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Littlesong
Wed Dec 20 05:00:50 2017

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My Review of IN THE WILD by kitty
Dear Kitty You've said it all... if we ever humans could keep that genuine essence inside us, pure, unaffected by the hectic life, if we could learn from the animals, if we ever could see the reality in the Nature, where everything is true, and everything is true to it's essence....

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Littlesong
Wed Dec 20 04:48:55 2017

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My Review of WHY? by kitty
Hi my sweetest Kitty, a true wonderful friend,

I took the chance today to visit You here and read Your new poems, I found this to be so perfect after WN returns, true friendship is priceless, one is fortunate to have this blessing gift, tears of joy are precious too, because like the tears of pain they reflect the genuine and real feelings. Lovely like always my dear!



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Littlesong
Sat Jun 17 16:45:22 2017

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My Review of The Mile Past Forever by Abra
From Loss into Freedom
Rarely few, who can strik me in my core the way You did, I very much liked Your style from the first time I read it, Your words flew like if I wrote them my own, Your talent in showing the deepest of emotions even without using over ornamented words is outstanding, This piece is tottaly outstanding... Thank You*

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Littlesong
Thu Jun 15 18:56:52 2017

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My Review of Why Sports? by richom
I totally agree with You, I wish I learned any sport, but it wasn't easy or available when I was little, it helps You with many things as You wrote, confidence, patience, communion.... etc, it's a source of positive energy, a way to release some of Your bad thoughts and feelings, healthiness at body and mind, the excitement at its highest level will give You the push for sometime. I understand how men will feel their manhood free and high at the playground.

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Littlesong
Thu Jun 15 18:37:03 2017

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My Review of Canaries by JohnCreekmore
I heard about this event yesterday, Your note made a clear image about it in my head, the brilliancy of Your poem and the way You expressed the accident is outstanding, I love it, I pray many people will be aware there, and no more events like this to be repeated, take care of You and stay safe.

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Littlesong
Wed Jun 14 23:21:27 2017

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My Review of Fingers by richom
That's Your own special style, turning anything You want into something fun, and I'm always amazed by Your ability to write with the smallest details, no all can do this with not to mention the well structured poem and great rhyme, wonderful piece, thank You for an enjoyable read.

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Littlesong
Wed Jun 14 12:06:12 2017

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My Review of Troublesome Tandem by Silverblue
Your last sentence expressed the huge strangled amount of pain You were trying to erase through Your poem, but still be proud of the aware and gentle person You are, the power of Your last sentence struck deep, this emotion I know and feel, thank You for sharing.

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Littlesong
Wed Jun 14 09:22:50 2017

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My Review of Whew! by RamSlade
Welcome Back*
And I wish You an easy short returning journey, technology can be a real headache, who knows when it will surprise You again! I hope not soon!

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Littlesong
Wed Jun 14 09:16:53 2017

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My Review of Images and Illusions by JohnCreekmore
Very true, a human is a human, not a saint or a beast, nor a deity or a demon, sometimes we are our own self paint images around this person which might be not real, and might raise them, or lower them according to our own veiw and mind, it might gets worse when You raise them into a higher place and begin counting on them, like they are the only source of Your energy, I very like this piece, thank You for sharing dear John.

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Littlesong
Wed Jun 14 08:17:53 2017

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My Review of Unguent for Sorrow by Galacticbeam
I find this piece interestring, I felt my self from the first words in a myth tale, then the east Asian feeling take all the control over our senses, there is a mysterious feeling through Your words, which suites the atmosphere You've created, and a hollow space where from silent sorrows You made the cure, uniquely written, thank You for sharing.

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Littlesong
Tue Jun 13 07:25:39 2017

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My Review of Names by JohnCreekmore
You are here, You can feel Yourself, Your mind, Your heart, Your being, even if You can't fully understand Your existence, still there is no question about You, it's not the same for God, to be aware of the higher powers, whatever Your believe is, You need to go through Your own experiences, to feel Your existence at last but from the whole one, ahh!! these days I'm going through the rollercoaster of universe, existence, creation.... etc, trying to put my thoughts and unanswered questions into words.

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Littlesong
Mon Jun 5 07:38:46 2017

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My Review of SIGHT by kitty
Sometimes a small warm hand can pull someone from darkness, sometimes all it's needed is a glimpse of attention and care so that they can carry on the road...

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Littlesong
Mon Jun 5 06:57:53 2017

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My Review of Remember This by JohnCreekmore
Life's Journey
And so, one year is like ten ones, days run like waterfall, this is frighten, with one single glimpse everything can be changed, and life can be turned up side down, in the continuing rollercoaster we keep searching for our answers, if only we can be really aware about the greater life... I wish I can write something like Yours here.

