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Fri Feb 24 21:25:41 2012

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My Review of
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by terasinas
An excellent haiku, with a great message. Amazing how just 3 lines can say so much. I'm definitely an admire of the haiku, and this a perfect example of how good they can be. Much credit for this one my friend.
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Fri Feb 24 20:53:24 2012

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My Review of Mother Earth by Littlevoice
An intriguing and topical piece, which gives the reader much to think about. The world has changed so much over the years and much of mankind seems ignorant to the things we face. A shame so may greedy, selfish people control things.
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Fri Feb 24 20:36:39 2012

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My Review of You chose me by Starlight
This appears to be a personal piece that maybe relates to your real life. Overall, it flows well, and is easy to read. Perhaps it could be worked on a little, but in fairness, it probably was written in a way that seemed easiest, and most comfortable to you at the time of feeling what you felt. All in all, not a bad write by any means.
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Fri Feb 24 20:31:28 2012

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My Review of Rose (Lapse of Reverie) by Torn
By and large this is good, with some great description. A little drawn out perhaps but shows decency and promise. Overall, there is much to like here.
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Mon Oct 3 06:55:02 2011

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My Review of Joy and Strife (Co-Existing) by CloudNumber9
Really strong piece of writing I feel. A deep and emotional poem with good flow here and a fine structure. Like this a lot.
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Wed Sep 28 19:35:59 2011

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My Review of The Pedant by Uranusisfunny
Quirky, cool, and good flow, style and structure - also a nice rhythm to it too. I like this one. Good piece.
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Sun Sep 25 22:39:05 2011

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My Review of Dewdrops From the Moon by CloudNumber9
Real nice flow to this one. I enjoyed reading through your poem. The words were inspirational and all in all thumbs up.
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Sun Sep 18 21:35:43 2011

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My Review of Astral Projection by Silverblue
Another good haiku to add to the haiku collection. Interesting subject chosen to produce your chosen haiku.
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Sun Sep 18 06:32:19 2011

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My Review of An A to Z of Something Close To Sanity.... by Silverblue
Clever bit of writing - unique to see something like this. Nice work if you indeed wrote it at close to 4 am as you have mentioned in your poem.
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Thu Sep 15 06:22:57 2011

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My Review of Baroque of Dawn by RaulMoreno
Excellent haiku that achieves what it sets out to do - give out a message in 3 lines. Congrats on yr piece.
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Thu Sep 15 06:20:56 2011

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My Review of Everytime You Say My Name by Lovelyxox
So simple yet very effective. You dont over complicate things which is very creditable. Your word usage is good tho, and you keep things tidy and easily readable. Sometimes poetry can be like art if done in the right way, and I think you've shown that to a large extent here. Really nice piece of poetry.
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Thu Sep 15 06:18:23 2011

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My Review of Aftermath by fraido
The use of questions can actually work quite well in a poem if done in the right way. Here you have achieved that aim. It's a well penned piece overall, and is saying to me that the writer is asking themselves these questions, which in turn can help them by expressing their feelings this way. Nice piece.
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Thu Sep 15 06:15:36 2011

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My Review of Lovers Lane by Silverblue
Brilliant flow and rhythm and kept sensual rather than lude. Well structured and definitely a good write.
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Thu Sep 15 06:12:59 2011

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My Review of Lost by spa1987
The grammar is lacking just slightly, but can be easily rectified - I too, write things on a whim, perhaps more so in the past than now, and it's quite amazing the things that can flow. Pretty good piece overall.
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Thu Sep 15 06:03:43 2011

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My Review of Mirrors.... by Silverblue
Nicely done - a good length and flow to this piece. I enjoyed reading this poem - keep on writing my friend.
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Thu Sep 15 06:00:55 2011

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My Review of The Dead Die Young by Frostedshadow
Rather intriguing piece this - And overall I liked the style. It's a little dark in some ways, but the structure and flow are both good.
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Thu Sep 15 05:56:26 2011

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My Review of The Ink That We Write With.. by Vulcan68
Superb flow to this which is actually quite rare when reading poetry I find. It may not be a rule to stick to, but it makes the poem so much more digestible and gives it a good flow. Just the overall feel and way of the poem is to credited - great job, great poem.
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Thu Sep 15 05:54:20 2011

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My Review of Mother Nature - Our Spiritual Healer by dragonflyrider
Really nice piece - you illustrated your message really well, and the poem was a nice length too. Not too long winded, and so easily enjoyed by the reader. You make some good points that I can only agree with.
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Thu Sep 15 05:51:04 2011

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My Review of Thinking to die by Boldpen
Your structure and flow are very good, and you have a natural ability to produce a neat, and digestible poem. Keep writing and you'll hone your skills still further. Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.
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Thu Sep 15 05:44:55 2011

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My Review of Rules of Poetry? by Lovelyxox
You have penned and expressed yourself very well here. It's down to opinion in some ways on how to write and read poetry - I guess there are no hard and fast rules. It does seem apt to try and write a poem, well, let's say.... poetically, but then it could well depend on what the subject matter is, or your own preference of style. I don't tend to write in free verse style myself, because although I feel what is being said can be very important or interesting, I feel it can come across as a little untidy, but that's just my opinion. However someone writes is up to them, but a little care should be taken to make it appealing and digestible to the reader. Like you rightly say - it's subjective.
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Thu Sep 15 05:34:56 2011

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My Review of Life's Ordeal... by Silverblue
You give some good advice within this piece of writing. Many things can inspire us to write. And it's good to see you were inspired by others to write this particular poem - All in all - this is a good piece.
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Sun Aug 21 19:25:30 2011

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My Review of All Won't be Revealed by Silverblue
Flows very well, and has plenty for the reader to ponder on. very good poem overall
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Sun Aug 21 19:23:55 2011

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My Review of walking to the train by zekezat
Really intriguing poem - lots going on but makes the reader think and try and interpret - good work - i like this one.
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Sun Aug 21 19:21:33 2011

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My Review of Whisper His Name by kiabunch
Nice and clear piece of writing this - when things affect us emotionally it's good to write about them. I imagine theres a lot of feeling here.
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Wed Jun 16 04:47:22 2010

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My Review of Mindless by Kevin2284
Nice work
Enjoyable read with a good message. Nicely spaced out as well. Keep up the good work and thks for sharing.
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