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TempestOfNature
Tue Jul 7 02:53:20 2015

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My Review of NAKED - I come by kitty
<3
Beautiful! I love this! Amazing!

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TempestOfNature
Tue Jul 7 02:42:11 2015

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My Review of "HE" by kitty
I knew one!
I knew a man like this. He was what he was but in the end he became clear to me and I never spoke to him again. Once a man calls you a name. It's a wrap!

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TempestOfNature
Tue Jul 7 02:38:09 2015

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My Review of DRIVEN by kitty
So True!
Some people are quick to believe one thing and not another. Instead of making a change and speak up. We must be aware of what's going on around us or we'll lose it all. Thanks for sharing.

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TempestOfNature
Sun Apr 6 15:36:24 2014

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My Review of Diminishment of a Heart, Gone Arid by Nightmute
Beautiful.
This took my breath away. Hauntingly beautiful. I'm at a lost for words. Thank you for the sharing.
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TempestOfNature
Tue Mar 11 01:16:10 2014

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My Review of Without You by Kelly_Flackey17
Friendship
Real friends are hard to find. This moved me thank you for writing this.
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TempestOfNature
Tue Mar 11 01:00:50 2014

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My Review of Fifteen Dances by Rhythmm
I can relate.
I know someone like this. He too felt the same way. He wants someone to share his life. He has a disability and feels like no one wants to be with him. No one pays him any attention. I do feel that others believe him to be he's a burden. He felt like giving up, however, I came around and ask him why? he and I talk a lot to this day at least someone cares, right? Though the stories differ I'm willing to help in anyway I can.
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TempestOfNature
Thu Jan 3 17:42:24 2013

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My Review of Lying calmly by abbasn
i love it
ahh love in its purest form innocent once blossom becomes infinite. thanks for sharing
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TempestOfNature
Thu Jan 3 17:28:14 2013

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My Review of Pregnancy and Dental Care:Before, During and After by DRMuradThakur
every woman should know
very informative! a must read beforehand.
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TempestOfNature
Thu Jan 3 17:25:43 2013

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My Review of POETIC MEANING by Galacticbeam
agree
i believe there are just some people who look for the rhyming scheme when they reading poetry. its as if you have to be perfect and we all know no one is perfect.
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TempestOfNature
Thu Jan 3 17:22:32 2013

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My Review of Hourglass by abbasn
I know the feeling
i know that feeling when we wish we have the time to say the things we want to say. but it ends up slipping away from our hands. thanks for sharing!
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 15:31:16 2011

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My Review of Mr. American Dream by The_Fictionist
so so so true it never ends! thanks for the write and keep writing. i know someone that fits this poem very well
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 15:11:13 2011

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My Review of IT'S AN ITALIAN THING by Galacticbeam
lol
i know what you mean i live in a diverse city so i know about the ways and how Italians handle themselves. beside i love the poem and you know they are what they say they are! anyway thanks for the write!
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:46:46 2011

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My Review of Count on Your Love by LoveLoi20
what a beautiful write! i love this thanks for adding it looking forward to more of your writes! geesh if i felt this way all the time my heart would melt like hot butter
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:33:35 2011

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My Review of LOVE..What is it? by pinkbrissy
yup some use it as a game just for some self worth or something worth gaining. its important to know what you want and know what you can hold on to. times a changing and nowadays its hard to find that something worth holding on too.
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:28:55 2011

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My Review of Thoughts by pinkbrissy
so true its nice for all the good reason and for many many more. i like this one made me think about a lot of things looking forward to reading more of your writes
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:26:38 2011

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My Review of In Your Hands by Kassandra
we always want to give our all to the one person that matters the most but at times we feel like it will slip away one day never returning never coming back to life. but truth be told we must make an effort to hold on because a strong heart is a courageous heart and without that strength it will break. thanks for the write and thanks for sharing keep it up looking forward to more
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:14:38 2011

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My Review of Circle yes or no by Aquam
reminds me of grade school being young and liking the first boy that ever made me smile and laugh out loud and now that those day are gone you bring them back through this poem i thank you but now that am an adult my feelings tend to be on paper...but i still felt a long ago feeling reading this makes me all mushy inside thanks
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:10:09 2011

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My Review of Mother is born. by renuroy
congrats
not a lot of ppl can say they seen such a beautiful thing. i myself don't know what that feels but i bet its a wonderful feeling still. anyway thanks for the write and again congrats i bet you will be a great mom
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 14:00:30 2011

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My Review of Then & Now by pinkbrissy
sweet
i love it don't know about anyone else but it was well written thank you for sharing and I hope to read more of your work . so please post more if you can! real love last forever!
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TempestOfNature
Wed Aug 24 13:56:29 2011

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My Review of Jezebel by Elpis
tragic
we may go through lost of love but at times we gain a life lesson in the end. to be treated as if our hearts were made of gold and then to find out that it has been painted to look like the real thing. truly a sad piece hope all is well
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TempestOfNature
Wed Feb 16 12:04:23 2011

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My Review of Elation Is Dead... by MusicMyLife
inspiration
Though a sad poem it speaks the truth.We all go through the bad in order to find the good somewhere along the way.thanks for the write again.
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TempestOfNature
Wed Feb 16 11:50:28 2011

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My Review of My Sometimes Frozen Soul... by MusicMyLife
Yup this is me...
Yes! This one reminds me of myself I go through this everyday..well almost everyday when something evil or bad comes to thought because of the past. but I moved on and as slowly as the days passes i put pen to paper just to throw it away. thanks for the write
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TempestOfNature
Wed Feb 16 11:45:01 2011

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My Review of Can I Borrow You, Just For A Sec... by MusicMyLife
relate
I can relate to this! though i don't want to borrow the person for a second i want to the person for the rest of my life. my favorite part is the the first stanza and the last but overall the whole poem made my day.
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TempestOfNature
Tue Dec 21 17:18:37 2010

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My Review of Fire Deep Within by elphie
aww
beautifully written I feel as though I was that girl lying there on that rug and not thinking about getting rug burn lol. thanks for the write am a fan of erotica...and I will be stopping by again to read more of your writes
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TempestOfNature
Tue Dec 21 17:14:57 2010

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My Review of Dear Heart by RavenDCloud
love this
this is truly a winner in my book! It hits home for unlike some people this is perfect the way you wrote it. Am glad I read this today I am going to read it again just because I can. Thank you for the write and I'll be passing by again to read more of your writes!
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