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Littlesong
Wed Mar 22 02:33:56 2017

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My Review of Whispers by a112yearoldman
This one is filled with romance and spirit, tenderness and sweet yearnings, a sweet plea sung from Your loving heart, wonderful one.

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Littlesong
Tue Mar 21 11:03:15 2017

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My Review of Your Last Breath by michaelgallatin
If it helps You, eight years ago when my father died suddenly, he died with a sweet smile on his face, so it must be a peaceful and happy place after there... I hope You will live long happy, hopeful and wise.

Please read this,
http://www.writers-network.com/index.cgi?m=1&m=1&view=257038
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Littlesong
Tue Mar 21 10:53:41 2017

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My Review of A Time Completely Shared by michaelgallatin
If I died and meet him, I would tell him that he is not alone, that his special care for what others may care the less about, will be rewarded greatly, that he is a true treasure, that many out there laying their hands for him, including me.
Strange my review here, but it's what I felt.
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Littlesong
Mon Mar 20 11:02:15 2017

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My Review of Whispers From the Cellar by JohnCreekmore
The sound of out thoughts
Coming from the darkness inside us, from our nigative vebrations speaking around us, drag us to their cellar, and how often we do, Your poem reminded me with a song, (I'm in the basement, You're in the sky I'm in the basement baby...)... This is a great and wonderful piece, what I like more about it is the emotional side, Thank You so much for sharing.

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Littlesong
Sat Mar 18 04:06:08 2017

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My Review of Blank by RamSlade
You've written for us a masterpiece that we all should be thanking You for, expressing our creation process with a really strong affective style, I see it as birth, from the bearing, pain until the beauty comes, a completely great piece, from the title till the end, Thank You alot for sharing it with us.

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Littlesong
Sat Mar 18 03:45:57 2017

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My Review of Where God Lives by SketerMichaels
This for me, the most Finest poem I've read from You, Your for sure deserve three hundreds stars not three, if not more, I maybe reading many poems but few which move me deep inside and make me dwell in their words living each line the way Your poem did, I only wished to be there holding the hands of this fading being, my heart ached for him to be alone, You poured Your essence and deepest spiritual soul, the finest of Your emotions, You have done a splendid piece drawing us into the universe of it, some of Your images touched me in special places inside my heart, You should be proud for writing a most powerful fine splendid piece of art, for sharing Your bestest with us.

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Littlesong
Thu Mar 16 17:50:36 2017

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My Review of Waiting by JohnCreekmore
THIS one just for sure one of Your greatest poems! how deeply You reach inside the inner mind, if You want something which has never happened in Your life, do something You have never done! don't wait anymore! how You spoke to my mind and thoughts, totaly great effective and emotive piece Thank You*

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Littlesong
Thu Mar 16 11:14:20 2017

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My Review of Revealing Ourselves by RamSlade
I give You hundred stars, hundred claps if I could, for playing over my heartstrings...

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Littlesong
Thu Mar 16 03:36:04 2017

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My Review of Hello, Farewell by augustrush
A little letter, but deep range of ideas and thoughts, I completely agree with John that You've touch life and the meaning of living in such a wise way, You spoke to us simply from Your personal experience, still effectively and gently emotively, very well written, Thank You*

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Littlesong
Wed Mar 15 01:50:43 2017

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My Review of Missing You by LLMartin
I'm sorry if You are trully missing someone this extent, and I agree with John that we can identify Your images, so we can understand Your feeling, this from where the sterngth of Your words came, I especially liked and gripped by the last four lines... everything is so much fuller...




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Littlesong
Mon Mar 13 07:50:05 2017

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My Review of BPD by JohnCreekmore
Women are more emotional by nature, and their responses to their emotions can be so intense sometimes, I think maybe it's one reason why they might have BPD more than men, men generally keep their emotions inside.
When I read about their continuous searching for the one and only salvation, one and only person, I thought, here comes the problem and their ingoing frustrations, they can't depends on themselves, nor to be alone, like babies, they need special care, I believe they would be extremely sensitive too, to any action You make You need to be careful and gentle enough, their despair will go on, as their brain keeps attracting the same situation, this from where things must change, their way of thinking and their view of things.

I'm so pleased that You've shared with us Your personal experience, I've learned something new here, and will look for more too, please don't be sad that You couldn't offer more, You are doing the best with Your great poems.


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Littlesong
Mon Mar 13 07:11:19 2017

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My Review of Soliloquy by a112yearoldman
I see You've done some changes into the original poem, and I see it MUCH better, You've gone great job with Your flow which has a gentle feeling touching us effectively, perfect atmosphere for one's soliloquy, You addressed the problem and solution, one's past can take the all the control over their now and future, unless they decide it's enough and it's time to change! no time for regretting and thinking of "if I've done this and that", wonderful mind's talking, I especially liked the feeling You've created which is absolutely a soliloquy feeling, obviously written completely from Your inner mind!

