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Silverblue
Fri Jun 16 08:47:25 2017

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My Review of The Mile Past Forever by Abra
I feel this was very nicely put together, with very good imagery and description. The last stanza is particularly well composed and my favourite of the three, but as a whole this is a very strong piece that I enjoyed.

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Silverblue
Thu Jun 15 23:08:59 2017

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My Review of I write....... by fraido
I really like the simplicity and good flow of this poem. It's very well structured and put together, with a unique and smooth layout. Doesn't try to do or say too much, and has a nice balance, A highly enjoyable piece.

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Silverblue
Thu Jun 15 23:03:21 2017

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My Review of Mama by calsdarkembrace
I think this is a good write overall, and I wonder what music genre it would fall under. I tried to sing it in my mind as I read it, but of course I wont be accurate as to how it would actually sound. That's the tricky thing with writing lyrics I guess - but it was still enjoyable and good that you have your own ideas and style for your song writing.

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Silverblue
Thu Jun 15 22:57:08 2017

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My Review of Going back by YogeetaGhansam
I think the sea can be one of those places that has a certain allure when thought about in a metaphorical sense. Here it seems as if the sea is making the female character nervous and unsteady, but she is still drawn towards it for some reason. There is some very nice imagery and description here, and I tend to enjoy poems about the ocean in many ways. I enjoyed reading your poem, so thanks for sharing your work.

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Silverblue
Mon Jun 12 20:44:13 2017

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My Review of Fingers by richom
Such a unique and well put together piece this. Great imagination and creativity to come up with such a poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and as so often with your pieces, it was able to make me smile while reading through it, but at the same time, it's very factual and accurate. Superb poem indeed. Many thanks for a great read.

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Silverblue
Mon Jun 12 08:49:42 2017

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My Review of Better Things To Do by JimSlaughter
This is a fascinating piece in many ways. It gives a good and honest insight into your own feelings about your views as to whether there is a God or higher being. It's such a broad subject and with all the billions of people alive on the earth, it's amazing how people have such differing faiths and beliefs. It's also amazing what people believe in without any hard evidence. I can totally see why you see things the way you do, and really did enjoy how you put this poem together. Perhaps believing in something is better than believing in nothing, and can be of some comfort, but we really do know very little in many ways when it comes to knowing what's out there. A highly enjoyable read - thank you.

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Silverblue
Sun Jun 11 16:35:00 2017

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My Review of The Real Soul by Synchro
This is very well put together, which would fit nicely in the spiritual category. Of course, peoples beliefs and views on this subject vary greatly, but this is an intriguing insight into your own feelings and experiences on this particular topic. I very much enjoyed your poem.

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Silverblue
Sat Jun 10 23:41:59 2017

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My Review of What Would They Say? by RachelMurray
Deep stuff here. I think we may well produce some of our best pieces in our hardest and darkest points in our lives (If we go through such stages). This is emotionally moving and will probably influence some to hope that you are able to find good in life and find happiness. I, for one, hope this proves to be the case. As a poem, this is very well put together, and has plenty of heart and emotion running through it. All the best to you, and glad that you are part of this poetry site.

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Silverblue
Thu Jun 8 23:02:38 2017

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My Review of Clichés to the broken by fraido
Very good. A poem that rolls off the tongue very easily, with a very good rhythm and flow to it. Has enough about it to make the reader think as they read it, but written in such a way that isn't too complicated and reads very smoothly. A highly enjoyable piece.

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Silverblue
Thu Jun 8 16:35:38 2017

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My Review of Last adieu by sunnisha
This is a well composed piece, and put together nicely. It shows the love and patience of a sister towards her brother, and how she stuck by him right to the end, and even continuing after they were separated in a physical sense. A nice rhythm used as well, so all in all this is a very nicely penned poem.

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Silverblue
Tue Jun 6 22:53:08 2017

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My Review of Beer Bench Delight by matelotrod
I suppose we expect seagulls to steal our chips or ice cream, but when a buzzard steals our alcohol - in this case whiskey - well that's a different matter. I really did enjoy this poem - it made me smile as I read through. It's amazing how many different whiskies there are - and how some people prefer their own certain type. Good, fun poem Rod. Very much enjoyed by me, that's for sure. All the best.

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Silverblue
Mon Jun 5 11:25:22 2017

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My Review of A Pigeon's Epitaph by richom
Hornswoggled! - What a word that is. Once again a clever piece, with humour included as well. The last line works brilliantly in relation to the rest of the poem. Excellent stuff indeed - with great word usage and rhythm, Thanks for the read.

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Silverblue
Fri Jun 2 22:54:13 2017

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My Review of BECAUSE by kitty
I suppose some people have many others who seem to care and show genuine concern for them - whereas for others, it may not seem or feel that way much at all. This piece makes me think of a person having a spring in their step and a reason for living, and feeling brighter/more positive because of another persons caring attitude. I suppose this could also refer to a spiritual being as well. Either way, this is a very nicely put together piece that I very much enjoyed. Almost midnight here - so thank you for a nice read at this time of night.

