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southernbelle
Sun Mar 26 16:54:35 2017

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My Review of Angel Thy Love Swims by PoetGLG123
Ahh such a beautiful setting you have chosen for the lovers to be intimate in my darlin' friend. A lovely cabin-which I adore firstly ...then coupled with a downy snow and the warmth and romance of a fireplace and you have captured what TRUE romance is about to this country girl from the beginning so loved this beautiful lil' gem for sure! Big country hugs and smiles to you...Mary

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southernbelle
Thu Mar 23 18:42:43 2017

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My Review of To All The Strangers by michaelgallatin
Kind is your heart
Mike my friend this shows through your words that you indeed have a very kind heart and soul! I like to think that most people or should I say that all people would be kind to a homeless soul and try to be friends to them in some way at least by giving them a lil' change or food or a cold or warm drink or clothes if need be ,maybe even shelter somehow or a kind ear and friendly smile and conversation once in awhile.My mama always taught us to try to be kind and look for good in all people and help them and you my friend showed a bit of kindness to help this feller have a kind memory of you just as you will hold one of him.Bless your heart for doing so....Mary

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southernbelle
Sun Mar 19 18:23:08 2017

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My Review of Rise Up by taylor12
Dear Taylor my friend... you have chosen a wonderful heartfelt song and video and as I had thought about this subject myself as to if something were to happen to me I had always felt also that I didn't want my family members to be around.I didn't want them to be put through the anguish of watching my life deteriorate .I know they wouldn't agree with me on this but it's how I feel.The thought of seeing their faces with sadness as they had to watch me my health go down hill is more than I care to deal with so I agree with you my friend.Their suffering would be more than my own.

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southernbelle
Sun Oct 2 12:14:56 2016

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My Review of 435. I Want To Wake Up With You by Profanisaurus
Very beautiful...
So gentle and soft your hearts words flow down the page my friend like an angels feathers floating on a warm heavenly breeze searching for the one true love they are meant for...be still and let her hearts whispers find you my friend be patient.Your lady love will come to you.

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southernbelle
Fri Jul 15 13:47:14 2016

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My Review of WHO IS 'HE'? by kitty
So true
are your hearts words my lil' friend Kitty! The Lord God is the one and only true friend .Some may not believe this to be true but it is the truth.He will never forsake nor leave you! Beautiful write lil' one...Bravo!

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southernbelle
Fri Jul 15 13:39:14 2016

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My Review of INSIDE OUT by kitty
Ahhh
Kitty my lil' one this is one perfect lil' gem of a write you've shared here sweetie! How I do so adore reading what your heart has to say!

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southernbelle
Sat Jan 2 23:15:02 2016

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My Review of A Window to my soul by Vulcan68
Very lovely write my sweet friend...So good to hear from you again...big hugs and warm smiles to you as always...

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southernbelle
Sun Nov 8 20:21:22 2015

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My Review of Clarence by DarleneD
SL
Dar I know how badly your heart still hurts inside and I know I can't ever take your pain away just like no one else can but you know I love you and your my sister and I'll always be here for you as long as God will allow me to be.Whenever you need me to.... my shoulder is here for you or whenever you need an ear to listen or just to feel loved I am always here.We've been through alot but we'll make it through you and me we came from good stock remember? Love Tot

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southernbelle
Sun Nov 8 20:00:26 2015

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My Review of "Hillbilly" // Part Twenty Four by taylor12
SL FOR JOB WELL DONE
Taylor my friend I loved the way you described Arlins steadfastness and shred way of handling the feller over the dealings with the empty space he wants to rent...the way he TOLD the feller what he would pay him in rent was awesome I loved it! Then the way Nancy prattled on the whole trip back to his mama's place was so funny I could just picture Arlins face through it all and imagine what he was thinking and feel how he wanted to escape this jabber jawwed woman...lol. Brought a smile to my face because it reminded me of an aunt of mine... Gotta SL this one for sure hon'!

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southernbelle
Sun Nov 8 19:46:33 2015

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My Review of "Hillbilly" // Part Twenty Three by taylor12
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Taylor my friend once again you have given myself and all your readers a wonderful peek inside the wonderful lives of the mountain folk and their daily lives and now the love that Gisele has taken in preparing to make sure she welcomes the girls into the clan by lovingly choosing the beds made of down for their comfort and the way Caleb and the boys would build cabins for the newlyweds shows how we country folk always show the love for our kinfolk and help one another always.I do so love this beautiful down home story Taylor as it brings so much of my country life and memories to life for me...Thank you my talented friend!...

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southernbelle
Sat Oct 31 17:26:07 2015

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My Review of Places Unknown by pnknucklez
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Ahh Paul this is raw sensual and primal sex my friend! You have succeeded in showing the reader that sometimes the knowledge and sexiness of an older woman can indeed drive a young man wild and fill his every desire and her kisses can sear his lips and her touch will linger upon his skin to haunt him within his dreams even after they have fallen asleep as she calls out to him ...Beautifully written my friend!

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southernbelle
Sat Oct 31 17:06:29 2015

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My Review of "Hillbilly" // Part Twenty One by taylor12
SL once again
Ahh Taylor my friend you never cease to amaze me with the way your beautiful way you bring your mountain folks to life! So many times I read your lovely chapters and their contents and they bring back so many memories of the past for me with my down home kinfolk and the way it was back in the days our family came to be and it brings tears to my eyes when I read your lovely stories.Bravo sir...well done!

