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RamSlade
Mon Apr 17 09:32:55 2017

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My Review of Highway Wars by richom
Creative . . .
Ah, I used to commute for nearly ten miles from the center of New Orleans to get back home from work, talk bout insanity! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Wed Apr 12 12:31:32 2017

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My Review of OODLES OF OO'S by richom
Ahhh . . .
Here's to bickering, cheating, and back to sweet talking each other, deciding to try again to capture that magic of old. Gotta love it, it is so very true to life. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Wed Apr 12 12:21:52 2017

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My Review of In A World by michaelgallatin
Ahhh . . .
I give you A for effort, Michael that this poem will be read by many people. Se need, somehow, to get a firm grip on the way we do things, govern millions of people. This would be a good poem to be read on national TV, taught in school from elementary to college and beyond. I''m serious man. This is a gutty, righteous poem. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Wed Apr 12 12:11:39 2017

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My Review of The Savage Garden by JimSlaughter
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. . . and I loved the premise in your notes. Actually I do not believe in the "Garden of Eden," or anything which relates from it. Still . . . I most certainly do liked your premise. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Wed Apr 12 10:51:54 2017

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My Review of Super Glue by Silverblue
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I think most families have an Aunt Maud in the family tree, I know mine did. If I knew she was coming I would collect my plastic my men and go somewhere and fight the Second World War until it was beginning to be dark. My Aunt Maud was afraid of the dark. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Wed Apr 12 10:42:19 2017

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My Review of Depression by a112yearoldman
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I am so very grateful that I have not had depression visit me it does many people. What does that say about me? Am I not sensitive enough to be caught up in expression's hard grip? Don't get me wrong, I surely do not want it to visit me, I just wonder why it doesn't as it does so many people that i know. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Tue Apr 4 18:43:55 2017

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My Review of The Maze by michaelgallatin
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This is so very good, even though you create something very, very scary. I liken it to young kids getting hooked on drugs and spent the rest of their lives they "Kept staggering around in a place devoid of the Sun's rays." Major accomplishment. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Tue Apr 4 14:40:31 2017

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My Review of Hole Above My Head by SketerMichaels
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made me think and search. Does everyone have one? If so mine is well hid, probably alongside that hole in my gray matter, if o it will have difficulty gaining enough traction there to bother very much. Good luck on figuring out what to do with your "Hole Above My Head." Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Mon Apr 3 12:43:20 2017

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My Review of DEEPEST DEPTHS by kitty
Absolutely!
Exploring our world from space to the darkest seas is something mankind never ceases to do. What is below the surface of the seas of our world we, as you said, continue to discover little by little. You struck a chord with me with this offering. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Sun Apr 2 09:22:38 2017

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My Review of Awakening by Stella
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A deep, indepth bit of taking on that age-old question of "Why." I am pretty much with you all the way except that I believe not in God. I am a firm believer in reincarnation. This is a wonderful piece of writing, Stella. Thank you very much for sharing it with me. Sppotlight!

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RamSlade
Sat Apr 1 15:36:18 2017

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My Review of Interminable Time by odinroark
I liked this . . .
it has some grounding boy to it. The verse which speaks of modern man being the "today's cavemen is deeper in meaning than any other. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 16:14:30 2017

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My Review of
Sear With Me~ One Sun
by Littlesong
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One of, if the the best poem giving creature comfort from one to the other I have ever read, Littlesong. Indeed! What a jewel you have penned here. Thank you gracious lady for posting it here so everyone can read it. You absolutely astounded me. Spotlight, big time!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 16:07:05 2017

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My Review of March the 31st by augustrush
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and well written i this ode to a bedroom horror. to become as one with the bed is an anomaly. ( I tend to get tha way in the morning, but it never last as long as does yours. . . Eh . .. I love standing in the rain also. Exciting write on a dark subject. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 13:49:06 2017

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My Review of NAUGHTY EVE. by kashaw
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yet another version of the Eve from those days of creation. I've a mind of liking this "naughty" version than the original story. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 13:08:31 2017

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My Review of Discourse by JohnCreekmore
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and "writ on the wall" it surely is. I honestly believe that television and other "media" vehicles are much to blame for this. They goad certain candidates for their own purpose, to spike their bank accounts. Then there are the tabloids continuing with the purpose. Those of us out here are caught up in a firestorm of ill-begotten hatefulness . . . I do not see things changing for the better. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 12:59:27 2017

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My Review of DIRTY OLD MAN. by kashaw
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What makes this poem so very good, kashaw, is the fact that it actually happens in real life. You kept the story going, and I kept reading to the very end. The ending dealt the final blow, Yes! This is a fantastic write! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Fri Mar 31 11:00:21 2017

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My Review of Click by odinroark
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to the nth, John, You nailed down life, the good, especially the bad. Eh . . . One of those I wish I'd have written. Still, reading is fun too! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Tue Mar 28 19:05:58 2017

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My Review of Unanswered Questions by odinroark
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We learn from our peers . . . We learn from the small things around us if we will just watch them with a watchful eye. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Tue Mar 28 19:03:21 2017

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My Review of The Woods by Nikkiluvzu
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A better way to show her she means the world to you is a soft kiss on the tip of her nose . . . See where that gets you! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Mon Mar 27 18:31:35 2017

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My Review of Night Wave by JohnCreekmore
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a hurricane, at least that is my thoughts on this write and the "tiny ripple" which builds and builds until it "breaks mightily upon the shore," scary for sure . . . I loved this, John, very much.

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RamSlade
Mon Mar 27 16:49:32 2017

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My Review of POSITIVITY by kitty
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This is one darn great positive poem you have given the world. All too often we like to cower in the corner and cry over what could have been. I have been in that alone corner far more times than I like to admit. It is the weak way to go, Kitty. Yours is the right way. Thank you very much for this wonderful poem of substance! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Mon Mar 27 16:34:08 2017

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My Review of He Is by Valentine
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Ahhh . . . "Wondering what to do," indeed . . . Nice write. Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Mon Mar 27 10:17:24 2017

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My Review of Give me hope by BeatrezGM1697
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"To look at what shines," just says it all, a smiling, beaming face, I'm guessing. You betcha! Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Sun Mar 26 17:32:04 2017

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My Review of CONSPIRACY THEORIES by seriouspoet
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You'd have to be a complete idiot not to figure that out by line seven. Fun to read, however.Spotlight!

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RamSlade
Sun Mar 26 10:39:24 2017

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My Review of Drive with care by matelotrod
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I applaud you this poem,Rod. I admit to being one that travels faster than I should, but I am in no way disregarding set laws . . . Eh, except the speed limit. You would think I would drive more safer at he age i am but no way Jose, I do not. Eh, if the speed limit is fifty and there are those who drive forty I pass them at ease.
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