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reggie1969
Sun Dec 31 05:48:59 2017

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My Review of The Evil Never Weep by michaelgallatin
Very Well Writen
This is a very good piece. Please share more!
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reggie1969
Sun Dec 31 05:45:54 2017

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My Review of The Midnight Guest by DarkSouledAngell
Nice Poem
Very nice piece.
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reggie1969
Sat Nov 21 20:12:05 2015

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My Review of A fatal attraction by Anjana
Fatal
The title made me take a closer look and as I did I was utterly shocked at what transpired. I must admit I was looking to read about a smitten love but instead, read about a insect tryst with death, a death that seemed unavoidable because of it's true nature.
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reggie1969
Sat Nov 21 20:04:38 2015

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My Review of Dark To Black by bickerstaffe
Dark to Black
Dark to Black is a piece that I found to possess the potential to give so much more. I think with scalpel like editing this piece can speak loudly and robustly to all audiences.
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reggie1969
Sat Nov 21 19:58:08 2015

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My Review of Adel by michaelgallatin
Inspirational
This a poem that if the world does not change will become common place for heroes like Michael. Please know that as long as his name is uttered amongst the living, he too will live.
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reggie1969
Fri Jul 11 08:02:29 2014

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My Review of What a fucking waste by EnyaRose
Truth Teller
What a shame indeed. Your words resonate the climate in today's society. Please continue to enlightened us.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 12:23:20 2011

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My Review of And i imagined her on fire... by JoanDZombie
Wow
I have always stated that Art imitates life but I pray that in this case it does not. You wrote this poem with such conviction that I am led to believe that if a woman in an office somehow caught a fire...well I must admit if nothing else this is a very interesting poem.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 12:16:11 2011

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My Review of Preparing to cook by Anita
Great
This poem just makes me want to smile. It has all the elements of something that is fun and bubbly. This poem should inspire any who has no desire to cook to want to do so. Please continue write and cook.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 11:56:47 2011

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My Review of This Feeling Inside by MidnightPoet
Well this is love a story if nothing else. A love story that has twist and turns that reminds me of my first high school love. Whatever the desire that makes you write, please do not stop. As I have stated many times over Art imitates life. Good job.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 11:25:16 2011

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My Review of Real Talk by ceebrown09
Great
Glory be to God as he has presented you to world as his mouthpiece, this generations Gabriel to a tribe that is lost! The sexual deviations, the killings and the immoral ways that we as a people carry ourselves in are deplorable. Take heart and know that many will read but few will understand. Thank you for such strong words and above else please continue to write and believe.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 11:06:06 2011

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My Review of asking, "are you positive?" by docholiday
Positive of What?
I hate to be the one that continues to be the bearer of bad news but again I must ask, what are you talking about? I may have missed the point somewhere in those many unnecessary lines so please do tell?! You do have a minuscule amount of skill so I do believe if you just focus in the right direction good things may manifest. In mean time go back to the drawing board, tablet, pad, or whatever you are calling it these days and start over.
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 10:47:04 2011

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My Review of I am not you by Artemis
Powerful
This write is very powerful and it appears to be loaded with anger. Nonetheless, this write is excellent in getting your point across. As the reader, I could not help but feel the anguish and anger in your words. Even though I read it to myself, I did so with a loud angry voice. I do not know whom these words are directed towards but you have made yourself very clear. Keep writing please!
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reggie1969
Wed May 11 10:32:12 2011

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My Review of memory is a story I like to forget by docholiday
Ugh
Let me start by saying this write is very different. I myself have no idea what message you are trying to relay. The formatting is very unusual and the quotes seem out of place. I think you should try harder on putting your message in manner that would be more objective. Unfortunately, this is one story Iíd like to forget!
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reggie1969
Tue Apr 19 20:20:28 2011

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My Review of Empty Mannequin by WritingRose
Excellent
This is a very thought provoking write. It sends me into a world that only you could so vividly describe. Your work led me from one to the next, this truly a write that demands all of the readerís attention. Please, continue to write and inspire! Very Good Job!
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reggie1969
Wed Mar 30 16:18:10 2011

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My Review of A.I.D.S As I Die Slow by LyricalMason101
Wow
Now that's a PSA for anyone who does not understand the dangers of unprotected sex.
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reggie1969
Wed Mar 30 16:12:52 2011

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My Review of Addict of Letter "A" by LyricalMason101
A Ok.
This is A great write, it deserves an A, no pun intended!
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reggie1969
Wed Mar 30 16:10:02 2011

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My Review of Scorpion Checkmate by LyricalMason101
Good.
It certainly has the makings of a good write and read. Keep up the good work.
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 20:57:19 2011

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My Review of Click. Bang. Dead. by Accalia
Powerful
Very powerful and full of emotion. Keep up the good work!!
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 20:54:11 2011

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My Review of Phoenix of Ash, Raven of Snow by Accalia
Good
This is a well-scripted poem. It flows very nicely; however, it does seem to take on a very monotonous spirit. As I read, it definitely made envision someone stating a case of despair without showing a single act of emotion. If sad, dark and despair is what you were going for, then you certainly accomplished that.
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 20:45:32 2011

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My Review of Dad. by VictoriaRose
Your poem actually makes want to reach out to you. The words are very expressive and push the envelope of oddity, which in poetry can most often turn out to be a very good thing. I personally feel that the best poems are the ones that come from our experiences...keep up the good work.
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 20:37:08 2011

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My Review of Bookworm44 by VioletViolence
Very Neat
This is a well written tribute. I know Bookworm44 must feel extremely proud. Please keep up the good work.
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 17:03:19 2011

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My Review of Wet by Caroline
Lucky You!!
You have a certain talent for writing erotic poetry! This poem is very well written. As I read it, I felt as though I was there. Just incredible, keep up the good work!
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reggie1969
Wed Jan 12 16:56:10 2011

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My Review of The Quickie by Caroline
Great!!!
I am literally out of breath. This write, your write takes me on a journey that I thought I could only experience in the bedroom! As I read each line, I desperately felt the need to read the next and the next. This is an awesome poem! I will not soon forget this one.
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reggie1969
Mon Jan 25 17:06:20 2010

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My Review of Rose by michaelirelan
While I have written many poems and have read many more I find this poem to be a good one. You could have bought a little more clarity and detail but for the most part this a good write, please continue to write and explore diferent writing styles. Keep up the good work!
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reggie1969
Mon Jan 25 17:01:00 2010

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My Review of my ex-girlfriend by tylereatspizza
Wow is just about all that come to mind when read this short story. I am not exactly sure what the take away is but I must admit one thing, it was strangely entertaining. So I think you should sit down and see if you can actually construct a complete story. all in all it is a good write, keep up the good work.
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