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Silverblue
Fri Jun 2 22:49:46 2017

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My Review of The Porcupine: A prickly situation by JimSlaughter
Nicely put together, and made me smile too. I recently watched a jaguar trying to kill a porcupine, and I think in the end the jaguar ended up dying due to one of the porcupines quills going through the jaguars neck/throat. This of course, has been written with a more humorous tone, but it's still very well put together, and the last verse in particular was my favourite. The male must certainly take heed when mating, or risk a rather prickly encounter. A highly enjoyable piece this, which I very much like.

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Silverblue
Tue May 30 11:54:43 2017

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My Review of When I Found I Had a Sister! by MySongStar
It was almost certainly a good piece for you to write - in order to get your feelings about this situation off your chest onto paper so to speak. When a family member - in this case your sister, comes into your life many years later, it's almost certainly going to be a difficult and strange scenario in many ways. I suppose much in life is dependant on peoples personalities and their ability to get on and work around things, even if things aren't always easy. Sadly, there are instances where some family members just wont connect or have great relationships overall. Maybe this wont be the case here, and you will be able to get on in the future with a lot of your family. Everyone's situation is different of course, so only time will tell.
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Silverblue
Tue May 30 11:35:38 2017

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My Review of A Handful of Haiku 7: Lazy Summer Night by JimSlaughter
Excellent set of haikus that all fit together so very well. Lovely description and imagery all the way through. Actually had me visualising stars, the moon, and the ocean among other things as I read through. Great stuff indeed - thanks for a highly enjoyable read.

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Silverblue
Mon May 29 00:17:26 2017

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My Review of Simply by JimSlaughter
Simply is a good title for this poem. It gives the impression of somebody finding a new love, or someone realizing a certain something in a love they have found. I think in stanza three you meant to put 'want' rather than 'wont' in the first line, but just a minor adjustment. I liked this one all the same, so thanks for a good read. All the best to you.

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Silverblue
Sun May 28 23:49:01 2017

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My Review of IN KNOWING by kitty
What a lovely uplifting piece this is. Life can be hard sometimes, so we need a way to help us through those tricky times. I love the use of the word penitent in your poem - not a word you come across that often. Keep the joy and the smiles - all the best to you.

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Silverblue
Sat May 27 19:30:35 2017

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My Review of True Power by JohnCreekmore
This is a well put together poem. It's one that I've gone back to and read a few times believe it or not. Perhaps it's a piece that might divide opinion somewhat if broken down and discussed. It's not listed under a specific category, but it makes me wonder what categories you would have chosen if not the general/other category. To me it seems to be talking about people in power, and those on pedestals, who live for their own gain and dominance. Certainly a well written and interesting poem this one.

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Silverblue
Sat May 27 19:20:04 2017

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My Review of After I'm Gone by feelnpoetic
I like this one - it has a nice flow to it which means it's quite easy to read at a decent pace, but still maintains enjoyment with regards it's content and imagery. You've put it partly under the personal category, so obviously a piece that's close to your heart, but written with a lot of positivity and fondness, rather than doom and gloom. A good piece this one, thanks for an enjoyable read.

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Silverblue
Fri May 26 05:38:33 2017

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My Review of PAIN by kitty
Nicely put together kitty, and pain does seem to be a part of life and existence in a big way almost all the time. Everyone experiences it at some stage, and we all have our own ways of dealing with it. Like you say, some suffer in silence, and others want to tell the world and shout it out.Thanks for a thoughtful read.

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Silverblue
Wed May 24 04:48:24 2017

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My Review of Joyful Dissonance by SketerMichaels
I often wonder why people end up preferring certain types of music over others, and think its perhaps with the way their brain is wired, so certain genres of music suit their mind more. What one person hears as annoying, random noise, can hold much appeal to somebody else. I suppose some seek a tune or a melody, whereas others may seek more of a feeling, and the use of the word 'dissonant' here is interesting. This is a well constructed piece that made me think and dwell on. The author note was useful in relation to the poem too. A good one this, thanks for the read.

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Silverblue
Mon May 22 07:37:15 2017

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My Review of
Out of Love (Emptiness)
by Littlesong
This is a piece written and composed with a lot of heart and emotion, with wonderful imagery and description. It has something of a melancholic feel to it, but life and our feelings can be that way sometimes. Yes, a heartfelt piece that although put under the despair category is very well penned. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

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Silverblue
Sat May 20 19:38:01 2017

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My Review of Cooked by caitlinjochitko
An intriguing poem this - I wonder if it's directed more at society as a whole, or is it more the demons inside us as individuals. This piece certainly had me thinking whilst reading it, and that's a good thing most of the time. I enjoyed reading your piece, so thanks for sharing. All the best to you.

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Silverblue
Sat May 20 19:28:07 2017

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My Review of On Wings of Love by JimSlaughter
I like the way this was put together, It's a piece that works well with timely pauses, but I think that comes naturally because of the way you've structured it. I think most of us want love at some points in our lives, so hopefully there's someone suitable out there for you sooner rather than later. A fine poem this, very nicely composed.

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