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ThePriestess
Thu Apr 19 12:46:53 2018

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My Review of Twin Flames by Thirteen
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Hello my name is Timmie. This is the first piece of your writing that i habe gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you For sharing. God job on this one hun. I am not sure who the person is that inspired this creation but that doesn't matter because i enjoyed it nonetheless. I absolutely love too write in free verse. Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Sat Apr 14 01:09:34 2018

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My Review of The Devil's Season by michaelgallatin
,what a great upbeat tempo that played in my head while i read this creation of yours. Thank you For sharing. Great rhyming, excellent flow. Keep up the good work. I shall look forward to seeing more in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Sat Apr 14 00:58:31 2018

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My Review of Something Very Dark by michaelgallatin
Hello. Thank you For sharing this creation of yours. This one is a little dark indeed. The darker the better, i always say. Lol. Keep up the good work and i shall look forward to seeing more in the near future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 15:16:49 2018

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My Review of The Haunting Of Your Vacancy by lyrycsyntyme
Another very deep and thought provoking piece of writing created by you. Thank you For sharing. I love your choice of word play on this one and your metaphors are very clever indeed.
Keep up the good work my friend and i shall look forward to seeing more in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 15:12:09 2018

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My Review of Candles And Creation by lyrycsyntyme
Hello my name is Timmie. I am sure i have read your writing at some point over the years that i have been a member because i recognize your screen name. Thank you For sharing.
This is a pretty powerful poem you have created here. Clap clap to you hun.
Take care and i shall look forward to enjoying more of your creations in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 15:05:50 2018

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My Review of No Escape by Silverblue
Boy, you sure do have a talented pen there my friend. This one is awesome, just like each of your other creations that i have read. Thank you For sharing.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 12:06:10 2018

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My Review of Take another by angrygirl
Thank you for sharing this story. I love the way you approached this one. Very clever indeed hun. Is this a continuing story? I am going to have to stop by your site and find out so that i Can read the rest. Keep up the good work.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:59:29 2018

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My Review of The Fairy and the Frog by PGordonKennedy
Awww poor little meriflur. Minding her own business and singing her little heart out one second Anna then bullfrog food the next lol. Thank you For sharing this story. It is very sad but indeed an enjoyable read.
Take care and i shall loon forward to seeing more of your stories in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:55:25 2018

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My Review of You Don't Know by Silverblue
Wow, what a deep and profound statement you made with this piece of writing. Thank you For sharing Hun. I can completely relate to this one....very much have i been there.
Hugs to you my friend.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:51:52 2018

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My Review of Spring Time. by matelotrod
What a way to start the day huh? Thank you For sharing this piece of writing. I am sorry you got thorned, so to speak, but have to admit your cute little poem really made me laugh.
I hope you have a thorn free day hun and i shall look forward to seeing more of your creations in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:48:03 2018

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My Review of King and Castle by PGordonKennedy
Thank you for sharing this piece of writing. You did a very good job on this one hun. Sad but very very true. The wheel of life never stops turning and eventually we will all be forgotten.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmiea
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:44:35 2018

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My Review of TERRY FOX A CANADIAN HERO by seriouspoet
What an awesome tribute to what sounds to me like a very determined and strong person. Thank you For sharing Hun. Run Terry run!!! Love it.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 13 11:41:55 2018

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My Review of Alcoholic Mystery by matelotrod
Thank you for sharing this piece of writing. This one rings very close to my heart. My son is an alcoholic. In fact he holds the world record for highest blood alcohol level without death. (.645) He did not come out of that one completely though. It put him into a coma and caused brain damage. I am very happy to say that that incident finally opened his eyes and he has been sober now for almost a year. Being hospitalized 13 times in 2 years for alcohol poisoning didn't phase him but this last time sure as hell did.
Anyways thank you and i shall look forward to seeing more of your creations in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Thu Apr 12 13:02:33 2018

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My Review of The Sword of Glass by PGordonKennedy
What a great story you have created here my friend. Bravo to you. Thank you For sharing. I was on the edge of my seat from start to finish.
You have not asked for a critical review here my friend however i am going to be honest and tell you that i damn near clicked away from this one solely on the way you have chosen to structure it. I am very glad that i didn't though. I would like to highly suggest that you restructure this one my friend so that other readers don't get discouraged and click away.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Thu Apr 12 12:44:09 2018

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My Review of THAT LETTER by kitty
Although i, personally, have never been there, i know too many to count that have. Thank you For sharing this creation of yours. I love the way you approached this one kitty and the way you went about telling your story. Clap clap to you hun.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Thu Apr 12 12:38:46 2018

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My Review of Truth by JohnCreekmore
Now that is what i am talking about there my friend. You have hit the nail on the head. Thank you For sharing this creation of yours. Everyone would benefit from this outstanding read.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Thu Apr 12 12:35:32 2018

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My Review of Vicious Circle by Silverblue
Thank you for sharing hun. You have created a very profound and thought provoking piece of writing here. Clap clap to you.
Take care and i shall definitely look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Wed Apr 11 16:05:26 2018

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My Review of Uncondition the Condition by PGordonKennedy
Thank you for sharing this creation of yours. What a very fun piece this must have been to write. Clap clap to you my friend. There are a couple of spelling/grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed.
Take care, i shall look forward to seeing more in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Wed Apr 11 16:01:43 2018

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My Review of Wish List or Fish List? by matelotrod
Love it my friend! The days seem to be gone for a lot of things that we all treasured so much in our youth.
Thank you For sharing. I shall look forward to seeing more of your creations in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Wed Apr 11 12:04:52 2018

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My Review of Household Disaster by matelotrod
The duty of a man???? WHHHAAAATTTT?! Lol. I will excuse that one considering the difference in age and generation. Lol just kidding my friend. Thank you For sharing.
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Wed Apr 11 11:59:56 2018

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My Review of You are in my heart by heartbeats
Hello muy name is Timmie. This is the first piece of your writing that i habe gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you For sharing. Awww what a sad but lovely little poem you have created here. I think all of us can relate to this one at one point in our lives. You are asking for critical reviews hun so i will highly suggest that you structure this one like a poem should be. Proper structure guides the reader and allows the writer to control the rhythm and flow of the content. There are also a couple of grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Wed Apr 11 11:52:40 2018

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My Review of It was All a Dream, Wasn't It? by PGordonKennedy
Hello my name is Timmie, it is a pleasure to meet you. This is the first piece of your writing that i have gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you For sharing. What a great story you have here. I would however, highly suggest that you structure it properly. There are some typing and grammatical errors but those are easily fixed hun. Keep up the good work and i shall look forward to seeing more of your creations in the near future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Tue Apr 10 17:22:16 2018

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My Review of Do I trust her? by Desmond
Holy shit look who it is. Looking time no see my dear old friend. Hugs to you. I hope life has been treating you and yours well. Thank you For sharing. What an insightful piece you have created here. I can see time has fine tuned that talented pen of yours.
Take care my friend and as always i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the near future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 6 21:40:30 2018

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My Review of DAWN CHORUS by kitty
Does anyone else think it is a little bit hot in here? Lol
Sexy, sexy, sexy my friend. This one drips of loves erotic nectar. Thank you For sharing. You all for critical reviews however there is nothing critical that can be said about this one. Keep up the good work dear and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
Fri Apr 6 21:35:47 2018

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My Review of Ashlee Happy Birthday by missamerica
Hello my name is Timmie, it is a pleasure to meet you. This is the first piece of your writing that i have gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you For sharing. Awww what a lovely poem you have written for your niece, i am sure she will absolutely love it!
Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.
Timmie
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