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Ziyaur
Thu Aug 15 06:41:38 2013

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My Review of Detach by PoorRabbit
veryyyyyyy nice . i like your words really but there is some imagination to be improved.
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Ziyaur
Sun Nov 25 08:15:25 2012

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My Review of The Faith Fighting For Rapture Within Me by ClarkthePoet
Wow
Yeah thats the masterpice i was expecting from an excellent writer. May god bless you and from my point of view = 'keep writing.'
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Ziyaur
Mon Nov 19 02:01:22 2012

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My Review of Heart by Darkmiss27
hmmmm
preety as i told you earlier. you keep your lines in just a short version but meaningfull and touching to heart. yeah
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Ziyaur
Mon Nov 19 01:51:33 2012

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My Review of Mind by Darkmiss27
classical
yeah very good . you wrote a simple but touching poem dude. this is the material i wanted. keep going on and yes also see my similar short story.
You are very good in writing these things. very well!!!!!!!!!
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Ziyaur
Mon Nov 19 01:09:58 2012

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My Review of The Maker's Palette by cherrie_palmer
thats very good
ITs short but touching .........

This was very good and applaud you 4 the below poem...

Author: cherrie_palmer
Created: November 18, 2012 at 09:07 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Nature | Free Verse | General/Other
Entry Stats: 2 views
The Maker's Palette



Little flower, drink in the dew

Petals bare, shimmer bright

Drinking in the morning light

First hint of Sun, see her stretch

Alone she sparkles in her lavender best,

But, amongst this field of flowers wild

The Makerís palette is an awesome sight.

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Ziyaur
Mon Nov 19 01:03:54 2012

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My Review of Love is a star by Saiko
very good
thats the material i wanted. very good
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Ziyaur
Sun Nov 18 07:46:07 2012

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My Review of How are the Mighty?----Fallen. by matelotrod
cool
Very good . thats the ting i wanted. kept me on the edge . really. keep working....

Coffee, coffee, coffee... I'm literally too hungover to gig today and tonight. Playing on Mathew St in a few hours, then in 12 hours, I'll be playing again in Widnes at Beat Bar. If you want to see really bad playing on my part, come on down! All thanks to Roberto Mather and Ollie Graham.
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Ziyaur
Tue Nov 13 21:30:56 2012

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My Review of Nightmare by Joyk_Boy
cool dear. You wrote a fascinating materials.
very good.
One thing more+++++++ I followed your teaching and i am improving my english. thanks for your advice . i am working on it. I have became a fan of you.

Thanks
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Ziyaur
Tue Nov 13 21:14:22 2012

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My Review of Jacob's Ladder by cherrie_palmer
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yeah thats what i was searching. vey well . i have also learned so many things from you and wrote my story:
You give to me hope
And help me to cope
When life pulls me down
You bring me around

You teach me to care
And help me to share
You make me honest
With kindness the best

From you I learned love
With grace from above
It's for you I live
And I want to give

You are the reason
That fills each season
When I hear love I think of you
You are my world and best friend too

I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring
I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing

You made me the man I am
Thank you

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Ziyaur
Tue Nov 13 08:00:07 2012

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My Review of remanufactured souls by oncemoreintohere
good work dude. kept me on the edge. founded an extraordinary piece.

Sorry but i also wants some points to earn so don't mind the words below. ok.
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Ziyaur
Tue Nov 13 07:52:45 2012

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My Review of Apart by fraido
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found something odd
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Ziyaur
Tue Nov 13 07:51:00 2012

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My Review of Please Define the True Frontline by matelotrod
gd
good work. write more
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Ziyaur
Mon Nov 12 06:13:06 2012

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My Review of Silly love poem by Chansen3
ziyaur
You are cool dude. I have learnt so many things from your writing dear. I am in class 10th in school bu with this story i gained lot of courage.
Hopefully you will write more . Thats me!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ziyaur
Sun Nov 4 03:02:56 2012

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My Review of Nowhere To Run by Joyk_Boy
don't like the flow. its vey bad . so try to be fascinating. ok
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