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Littlesong
Sat Jun 3 01:22:39 2017

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My Review of Be Still and Know by JohnCreekmore
It's the process of finding peace, to surrender to the void knowing Your mind will keep echoing, with thoughts floating with mess, little by little the mind learns and yeilds, until it's organized and completely clear with no echoes, just a loud strong voice telling You exactly where to go, I don't find this fearful at all, but as You said, a desirable place to be, Your words described in a way death for me too.

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Littlesong
Sat Jun 3 01:03:05 2017

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My Review of BECAUSE by kitty
Like always, Your words have such a sweet appeal over us, run with joy into our hearts, and this but another poem from You hiting me with its positive power filled with love and hope, You have a style which noone can deny its real positive energy, You create happiness through Your words, thank You dear Kitty*

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 20:34:49 2017

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My Review of The World; Hope’s Archetype by SketerMichaels
Earth
Nature, woman, virgin Mary, Goddess... all I can feel through Your magnificent poem, the secret of existence, the mystery of life, the breath of immortality... You've done one of Your finest poems, I believe the finest so far, beyond a masterpiece, at least with the powerful feeling it created over me, it's a pleasure to read!

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 20:02:00 2017

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My Review of "YOU" by kitty
I don't believe that motherhood feelings and instincts weaken as the children are growing up to adults, but the opposite, it gets stronger and stronger... to read about this womanly side of You dear Kitty is much respected and such a sweet pleasure, I know Donna Your precious daughter is blessed and lucky to have You as her mother, all these yeas by her side, and I know as these personal words have touched You in depth when You wrote them, so they did when Your daughter read them.

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 19:40:53 2017

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My Review of Fulfillment by JohnCreekmore
It's all within us, within our content, the more we enjoy each moment, the more of "real gems" will come our way...

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 19:34:06 2017

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My Review of The Prince by JohnCreekmore
I wonder how many leaders read his book and literally applied it to their worlds, though I think that sometimes as a ruler You need to use strict roughness in order to gain a bigger goal for Your people, but I wonder too if anyone of them has ever read behind the words? maybe if they read Your poem it will help them to understand more.

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 19:01:34 2017

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My Review of True Power by JohnCreekmore
Some people don't understand that even poor or uneducated ( I mean here those who didn't have the chance to study at schools) also have their own dignity and esteem, that it's not about money, not about having more money means to have more respect... unfortunately many still don't understand that money doesn't buy everything, and one day it may all reverse on them.
A pleasure to read Your words again.

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 18:46:26 2017

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My Review of IN KNOWING by kitty
From You...
I wouldn't except less gentle, sweet, positive and spiritual words to fill our hearts with warmth and hope, just another loving and heartwarming poem from You dear Kitty, Thank You my sweet friend for a trully peaceful and hopeful read.

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Littlesong
Mon May 29 18:15:36 2017

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My Review of Ramble On (Song of an Old Bard) by SketerMichaels
Your poem dear Sketer holds deep meaning too, and I can feel that the beautiful soul can stay ever young, the way she wants, I love music and anything written about it I can understand and feel it, just as here, the spirit of music dance slowly and deeply through your lines, You did a wonderful job, I enjoyed reading this as my first coming back poem, thank You*

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Littlesong
Sun Apr 30 12:16:20 2017

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My Review of THE MEMORIES WE HOLD by kitty
Sometimes I wonder if it's better to forget the bitter and sad memories, but then I wonder again, aren't they are also a part of what we have become? and as Your last verse said, we can by experiences and age learn how to control them, and lead them into the road we want, it might be a tough process, but it can be done.
Nice piece Kitty, thank You for keeping sharing them, a great Sunday to You too.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 09:01:22 2017

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My Review of Broken Wing by nancyaliciag
Those who have a heart like Yours, will attract this dying pigeon to them, or maybe even the pigeon will attract her self to You, knowing she will find the peace at her final moments, and knowing that she at her presence, will let You embrace the greatest of lessons, and that You won't look at it like it is just an "event" like many others will do.
I can read behind Your lines, well done and thank You for sharing Your moment with all of us.

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Littlesong
Sat Apr 29 08:16:16 2017

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My Review of THE FINAL CURTAIN by kitty
This is maybe the saddest piece I've read from You, and I understand it, and feel each word, dear Kitty, Your piece spoke and touched my heart sitting here, smelling cofffe at my far room....

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