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Profanisaurus
Tue Apr 4 17:21:59 2017

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My Review of DEEPEST DEPTHS by kitty
You speak of hidden depths that can be found throughout the world around us but this can also be read about the hidden depths that can be found within a person. In a way both can be a fascinating voyage of discovery. I know I could be reading this wrong but I could see this both ways. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Mon Apr 3 23:45:39 2017

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My Review of LITTLE KITTY by kitty
Are you talking about yourself here or a little kitten?? In a way I could say that both work and you could be meaning it both ways to see which one the reader will pick up on. Kittens are indeed playful and I guess that you are too in your own way (as long as you don't have to chase mice). Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:37:32 2017

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My Review of Classical Music by BobQuinn
There is something about music that can enchant (am not referring to "club music" here) and free your mind even if it only provides a temporary distraction from the problems of the day. Have not heard much classical music but I know about its abilities and can appreciate them as I do this piece. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:30:54 2017

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My Review of A Visit from Myself by RamSlade
Was a little puzzled by this piece at first. I am not sure if it was a past or present you that visited or even if it was you at all. It certainly appears that what ever happened you were enlightened in one way or another. I believe you meant "so much so I went to bed contented". Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:24:45 2017

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My Review of The Gambler by michaelgallatin
Caused a much needed smile. Am not sure that there are many people who would be willing to play any against Satan much less be able to beat him. There is a phrase "the luck of the devil" and it appears that your gambler certainly had that if not something extremely close to it. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:19:21 2017

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My Review of One's Zephyr Within by odinroark
I feel that there are several questions this piece which would cause most readers to consider them. I personally think that you have done fantastically well in putting a piece to the picture. I can see no problems with this piece and believe that it should be in the spotlight. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:12:38 2017

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My Review of Awakening by Stella
I am not sure that anyone can answer the question at the end of this piece with 100% certainty and correctness. Everyone will have their own reason or version for why (or indeed why not). You have given the reader a lot to think about but whether they choose to believe or deny is up to them. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Apr 2 06:07:09 2017

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My Review of NAUGHTY EVE. by kashaw
Sounds like an extremely naughty Eve. This may be about Eve of the creation myths but it does point to something else as well. Well written to show two different ways of reading in one and both of them work very well in my opinion. Fully deserving of a place in the spotlight. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Tue Mar 28 13:52:12 2017

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My Review of Skeletons by augustrush
Skeletons are not frightening in themselves unless they are still living. It appears to me that you fear your potential especially when you get angry. There is a lot of thought on this and I would say that there are plenty of people who would be able to relate to this very easily. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Tue Mar 28 13:39:01 2017

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My Review of Drive with care by matelotrod
There are increasing numbers of lunatics and idiots on the road these days who seem incapable of following the rules once they have passed their test (if they even bothered to take it in the first place ). At least you are keeping the decision your own and avoiding potential harm. Stay safe sir. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sun Jan 22 01:23:38 2017

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My Review of AURORA by kashaw
One of the more calm and romantic chapters and it is great to read. It breaks up the horror chapters and lulls the reader into a false sense of security before it starts up again. For now let them both dance, sing and enjoy themselves as the darkness is fast approaching. Thanks for sharing.
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Profanisaurus
Tue Jan 10 00:48:02 2017

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My Review of NOBODY CARES! NOBODY CARES! by Galacticbeam
An interesting reflection on modern society to my eyes. In some ways people do not care about you as long as you don't offend their beliefs or get in their way. While people may cry most of the time they are not heard or are ignored unless they are deemed important by incomprehensible rules. Can find no problems with this piece. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Tue Jan 10 00:26:15 2017

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My Review of Ambition by odinroark
While we may build and create fantastic things and futures we do not fully understand everything that we have achieved. While we may eventually comprehend all that we have done it may be too late to undo the damage that we caused. Our destination is unknown and we can only hope to reach it with a little more knowledge. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Tue Jan 10 00:19:49 2017

