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Littlesong
Sun Apr 30 12:16:20 2017

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My Review of THE MEMORIES WE HOLD by kitty
Sometimes I wonder if it's better to forget the bitter and sad memories, but then I wonder again, aren't they are also a part of what we have become? and as Your last verse said, we can by experiences and age learn how to control them, and lead them into the road we want, it might be a tough process, but it can be done.
Nice piece Kitty, thank You for keeping sharing them, a great Sunday to You too.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 09:01:22 2017

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My Review of Broken Wing by nancyaliciag
Those who have a heart like Yours, will attract this dying pigeon to them, or maybe even the pigeon will attract her self to You, knowing she will find the peace at her final moments, and knowing that she at her presence, will let You embrace the greatest of lessons, and that You won't look at it like it is just an "event" like many others will do.
I can read behind Your lines, well done and thank You for sharing Your moment with all of us.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 08:16:16 2017

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My Review of THE FINAL CURTAIN by kitty
This is maybe the saddest piece I've read from You, and I understand it, and feel each word, dear Kitty, Your piece spoke and touched my heart sitting here, smelling cofffe at my far room....

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 05:33:49 2017

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My Review of Where are we going? by matelotrod
The world becomes crazier each day, and the hand of human what was/is/will always come to destroy the pure beauty of nature, that's s fact we all know, but there are people whom are like You, we can't lose the hope, and B.T.W those aging people give the feeling of peace to the younger ones, isn't this enough? ☺
Sorry to hear of Your sweet birds, I hope soon the blooming of life will be captured.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 04:48:10 2017

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My Review of Class Reunion by richom
Such a touching poignant portrait You've painted for us, I could feel Your emotions, Your sadness, I believe to still have fellow persons from that old time is a comforting thing, I pray for all of You to meet next time healthy and with a big smile too.
Thank You for sharing a part of Your life with all of us here.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 04:31:15 2017

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My Review of Deals With the Devil by JohnCreekmore
As Richard said, "dmned if you do, and damned if you don't.", and as You answered him, the best way is to choose the road with the least harms, sometimes we drag our own selves to experiences, we know they are not right, but still we feel we should take these roads, all to learn and raise.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 04:22:28 2017

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My Review of Retire-Expire by matelotrod
My auntie have thisbstrategy, she leaves my uncle working everything he wants too, then after he finishes, praise him, like we all must do too, then she goes to see if everything is OK, or she let him keep busy with his writing, my uncle thinks that he is the only best one who do everything right, and we don't, even in our female chords, and he doesn't listen, that's the problem, not that he helps, I can understand how difficult it is this situation for the provider man, but there are solutions, and there are still works outside and inside You alone can do it, and I tell You, even if Your wife murmured after Your helping, that's our nature, but it doesn't mean she is unhappy to receive Your help, maybe You can do what You are better at, and leave her the rest.
All the best for You there.

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Littlesong
Sun Apr 23 06:04:12 2017

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My Review of Waiting by Stella
So sweetly playful Stella, teasing in a very womanly way, since I like sleeping, I would also sleep peacefully at that inviting bed lol Thank You so much for sharing this romantic piece.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 22 04:00:07 2017

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My Review of Playing Partners by richom
And You shouldn't play for money, unless it is for fun lol, those things which make the married life more sweeter, more alive, to kill the boredom of routine, again such an enjoyable write to read, I hope You and Your wife do have fun playing sports.

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Littlesong
Fri Apr 21 01:15:43 2017

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My Review of The Needy by JohnCreekmore
The problem is not when You seek hope in those places, we are humans after all, but when within You doesn't match that without, if it is helping You to progress inside and deal with Your inner issues, then it's OK, You have find a good way, because You are aware of Your own self, the second thing, most people don't recognize that needing is tottaly different from wanting, wanting reflects Your dreams, desires, aims etc... while need most of the time reflects Your lacks.
Great piece, I knew You will write it, and waited to see what thoughts You will have, Thank You*

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Littlesong
Thu Apr 20 14:41:22 2017

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My Review of LOST ... by kitty
When You do all Your best, reaching out to them, with opening hands and heart, opening ears to listen and understand, with the gentleness and kindness, with care and respect, not wanting to break into their privacy, but that You are concern, it's their choice to throw that away, I don't like to see You sad dear Kitty, but I also know writing is healing, pouring of emotions and thoughts, take care of You sweetest Kitty, Hugs***

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Littlesong
Thu Apr 20 02:47:38 2017

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My Review of The Music Played ~ trijan refrain by Stella
I remember reading this sweet romantic piece of Yours, the tune is still so soft like the breeze, haunting with its gentle refrains, thank You for posting it again, and for giving us a poetic lesson, much appreciated!

