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clb520
Sat Jan 13 05:44:41 2018

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My Review of Retired-Expired by matelotrod
Sad, but true. I don't think this is just a male dilemma, as I believe women have been cast aside also. Life can be heartbreaking at times, but when it's good, it's oh so good.
I'd like to think Retired-Expired-but still Desired. It's a S ad part of some people's lives, you wrote it very well.
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:28:15 2015

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My Review of A man? by carmen-levine
Wow..Great intense write. I really enjoyed reading it. Difficult feelings in this write. Look forward to reading more
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:25:36 2015

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My Review of Mother by carmen-levine
Great Write! Mothers are the Greatest. I lost mine is a car accident in 1978, she was 36 & I was 18. Miss her Much! Too Many of Us..Take them so very much for granted! Keep up the Great Writing!
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:23:13 2015

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My Review of Please Don't Die! by carmen-levine
Yes, that would be hard. Been in the situation..and have told this to myself. I look forward to reading more of your writes.
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:21:41 2015

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My Review of Hey Little Spider by Emiko_Tagahushi
Cute little write. I enjoyed reading it. Goodbye little spider..just don't come into my house!..LoL..
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:18:24 2015

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My Review of Mind If I Shout? by EltonCamp
Great Write! You ever just want to snatch the phone from someone's face and hang it up? Or better jet...just throw it? Ya..Me too!
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 08:00:59 2015

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My Review of Everybodys journey is their own by notaverygood1
Nice write! It's very hard to not get caught up in others Drama or addictions..whatever they are. Misery Loves Company and no matter Good or Bad.. No on wants to be alone...One has to Fight for their own lives. Keep up the Great Writing!
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 07:57:09 2015

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My Review of Have you missed me? by matelotrod
Very nice write! Strange a dear friend of mine is having same things in his life, minus the cataracts. And I could really sympathize with you. I know his woes, but now I have another mans point of view & understand more of the feelings involved. Thanks and Look Foward to your writes n the near Future!
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 07:52:51 2015

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My Review of Something in the Woodshed ! by M-Uselli
Catchy little write...There's something in the woodshed.....had me wondering what ut could be! Enjoyed your write! Keep up the Great Writing!
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clb520
Wed Jul 15 07:50:26 2015

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My Review of MEMORIES by shahira
Memories are True constant companions. If Only they didn't get lost for some. Nice write, I enjoyed reading it. keep up the writing!
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clb520
Wed Jan 15 05:38:03 2014

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My Review of J-J-J-Jenny and the Tits by AFrankFreeman
Well..Ok then...Somehow I'm left thinking whether this is a true life situation or a situation that has been played out in ones mind...over and over.. relentlessly. I will say regardless of which, you do have a great expressive way of wording. Keep up the great writing!
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clb520
Wed Jan 15 05:22:34 2014

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My Review of Boobie Pics by AFrankFreeman
Wow..I guess it's Great you know what you like & are not afraid to express. I guess because I have them always around, I have not looked at them in this way, but thanks for enlightening with your write. Keep writing!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:31:37 2013

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My Review of LOVE IN ACTION ~ SONNET by CAVALERI
Very nice write. Your words have explained and done a great job. I would say...All of the words above have described Love...Keep writing...Write ON !!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:27:06 2013

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My Review of Dreams & Photographs (Holding on) by Deedee27
Very nice write, I really enjoyed reading it. Your words so true. Keep writing....
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:22:32 2013

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My Review of Dope, My Friend by BeautifulMystery
Enjoyed your write. I have not experienced this, but I have had other experiences, relative to it. I could feel your pleasure and your pain within your words. Great write !! Would be honored if read some of my writing and leave me some feedback....Keep writing....Write On !!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:16:00 2013

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My Review of Just maybe by sunnisha
Very nice write. Your words so true of one hurt and gun shy , so to speak. It's worth it to find it again...keep writing!!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:13:39 2013

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My Review of Fighting Battles by ELDEE
Very nice write. Your feeling and emotions are strongly felt by the reader. Cancer is a Bastard, and I myself know the pain within myself and family I have lost. Keep up the Faith...Keep writing!!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:08:30 2013

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My Review of Regeneration by ethicalbabe68
Nice write. Enjoyed your use of words. I could visualize the budding and the flowering & smell. Good job.........
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 04:04:19 2013

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My Review of YIN & YANG (Female & Male) ~ OBSERVATIONS by CAVALERI
Great !! I very much enjoyed reading it. Amusing observations, I must say. Humor, I enjoy it so. Keep writing !!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 03:56:19 2013

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My Review of Ghost by carolann
Loved it...very cute write...My niece & daughter truly believe in ghosts.. Enjoyed reading it ! Keep writing!!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 03:52:26 2013

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My Review of Beauty by Nikkiluvzu
Very Nice write...It reads so well..words just flow...1 suggestion...& I use it ALL the time...Spellcheck..I did really enjoy this poem. Write ON !!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 03:49:41 2013

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My Review of Sharpeville by ZaneReid
Nice write. Makes me think of the 70's and when the Ohio National Guard fired shots on the students at Kent State University in Ohio. The students were having a Peaceful protest..until the shots were fired. Keep writing ....Write ON !!
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clb520
Sun Aug 18 03:46:46 2013

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My Review of WATER by kitty
Nice write...Only I do hope it lasts forever, or there will be some problems. Short, to the point & makes you think. Keep writing !!
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