Review of Hansel And Gretel by JonLondon Very well done, you are a very talented writer I admire you. I really love the way you've turned this story into a poem and made it ryhme and flow so easily! An absolutely wonderful piece, keep it up! visible melissa Fri May 7 00:54:27 2010 Helpful: My Review of Outstretched. by TheTinGirl I feel for you in this piece! I really know what it is like to be where you are in this piece. One thing I have learned though is that sometimes life is unfair not just for you but for all of us, and you just got to take the bitter with the sour and just keep moving on and don't let anything or anyone defeat you. Ever. Hard times can make you a much stronger person and in the end that just might be what you need. Keep pressing on it will get better I promise, good times lay ahead! Keep the faith in God, he will se you through! visible melissa Wed Mar 31 18:12:41 2010 Helpful: My Review of You Only Live Once by Love A great quote indeed! You are absolutely right and on point! Life is short and the reality of life is that we are handed some good and also some bad and we have to take it and make the best out of it! Great quote thanx for sharing! visible melissa Sun Mar 14 21:52:05 2010 Helpful: My Review of Happiness by madandmatkeene Wonderful description I couldn't have said it better! I really admire your personal opinion of what happiness consists of it is very innocent and selfless almost ... A great write here keep it up! visible melissa Sun Mar 14 21:44:20 2010 Helpful: My Review of Bliss by vintucci Oh yea I loved this one very descriptive and intoxicating words! Love the sincerity and the erotic feel to this one! Great job keep it up! visible melissa Sun Mar 14 21:42:04 2010 Helpful: My Review of Beauty by vintucci I def. enjoyed this one! Good description and a good flow as well, you have def. described the beauty of a women perhaps inside and out! Great job keep it up! visible melissa Tue Mar 9 15:18:39 2010 Helpful: My Review of ON DAYS I DO NOT THINK OF MY SELF by Lloyd Very powerful words indeed and I couldn't agree with you more I think we are all the same deep down inside really. I hope that one day we can all learn to accept ourselves and love ourselves fully inspite of ourselves lol! Great write and well written! visible melissa Tue Mar 9 15:13:16 2010 Helpful: My Review of Feelings by spirit99 Hhmm to not be a ble to experience all those "negative" feelings would be a great thing indeed I often wish I would no longer feel some emotions mysellf. Good job! visible melissa Tue Mar 9 15:11:14 2010 Helpful: My Review of A girls world by spirit99 Lol ... I can def. say that alot of us have been at this point in our life sometime or another I know I have. I like this poem alot I like the flow of it and how it is written in a story like form slowly revealing more details of a broken hearted girl as you go along! Very well done I enjoyed it! visible melissa Mon Feb 22 20:08:34 2010 Helpful: My Review of Butterflies by XcherriesX I can def. relate to this piece as I believe many thers can as well. It really hurts to like someoe and have them not feel the same way as you do. I like the straightforwardness of this piece and I really like that youve kept it short. A vey good rythm and a rhyme to it! Great job! visible melissa Mon Feb 15 22:31:52 2010 Helpful: My Review of Self judgement( through my boyfriends eyes) by indiechick Woowww what an absolutely sweet write! It's a piece that is filled with love, passion and sincerity it is so complimenting. I am envious of the admiration that this person seems to have for you! visible melissa Fri Oct 9 19:37:08 2009 Helpful: My Review of Love... by rallyman3 An absolutely lovely heartfelt write! I really love the beginning and how it starts off, flows very nicely and freely. I also love the sincerity to this piece it seems somewhat romantic ..strong beginning and yet the ending doesnt grab me as much as the beginning ..but either way it was a lovely write! Keep it up!! visible melissa Mon Oct 5 14:14:14 2009 Helpful: My Review of I'll be there by FloridaGirlx09 Oh yes I've heard of that type of story before .. it really does suck to always be betrayed and let down but those you trusted. I like how you kept this really short, very powerful and straightforward I like that alot. I really enjoyed this one alot only thing I would change is perhaps adding a few different words/changing a few words in the last paragraph. Something that could make it alittle more severe so to speak maybe add a line or two, other than that, loved it! Great job! visible melissa Mon Oct 5 14:09:39 2009 Helpful: My Review of 9-27-09 by FloridaGirlx09 You are absolutely right life is short, there is only enough time to love eachother, be happy and appreciate everything you are and everything you have. Don't take one second for granted..always be positive and keep your head up. Great write full of truth, very powerful! visible melissa Tue Sep 22 20:22:02 2009 Helpful: My Review of Something About You by williamwk2 I really like this piece right here! It almost seems to me that you can actually convert this into a song .. add a few more verses and paragraphs put in a chorus somewhere.It would def. make an amazing song, you should try it! Great write, loved it keep it up!! visible melissa Sun Sep 13 20:08:52 2009 Helpful: My Review of Op. 27 by TheTinGirl Love this piece right here I admire that your writing always seems to have a freestyle feel to it, like it was written right there and then maybe no editing and re-writing yet I believe you'd have that type of talent to do that. Maybe you should try writing a freestyle piece. I love the feel of this piece and it's 'depth' don't know if that's the right word..?? Great write, I look forward to reading some more from you!! visible melissa Mon Aug 24 14:39:33 2009 Helpful: My Review of Sunrise by mugenpower89 Whoa, absolutely beautiful!!! Very romantic and infact breathtaking!! This is def. one of my favorites around and as well as the best. Keep it up, absolutely loved it!! visible melissa Wed Aug 19 14:21:10 2009 Helpful: My Review of So Very Lonely by ThePriestess I guess deep down inside we are all so very much the same, it kind of funny how you think you'll never move on(and perhaps some of us don't) but most of us do and we begin to realize that it wasnt all that bad and we can survive long after we thought we'd die. All the heartbreak and hardships making us stronger and better. Loved this piece! visible melissa Wed Aug 19 14:17:35 2009 Helpful: My Review of It Seemed I Didn't Care by ThePriestess Lmao!!! You know your very on point with the ' I thought I was going to die If I couldn't have him' . It reminds me of myself and my first love, I can't seem to let go and move on but you learn that after you've believed you cannot go on you do and things change and get better, which is wonderful. Love this piece, great description only thing is I thing you should of added alittle more as you really don't get the feel and despair of the situation, other than that loved it! visible

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