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Littlesong
Wed Apr 19 15:22:20 2017

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My Review of I HAD A DREAM by kitty
What a really dreamy feeling You allow us, leave us, to swim within... only those true romantic, true lover will understand the world lays behind Your bright gentle sweet beautiful words.... I love this, I love it so much, always my pleasure to read Your ever fantastic dreaming pen, heart and spirit, thank You for a peaceful wonderful read before my sleep.

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Littlesong
Wed Apr 19 15:02:09 2017

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My Review of WHEN LOVE DECIDES by kitty
The sad sweetness of Your words, the wistful wishes reaching out there to the hearts of those who will understand and feel... all are brighten here dear beautiful Kitty, along Your sweetest nature, Your sad tear I felt flowing over Your page, warmest hugs my caring wonderful friend***


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Littlesong
Wed Apr 19 11:37:24 2017

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My Review of Invention of an Idea by PoetGLG123
Such intense feelings I got through Your words, I may not have the complete answer for Your big question, but I say You are not insane at all, but more like a free searcher, flying everywhere looking for answers, for justice, new thoughts, feelings and beliefs... that would ease You and satisfy You somehow, I say keep Your spirit vibrant as I can feel it here, and You will find it someday, what You are looking for... a really interesting piece, Thank You for sharing my friend.


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Littlesong
Wed Apr 19 04:40:24 2017

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My Review of Highway Wars by richom
I always enjoy reading Your stories shaped in rhyming poems, it's really like a war, this rush hysterical life we are living proved through traffics, where is the silence that bounds with peace and beauty... lost in the noises of life... this affects us badly, if I could and it's not far.. I would use my feet, I sure won't live but somewhere quite with nature and trees...
Thank You for reposting this, and much peace to You.

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Littlesong
Wed Apr 19 03:23:44 2017

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My Review of Hosanna by SketerMichaels
You MUST write more before church, because it seems to bring out the VERY best of You, such beautiful profound piece, a momentum of real spiritually and existence, walking into the depths of cores, just easily powerfully... I wish I could write it the way You did, a real masterpiece, thank You so much for sharing it with us.

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Littlesong
Fri Apr 14 00:55:54 2017

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My Review of Matters of Faith by JohnCreekmore
I don't know if we will ever stop living in the history, instead of learning from this it, and how things change to the current times and changing life, to accpect each others as we are, and live in a loving peaceful world, wasn't/isn't this the real message after all?

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Littlesong
Wed Apr 12 08:23:19 2017

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My Review of Quick or Quality by richom
How true,
Unfortunately, the world today is a consuming society, buy and throw, buy and throw... the easier and faster to make more money, and this is spreading also to the art world, how sad it is... I agree with You totally, thank You for pointing this out for us to read.

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Littlesong
Wed Apr 12 07:53:13 2017

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My Review of Married to Two by richom
We women tend to have two personas, but of course not in that extent way You've described, I can't imagine my self being like that, to that limit, or living such a miserable married life, I'm glad it's fiction though there are the same situation out there, it's again such a very well written poem, capturing us to read it all with such joy, Thank You*

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Littlesong
Mon Apr 10 10:32:45 2017

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My Review of Less Is Sometimes More by Silverblue
I love music, I believe in its power, in its healing... the food of my soul, the world where I live, I create... I lift up, and touch with my senses these ethereal emotions, the air that bounds with all the kind of vibes, I adore this piece, I feel the spirit of a composer.

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Littlesong
Mon Apr 10 09:54:13 2017

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My Review of OODLES OF OO'S by richom
I really enjoyed reading this, it was so sweet, nicely flowing and truly put smiles on the faces, Thank You for sharing this wonderful story, written to convey a great message with a very sweet way, I'm happy for them now, and when life and time allow, I sure will give them a little visit!

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Littlesong
Sun Apr 9 12:49:40 2017

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My Review of JULIET TO ROMEO by kitty
You are a true romantical, Your heart beats with the sweetest of love, Your spirit the loving, always dreamy one... again all shine here, and I myself will keep reading this blissful ink of Yours, taking us to the most beautiful place, where dreams come true, Thank You billions Kitty dear*

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Littlesong
Sun Apr 9 12:37:06 2017

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My Review of A MESSAGE by kitty
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Pray for her... I pray that her yearning aching song will reach up to heavens door, and will ring out load unto her lover's heart... You are so gentle and sweet dear Kitty, Thank You*

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 8 03:55:28 2017

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My Review of High Priestess. (Heroin) by taiglum
Though I'm so sorry for Your precious Son, and I can imagine what You are feeling about all of this, but You gave us such a very wonderful imaginary poem, I love how You described Heroin as a beautiful bad seducing goddess, like there is no escape... it was prefect and true, a great piece You've shared with us, Thank You my friend, and I pray for Your Son and You, magical blessings*

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