My Comments & Reviews:

a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 26 18:10:23 2017

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My Review of Catching the Bus by RamSlade
Perfect
Very few words get the huge point across. Been there, done that soo many times. Sl!
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 26 15:01:48 2017

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My Review of (Crumpled Paper/ The Scent of a Picture) by PoetGLG123
Beautiful
Wonderful expression of seductive passion within God's bounty! Spotlight!
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 26 10:02:58 2017

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My Review of Drive with care by matelotrod
Excellent
You have cheerfully defined how driving is these days, except mentioning them that are on the tail all day long.
(As a side note, it appears something hath occurred with this site, with many abandoning their talented cohorts by not reading and reviewing. Ah well, tis life they say!)

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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 26 09:45:26 2017

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My Review of Your love was like free verse by raidonce
Beautiful
Written so well, with reality, subjectivity and passion all tied together. Loved this. Spotlight!
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 26 06:59:25 2017

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My Review of First Love by almostpoetry1
Emotional
A very well written piece from the heart, defining everything a first love can be, and dealing with the loss of it. You have taught me here to never look back. Thank you, one from one so old to one so young. Spotlight!
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a112yearoldman
Fri Mar 24 05:24:00 2017

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My Review of As I Slow Dance With Memories... by southernbelle
Memories so vibrant
and clear, you make the words come to life, as if they bespeak of true passion and reality. Beautiful and haunting!
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a112yearoldman
Wed Mar 22 02:20:16 2017

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My Review of Memories, In The Silent Dust by Constance_
Excellent imagery
Your words brings to life the silent dust and everything within. This is the attic of my childhood with all the memories attached.
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a112yearoldman
Tue Mar 21 19:27:34 2017

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My Review of
Unspoken
by Littlesong
Sad and beautiful
You have the pure power of sensitivity and passion shown, inside words which barely your heart has known.
Perfect, again, Little Friend!

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a112yearoldman
Tue Mar 21 07:13:49 2017

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My Review of In The Corner by Constance_
Excellent
A grand use of language to get your thought, full of pictures, across!

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a112yearoldman
Tue Mar 21 05:14:33 2017

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My Review of Quick or Quality by richom
The waste it up
society gets bigger and bigger, while landfills and intelligence get smaller and smaller. As for art being in the hands of the rich, that has always been the case!

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a112yearoldman
Mon Mar 20 06:23:01 2017

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My Review of Strut To Heaven's Door by michaelgallatin
Chuck Berry
A master of the newly formed era of rock 'n' roll. His presence will always be felt throughout the development of music!
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a112yearoldman
Mon Mar 20 06:20:09 2017

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My Review of Whispers From the Cellar by JohnCreekmore
The day
for dennisons and darkness. Read Odin's. Amazing that I barely wrote a piece entitled Whispers. Maybe we are all on the same page or searching for new titles?
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a112yearoldman
Mon Mar 20 06:16:12 2017

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My Review of Breathe in the Now by odinroark
The present
is all that in reality exists, beyond shadows of the past and longing precipices of the future. Give heed to the past, and the future while living the present!
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 19 18:29:58 2017

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My Review of Could be an early Farewell by matelotrod
This is really a shame
that you are having problems with the authors of such a wonderful site as this. You shall be missed, as much as any great writer. I am not saying that I am great, but I may be next on the list.
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 19 06:25:48 2017

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My Review of Where God Lives by SketerMichaels
Excellent
From your heart, years ago and present. I agree with my dear friend, Little Song, in what she has said....and said better than I ever could! Spotlight.

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a112yearoldman
Thu Mar 16 16:25:58 2017

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My Review of
~*Sweet Song*~
by Littlesong
Absolutely soul grabbing
Purity of it all, as all ranges outside and deeply inside. Another piece of your heart, LS. Spotlight!

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a112yearoldman
Wed Mar 15 12:04:13 2017

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My Review of Hello, Farewell by augustrush
Very well written
bringing past and present together, along with relationships which were formed, and yet to be formed. Very nice, and personal!
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a112yearoldman
Wed Mar 15 06:24:01 2017

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My Review of
Sacred
by Littlesong
Very sentimental
I am just sorry to not have been the first to review your latest outpouring of your heart. The only woman...yet you don't belong. Your words tug at my heart strings.

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a112yearoldman
Tue Mar 14 04:14:19 2017

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My Review of Who Do You Trust? by richom
Very well done
Including all the people we have to trust. I do not remember the television show, nor the start of Johnny on on Tonight. But, then I am still a young cub!

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a112yearoldman
Mon Mar 13 06:01:26 2017

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My Review of BPD by JohnCreekmore
Everyone
has a disorder of one kind or another. Some are more damaging than others. It is all a part of not being "normal." Personally, with all of my disorders, I would rather not be "normal."
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 12 12:28:36 2017

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My Review of Deadened Lives by odinroark
War is a horrible
piece of mankind, especially when one nation is named the world's peacekeeper and the most powerful in the world. Humankind has always been cruel and possessive. Only when it is gone will there be real peace!
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a112yearoldman
Sun Mar 12 12:21:03 2017

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My Review of Stuck by Malpa
Numb comes to us all
No available effort to do anything creative or constructive. Just a feeling of being so disadvantaged!
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a112yearoldman
Sat Mar 11 06:00:22 2017

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My Review of Tender Heart by Littlesong
A masterpiece
of union, and unity between two lovers; taking the core and revealing only to one, where true being exists and submits to the other; so deeply inside where true passion and reality exist. Beautiful, my sensitive and passionate friend!

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a112yearoldman
Fri Mar 10 04:21:18 2017

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My Review of FAREWELL ...My love by kitty
Beautiful
A fantasy play between, and encompassing, two souls "in flight." Excellent, young poetess!
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a112yearoldman
Thu Mar 9 06:50:03 2017

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My Review of Fly Away by Valentine
Passionate
"Where tear drops in silence can be heard." A very powerful line, summing up love. Excellent!

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