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Littlesong
Sun Mar 12 08:14:42 2017

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My Review of Opimistic is the Night by RamSlade
Your sweet poem paints the unconditional happiness, those times when You don't care about anything, just feeling free and soaring with Your expanding emotions as You are bonding more with Your core, very nicley done, very nice flow, thank You*

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Littlesong
Fri Mar 10 10:10:19 2017

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My Review of FAREWELL ...My love by kitty
The gentle sadness and plea embraced my heart with soft tears, here again the romantic dreamy You giftted us a fairytale to dream on...

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Littlesong
Fri Mar 10 09:50:58 2017

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My Review of FITTING by kitty
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Sweetest Kitty for the smile upon this face today, the way we received Your important message

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Littlesong
Fri Mar 10 08:17:47 2017

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My Review of Ego Death by JohnCreekmore
I remember so well, the peaceful smile on my dad's face when he passed away suddenly, eight years ago, a completely real genius person he was, left too early when he still had so much to give, anyone would say that his role wasn't ended, or supposed too, but I think maybe he felt his role ended?
Another door in the journey of progress, of achieving, one day we will stop, gaining what we deserve, the key is to keep our insides as much as genuine as it can be.
I'm liking Your new poems a lot, thank You*

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Littlesong
Fri Mar 10 00:56:30 2017

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My Review of Crusaders by JohnCreekmore
This one stands with Your bests dear John, a killer of a killer is a killer somehow, it's really confusing and unfair because sometimes there is no other way but to treat them in the language they understand, the problem I think comes when they becomes addicted and their good seed inside is tinged with evil, when they don't recognize it even, then to lost their true selves.
Great one, Thsnk You*

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Littlesong
Mon Mar 6 03:30:07 2017

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My Review of War by a112yearoldman
Peace, Love, Happiness***
I will sing Peace
through the rages of war
I will write Love
through the anguish of pain
and turn every little heartache
into a happy yearning ray~~~~

Fine Masterpiece, least to say!

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Littlesong
Sat Mar 4 10:01:09 2017

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My Review of The Spotlight by JohnCreekmore
Totally Great
And another moths dragged into the spotlights, to fill the space of their forgettable forebears, and the same story goes again, and again... I remember that You wrote about this supject before, the main idea here is expressed in Your sentence "Attention is an elixir", the problem is not that someone wants to be famous, but how and why? as Your question asked, are they loving what they are doing? are they brilliant in what they create? are they adding, giving something good to this world? are they still carrying inside their humility?....
Now to answer Your question, still struggling with my new poem lol

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Littlesong
Sat Mar 4 09:03:10 2017

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My Review of Summer's Day by a112yearoldman
BEAUTIFUL!!!
One of Your bests!!! Your sensitive heart that can feel a woman's spirit and write like this, is gently glowing here!

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Littlesong
Sat Mar 4 08:48:24 2017

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My Review of I at That by SketerMichaels
Let me take this "I" into the place I think of, out of its selfish space.
The creative "I" that speaks sincerely of her owner's feelings, the continuing raising poet whom will always search for words to express inside his ever faithful "I", this "I" that takes us into the level of we, never be afraid of her, as she will never leave Your side.
Truthfully, this what floated to mind reading Your words, and honesty I really like Your unselfish poem.

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Littlesong
Fri Mar 3 12:31:34 2017

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My Review of COOL BREEZE ... by kitty
Kitty in Wonderland~
So fresh, so energetic, wonderful and dreamy, filled with bliss and grace, I can't but feel the pure hearts soar with the sheer happiness You've created so very beautifully! Great piece dear Kitty, a masterpiece with the genuine pure most positive feelings it radiates aboundingly!

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Littlesong
Thu Mar 2 02:23:47 2017

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My Review of Being By Myself by RamSlade
Even if You owned the world, if You didn't have love, You have nothing... no heart, no spirit, a body like a toy...
Excellent write, the style, the thoughts are great, Thank You*

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Littlesong
Wed Mar 1 04:23:57 2017

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My Review of LISTEN - To the force! by kitty
Nature is where we bond with the greater power, where the pure beauty is found, away from the man's hand, where our spirits are bare, soaring into the true meaning of existence and eternity, Your words took me into this wondrous journey, and I couldn't but feel sadness in my heart because I felt those who left us there, near... emotive one dear Kitty, Thank You so much for posting it today.

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Littlesong
Wed Mar 1 01:06:24 2017

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My Review of Grief by RamSlade
So very deeply touching, it grips the heart with enormous pain, the thoughts You speak of, the feelings flood like a sombor river of sorrow, You are a really sensitive man, I'm so sorry for Your grief through these years...

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