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Silverblue
Fri Apr 28 05:46:25 2017

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My Review of NO MORE by Rohit
I think there is some very nice imagery used here, and overall this has a good structure and flow to it. You've expressed a sadness and emotion well in your poem, and i feel you put a good amount of effort and work into your piece. There was much to like about your poem, so thanks for sharing your work.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 28 05:01:37 2017

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My Review of Broken Wing by nancyaliciag
Enjoyable and well written piece. I like the rhyme scheme used overall, generally rhyming the first and last lines together, and the second and third lines with each other. The first stanza is almost completely in rhythm, but as a whole, it's a very nice piece, with good flow and imagery. Thanks for a good, if somewhat sad in content, morning read.

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Silverblue
Wed Apr 26 17:58:06 2017

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My Review of Class Reunion by richom
Wonderfully put together this. Must bring to the fore many emotions writing a piece like this. Thinking of the past, and thinking how things are now many years on. The rhythm and flow are just a bonus to the reader, as you let them enjoy your personal feelings given out from this poem. I could be wrong, but I think you might have wanted to put the word 'from' after the word 'years' in the first line of the last stanza. If I'm mistaken apologies. This is a fantastic piece all the same.

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Silverblue
Tue Apr 25 17:43:31 2017

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My Review of The past by sunnisha
This is a really good piece. It has a nice flow to it, along with a good rhythm as well. The imagery and word usage is also strong enough to make it an enjoyable poem for the reader. I agree with your Author notes in many ways as well. A good poem here.

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Silverblue
Sun Apr 23 12:24:29 2017

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My Review of Retire-Expire by matelotrod
This is a very well put together piece that I'm sure would be relatable to many people who have spent a lot of years in a relationship and got to that latter stage of retirement. I'm not at that stage yet, but can still see that this is a poem written with wisdom and experience. I like the fact it has a humorous touch yet can still be viewed with a sense of 'Yes, that seems familiar' in places. A well thought out piece - S/L.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 21 14:15:53 2017

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My Review of Complicated by michaelgallatin
I'd agree with the essence and message of this poem - Adults do tend to overthink things in comparison to a child or maybe a mind that thinks like a child. Perhaps it's because of worrying of what the repercussions could be, or worrying what others may think. Of course this doesn't apply in all cases, but it can do a lot of the time for sure. Good poem this - which many could relate to. I enjoyed this one.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 21 14:11:59 2017

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My Review of The Seasons of My Life by JimSlaughter
Highly enjoyable poem, that really does reflect the writers emotions and feelings. Each stanza contains very good imagery and has a decent flow to it as well. Good title as well - I'll spotlight this one.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 21 14:07:15 2017

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My Review of The Old Wolf by michaelgallatin
I really enjoyed this poem - Wolves are indeed a quite fascinating animal in many ways. A nice smooth, rhythmic poem with an interesting set of Author Notes as well. All told, a very enjoyable piece. One for the S/L.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 21 09:36:08 2017

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My Review of Whole Again by TempestOfNature
Simple, but effective. Sometimes lots of words aren't needed to come express something alluring and appealing. This is a warm and pleasant piece on love.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 21 09:26:58 2017

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My Review of Playing Partners by richom
Great piece this - Excellent rhythm and flow with a humorous touch as well. Unique subject matter as well - the kind of piece you wouldn't come across very often. S/L for this one. I really did enjoy this.

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Silverblue
Thu Apr 20 06:16:07 2017

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My Review of The Music Played ~ trijan refrain by Stella
Very nicely put together with a smooth flow and good imagery. Was good to read the author notes too - helped explain how the poem was composed and put together. Very nice.
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Silverblue
Sat Apr 15 15:18:36 2017

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My Review of Black Horse Rum by BobQuinn
Excellent poem with great imagery and a solid flow and rhythm. To read a poem about rum - very interesting. I used to enjoy rum at one stage - not a drink I have so much nowadays. A great read this one - thoroughly enjoyable.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 14 19:44:43 2017

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My Review of I Sing My Song by JimSlaughter
As much as there are people out there who strive for peace, there are many others who seem to be happy to cause the complete opposite. A very well penned poem with a good message, that sadly isn't heeded by a lot of humankind. I guess it's not that simple, but the notion can't be faulted. Too many people seek too many different things and hold different viewpoints. Alas - agree to disagree doesn't really work enough on planet earth among its people. Thought provoking piece.