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southernbelle
Sat Oct 31 16:58:58 2015

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My Review of "Hillbilly" // Part Twenty Two by taylor12
Absolutely Beautiful...SL
My God Taylor this is beautiful! I could see everything in my minds eye that you described so perfectly hon'! I loved every single detail you wrote in this beautiful chapter from the shady Character right on down to the shelves in the old stores with all the lovely penny candies and bolts of fabrics and lovely scents and the workers when Gisele brought them the basket of tasty sandwiches and cold lemonade and even the mason jar shine! You are a master of imagery a true fine story teller one of the greats of this time.I am proud of you Taylor and my kin would surely be proud to know you and of you!

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southernbelle
Thu Oct 8 16:33:14 2015

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My Review of 126. Just The Two Of Us by Profanisaurus
Breathtaking
You have a lovely way of painting such a soft image on the canvas of two hearts in love as they walk along the beach the warm sand 'neath their feet ,a soft breeze blowing, the saltiness of the spray from the waves in the night air,beautiful romantic memories two lovers will keep and cherish for the rest of their lives...so very romantic my darlin' friend.You have a lovely gift for romantic writing indeed...I enjoyed perusing your wonderful writing today...

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southernbelle
Thu Oct 8 16:23:06 2015

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My Review of 127. Give Me Not A Rose On Valentine’s Day by Profanisaurus
Very heartfelt
Ahh very gentle and soft my darlin' friend as your hearts words especially in the last stanza say it all. I'm sure you have just melted many a fair maidens heart with your lovely hearts words.Good luck to you.Warm country hugs and soft smiles to you for this lovely write you share...

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southernbelle
Wed Sep 30 10:00:42 2015

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My Review of My Northerly Womb by stevieinbg
Beautifully depicted
write that you have shared my friend of your history and roots...your home through black and white photographs .I can see the time worn faces and the hardship they faced ,their worn shoes and socks of the people you painted so well through your words and the cobbled streets they walked,the places where the children played,and now imagining how through your eyes what it must be to see through the modernization looking back over the pages of time and still seeing the lovely roots, your history of where you came from and marvel. I can visualize it all through your wonderful words. One must always be true to their roots and where they came from and be proud.This is so deserving of being in the SL my friend for all to read and enjoy as I have done so...Big hugs and smiles to you today...

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southernbelle
Wed Sep 30 09:05:55 2015

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My Review of Fragile Mind by stevieinbg
Such sadness
resonates from within your precious hearts words my darlin' friend and a deep loneliness overpoweringly deep! No heart or soul should feel this depth of torture and loneliness and depression ever .One must try to look for beauty within life and find peace even when they think there is none to find. Big hugs and smiles sent your way to brighten your day my lovely friend...

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southernbelle
Mon Sep 28 19:31:36 2015

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My Review of Consequence by stevieinbg
Where did time slip away?
So much to take in from this wonderful write from your hearts words my friend for the mind to ponder.I believe we all have had these very same thoughts as we grow older as we look back on our lives and have some regrets and some things we wish we could've changed or done differently .You have a beautiful gift for sharing what's on your mind and in your heart my friend...keep writing often.Big hugs and smiles to you today...

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southernbelle
Sun Sep 27 07:40:56 2015

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My Review of Alone I Cry by stevieinbg
Such pain...SL
within your hearts words like haunting ghosts that walk sorrowfully with chains through the grand halls of your mind never giving you peace my friend!Your deep longing and need for comfort from the emptiness your soul feels is definitely felt as your heart cries out through your words. So touching and heartfelt where you cry out to God in prayer..{So in this moment
Offer comfort
As I cry
Help soothe this mind
Of bipolar kind
Please God, just try}...

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southernbelle
Sun Sep 27 07:19:56 2015

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My Review of When Compared to Thee by stevieinbg
Simply lovely!
You have a very beautiful way with words and your imagery here is simply lovely my darlin' friend...I just loved stopping by your page this morning! Warm hugs and country smiles to you this gorgeous day my friend...

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southernbelle
Thu Sep 24 15:10:02 2015

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My Review of Wine Bar Chants by pnknucklez
Ahh Paul my friend this sounds fascinating to me! Much different setting than I was accustomed to frequenting back in the 'good ol' days'...lol since I am a country girl I was use to going to a much different type of place where there were country boys and rowdy songs and fights where a feller would lose a tooth or two each night or the bar tender would have to pull out his 357 magnum to settle things down or a biker boy would wanna try to get me to dance and well I would have to fight now and then but I did have my 'rowdy' side...lol.I did so enjoy this lovely write darlin' very much Paul...let me see how the other side gets to 'enjoy' a night out! Big hugs to you hon'....

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southernbelle
Thu Sep 24 14:59:13 2015

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My Review of Revolt by pnknucklez
Paul my darlin' friend you are an amazing young feller and such a talented writer and you certainly have said a mouthful here .Truly one that gives the reader much to think about does it not ?Thank you for sharing these wonderfully deep thoughts with us my young friend! Warm hugs and smiles to you always...

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southernbelle
Wed Sep 23 16:13:17 2015

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My Review of Beyond The Sunset by Silverblue
Simply breathtaking...
Your words are simply breathtaking my friend! They are as soft and gentle as the velvet petals of the Red Rose that blooms and just as sweet.Thank you so much for sharing this lovely romantic write today....

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southernbelle
Wed Sep 23 10:05:48 2015

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My Review of Pages by Silverblue
Very beautiful
Your hearts words are very beautiful my friend as they speak of life's story throughout it's pages.I myself would never want to 'rip out' any pages from the book be they good or bad because they are a big part of my life a part of me my very heart and soul.Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent for all to enjoy my lovely friend! Warm hugs and soft smiles to you today from your country friend....

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southernbelle
Wed Sep 9 17:34:52 2015

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My Review of Slow Dance With Me by JohnR
SL...Tender and beautiful
John this is just too lovely for words...you made this country girl smile for sure with this beauty of a write with it's softness and gorgeous imagery throughout!

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