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My Review of MISTY BLUE by kitty
If a couple have lasted through all their adventures then it shows that their love was sure and true. They have the memories of their travels but they also have gsined experience. Memories of some things fade away quickly but important lessons can stick with you for a lifetime. This in a way is a lesson in itself. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Mon Jan 9 12:03:11 2017

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My Review of SNAKE BITE. A chapter taken from THE JAW. by kashaw
Ouch. Sounds like a nasty way to die. If they do not have any way to treat him then all they could (and should) possibly do is put him out of his misery and possible agony. By the sounds of it the guy is near enough dead already so. I believe you meant "I can't do anything about this" and "we can't hang about". Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Mon Jan 9 11:03:58 2017

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My Review of CABIN FEVER by babyboomer68
Cabin fever is not at all fun. While depression is certainly part of the problem it is not all of it. Of course it can affect different people in different ways and not everyone will feel it the same way. Thankfully winter will soon be over and spring is on its way bringing happiness with it. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Tue Dec 20 22:27:12 2016

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My Review of EVERY INCH IS A MILE by babyboomer68
Not every early bird gets the worm but most worms don't have the luck of such an escape. While it got away this time it does not mean it will always escape as no creature is 100% infallible. I guess in a way that this can also apply to a professional environment also but not to all. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 22:41:13 2016

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My Review of Revisiting Hurricane Junkies by odinroark
Thankfully I am not a hurricane junky and have enough storms to deal with without trying to look for them. Can hardly say that it is the safest of occupations to have but I guess it beats being a tornado freak. I believe the picture you have used to appropriate and adds to your piece. Thanks for sharing
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 18:50:30 2016

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My Review of As I Heard the Songs, Saw Your Smile by kanewyork
You do not mention which musical that you were watching but it obviously meant to something to you. I guess you are allowing the reader to decide for themselves which show it was as each person would react to a musical differently. At least you enjoyed watching it. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 18:37:16 2016

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My Review of Songwriting 101: The (new) 3 R's by JimSlaughter
This did bring a smile to my face. While I did not agree with all your lines there were others that I can support. Have never read or heard any of Mr Whitman's pieces and not inclined to even try to seek them out. Thanks for sharing and if I don't comment of any of your pieces before the 25th have a great Christmas.
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 18:29:38 2016

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My Review of The Gift I Give by kanewyork
In a way this piece reminds me of the last verse of the Christmas song "In The Bleak Midwinter". It is probably the best present that you can give to someone your care about as long as they are careful not to break and damage it with careless thoughts and actions. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 17:17:51 2016

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My Review of CLOSE TO YOU ~ je suis by kitty
During reading this I got the image of a happy couple wrapped up in a blanket on a sofa in front of a nice roaring fire. Of course it is much better (and safer) to combust in front of a fire than in it. Of course the flames may not last long unless they are constantly fed with the right fuels. May your fire burn bright. Thanks for sharing.
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 17:11:24 2016

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My Review of SANTA CAME TO MY HOUSE by babyboomer68
Caused a smile on my face and no mistake. Sounds like a very happy and amusing dream that you had here. Do hope that he didn't leave a huge mess for you and your family to clear up the next morning. A bike is a wonderful present to have especially if you don't have a car. Thanks for sharing and enjoy your bike
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 16:59:40 2016

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My Review of Creator and Creation, Together As One by kanewyork
Feels more like a song to me but that not intended to be criticism. It is amazing how you can be inspired to write while enjoying a walk on a peaceful evening. If you are truly able to see and here with your heart it can be a wonderful feeling. Can find no problems with this piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Profanisaurus
Sat Dec 10 16:47:30 2016

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My Review of The Beauty of Autumn by terrygodwin
Very nice and peaceful to my mind. To be honest autumn is not my favourite season of the year (I prefer it to winter) but I did enjoy the images that you have conjured here. It is unfortunate that the beauty of the falling leaves will be replaced by the unforgiving icy winds of winter. Thanks for sharing.
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