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Silverblue
Fri Apr 14 19:38:26 2017

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My Review of Everyday by nancyaliciag
I like the way this is composed - it has a clever rhythm to it, and good imagery to match. I certainly enjoyed this one - a very good poem indeed, with a pleasant and easy flow. Thanks for a nice evening read.

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Silverblue
Thu Apr 13 08:07:45 2017

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My Review of The Magnificent Ibis by Archia
An interesting angle and I liked the way you linked it to society in that you do indeed get differences in people as well as animals, and in your example here - birds. My favourite bird for some reason is the crow. Probably wouldn't be many peoples choice but there you go. A unique write here, and one to make the reader think on.

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Silverblue
Tue Apr 11 07:26:33 2017

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My Review of OODLES OF OO'S by richom
Superbly put together - Excellent innovation and a quite brilliant write. Skilful, enjoyable, and worthy of a spotlight.

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Silverblue
Mon Apr 10 18:41:49 2017

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My Review of The Savage Garden by JimSlaughter
A thought provoking poem indeed. I often think in a similar way to this poem, in that, bad things seem to happen to people for no real or valid reason. Suffering happens - but why? I certainly don't know the answer, that's for sure. Good piece this that deserves a spotlight.

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Silverblue
Sun Apr 9 10:18:48 2017

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My Review of Your Choice by Book-worm14
A rather short piece, but to the point and generally has a good flow and rhythm to it. Keep on writing and honing your writing skills. It will be good to see more of your work in the future.

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Silverblue
Sun Apr 9 10:10:11 2017

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My Review of JULIET TO ROMEO by kitty
Very nicely penned - A lovely romantic flow running through your piece, which is very easy on the readers eye. A poem that can indeed be enjoyed by all ages. Great poem.

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Silverblue
Sat Apr 8 18:58:38 2017

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My Review of The Temple and The Tomb by augustrush
An interesting and intriguing write here - It's good in description, and has an honesty and depth about it. It makes the reader feel as if they are reading about a certain chapter or point in the writers life and way of thinking/feeling. An enjoyable read, and I agree - Introspective would be a good category option.

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Silverblue
Wed Apr 5 13:34:28 2017

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My Review of Memories by annalame
Very good imagery, and the poem has good flow and cadence as well. Some memories can be good, but sadly some can also bring back pain and hurt. Sadly in this case, its the latter. A well penned personal piece. All the best to you.

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Silverblue
Mon Apr 3 20:55:24 2017

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My Review of Relapsed/ 5 years by Lost-Again
I would say that there is a point where physical pain becomes far less then emotional pain. That said, there is no value in harming yourself physically, yet I understand the reasons behind it, and understand that it can be a comfort to some people. We are all so different as people, so to judge or suggest what is right or wrong for any individual is almost impossible, but hopefully with time we can change enough to find other ways to deal with things. Writing can itself be a good way to release feelings and emotions. I think your poem is meaningful and certainly relevant to many people out there.

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Silverblue
Mon Apr 3 20:36:27 2017

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My Review of QUAD ACES. by kashaw
I enjoyed reading your piece - I don't gamble loads, but I have been to Vegas before, and played most of the games you write about. Alas, winning is rarely so easy to come by, and money usually tends to disappear rather swiftly, despite the fact that on the odd occasion you can win. Slots eat your money so quickly. gambling games can be fun in moderation, and even more fun if you can beat the odds and manage to gain a profit or even better, a big win. This was a fun read - thanks for sharing this.

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Silverblue
Mon Apr 3 20:29:18 2017

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My Review of A haunting love by terrygodwin
Must bring up memories and reflective moments when writing a piece such as this. Nicely structured and composed with some very good imagery within. I enjoyed reading your piece. All the very best to you.

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Silverblue
Mon Apr 3 08:06:49 2017

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My Review of Little Me, Big Me by BabyDuckie1992
Not bad - this contains some good lines and imagery, but I wonder if it could be improved by making it a little shorter. The repetition of little me, big me would probably work fine in a shorter piece, but a piece this length it perhaps becomes a bit too much, and takes away from the content of the poem. I have used repetition myself before at the beginning of a lot of lines, or at least each stanza, so it can work in some ways. I hope you keep writing, as there is much to like here, and I'm sure you have some more good poems in you. All the best.

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