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c-Ya
Sat Jul 5 21:24:06 2014

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My Review of Plucked Strings (R rated) by Caroline
... yooh baba !
Hmmm haai , I can't say much. Beautiful

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c-Ya
Sat Jul 5 20:57:14 2014

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My Review of Beauty by Nikkiluvzu
short and sweet ...
I think this has a fundamentally universal topic which is synonymous to every reader. Well done on target audence, and yeah keep on keeping on.

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c-Ya
Mon Jan 20 18:10:46 2014

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My Review of Weed and Blow are my Demons by kissmecannibal
Puff and Pass
Nothing like the greens. I, too, am a weed junkie. I feel that if it makes you feel good, then do it. Let the high times roll. But anything man made, cooked, processed or formulated is probably not so good for you.

The piece of writing is of great quality and I commend you for the unorthodox write. I really enjoyed reading this as it speaks to me. Knowing that I am not alone is comforting and I hope you may also find your comfort and contentment within yourself.

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c-Ya
Mon Jan 20 17:57:59 2014

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My Review of Pride Before a Fall by peecee
Nice
This piece has great flow, which is nothing short of organic. In this lies an important message and undoubtedly we ought not forget to humble ourselves everyday. We are only human though, lets embrace life as it comes. Great read.

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c-Ya
Wed Oct 30 03:08:14 2013

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My Review of The Story by pnknucklez
Stupendous
As you wished, I had a look at this. Must say I was expecting a great read, instead I received even more. I just love how it makes sense even with the use of alliteration on steroids. Well done. I like this ....
The world needs more writers like yourself, and I feel we need to take the modern poet as seriously as we do the Shakespeare's , ee cumings' and Maya Angelou's of yesterday.
It's our day. Let's write and live ; read and honour where credit is due.

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c-Ya
Sat Oct 19 00:39:47 2013

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My Review of NAKED - I come by kitty
God is Love
a good read.

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c-Ya
Sat Oct 19 00:30:03 2013

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My Review of Look Into Himself by Meek420intellect
I like it: pure, passionate and proud. We all started some where, trying to find our feet. Looking at this now, and one of your recent pieces, one may see the huge difference in terms of how you improved as time went by. Well done though, hope you inspire other young writers like yourself and I, for it is up to us to change the world.

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c-Ya
Sat Oct 19 00:19:30 2013

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My Review of My P.O.V. by Meek420intellect
sounds like a Rap too. Hopefully we may be afforded the opportunity to hear the song version of your writing, to add that extra bit of life to it. Well written, by a gifted writer.

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c-Ya
Sat Oct 19 00:00:39 2013

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My Review of Who Am I by Meek420intellect
Thats wassup
I love this sh*t. lol .... on a serious note though, I enjoyed this. It had a sense of musicality to it, to a point where I was convinced it was written to be a rap song. Well done G. Keep writing!

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c-Ya
Fri Oct 18 23:50:16 2013

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My Review of Like Mother, Like Sun by KishanethePoet
Sweet
Great use of Poetic devices. I genuinely enjoyed this. Well done.

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c-Ya
Fri Oct 18 23:43:49 2013

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My Review of I Am What I Am by KishanethePoet
Bold
I admire your fearless approach in terms of writing what you feel as it is. I think that it is good and liberating to "shout" to the world and tell it that no matter what happens you will stay true to yourself, before anything else. Well done.

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c-Ya
Fri Oct 18 23:33:14 2013

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My Review of No Turning Back by KishanethePoet
Enlightening
This is a great piece for starters, well done. I particularly liked the use of light, darkness, and things that burn. Coming to Jesus is choosing Life Love and Longevity. I just hope that your mission to spread the word does not only end here, but in practice and in reality. Over-and-above this is a great piece of writing, dear gentle brother.

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c-Ya
Fri Oct 11 05:10:15 2013

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My Review of The hands that killed Africa! by Sage
5/5
From a South African context :

I commend you on your courageous and bold approach on writing. There is a detail and depth beyond even my level of thinking in this peace. As a writer that often touches on Africa and Apartheid, I feel that I can connect to this piece, but I feel we should rather focus more energy on embracing life and celebrating it as it unravels, today. To me I would say the upbringing in this country is one that presents opportunities like a coin toss.

Sometimes yi-Kop, sometime yi-Tail

Great work charlie, Inspired c-Ya
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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 18:59:52 2013

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My Review of Needs by JustLoveMe
Hallelujah
Jesus is Love

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 18:52:02 2013

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My Review of Whispering Walls by WakeTheMoon
Wow
I am under qualified to even comment. But what I can say is we need to add another 3 numbers just for this piece.

God bless

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 18:37:37 2013

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My Review of Under Lighted Moon by BenjaminHyatt
Beautiful
Well done.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 17:44:22 2013

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My Review of Love's breath by Sage
Nice
Great build up to a stupendous climax. Well done

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 01:31:44 2013

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My Review of Through The Lens by SteveandRose
Nature is Forever
Thank you for reminding me of my Passion for Wildlife and Flora. Everyday we become more and more commercialised, westernised and off-centred by what society has blindly decided to see as progress. Building, Destroying and changing the natural Landscapes that God had placed in His ways. We are fighting a loosing battling killing ourselves instead. Nature is free, Nature is true and Nature is forever.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 01:24:35 2013

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My Review of LAZILY by kitty
Sincere
Thank you for reminding us that sometimes even just chilling at the park looking at clouds is often forgotten, yet an exercise to remind us of what is around us. This life is about gratitude. Be thankful for the soil beneath our feet to the clouds above our heads. Life is what it is, but it's about making the best of what life throws at you. For there is no formula to Life, but life is a Learning Progress.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 01:13:45 2013

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My Review of NEW AND OLD BABYLON by Galacticbeam
True
Thank you for sharing this harsh reality. Sometimes we just need to be reminded that Life is not what we have made it out to be but rather what it is, truly and honestly.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 01:07:41 2013

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My Review of Autumn Goddess by MariaG
Colourful
I dearly love Autumn more than any other season as the colours and images of this season are deep, harsh and different. There is life in Autumn yet life begins to shed, the old die and the new hide away for winter has no friend nor favour as it will bring bare land and the Life that was built from Spring degenerates. A cycle that never ends yet nature finds a way to restore balance, Autumn is the Starting point to the process.

Thank you for an inspiring piece.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 01:00:17 2013

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My Review of Advice by MariaG
Gratitude
Praise Him, while you Love yourself because God is love and he created you and me in His image. He gave us the power of choice and the power to love through Him and Him alone. For he says "I knew you before you were formed in your mothers womb",which means your destiny is determined, you just need to have courage "grow up and become who you really are." (ee cummings)

Thank you for sharing such a moving piece

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 00:51:59 2013

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My Review of Pendulum by Favro
Beyond belief
I strongly agree with this, we forget that the material is only temporary and that time is infinite ... There is no end to living things, just a change from one kind of energy to the next ... And that's where art and Science meet. We are all one, for even the creator says "I have made you in my image" and "I have created everything, small and big all around you."

Keep up the impeccable work.

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c-Ya
Thu Oct 10 00:41:45 2013

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My Review of LOVERS BODIES by Galacticbeam
Unorthodox
WOW

Simply well down. You know I could try and review this poem to my best capabilities but what I have to say will utterly disrespect the level of quality within this piece. I love it. I just wish more of us great writters could get proper platforms like this to support, learn from and inspire each other.

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