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Mon Jan 29 20:22:45 2018

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My Review of THE BEACH OF OUR LOVE by seriouspoet
This was absolutely gorgeous, I enjoyed seeing the depth of their love. The lines "Until true love whispered in my ear/ The answer is us" was so wonderful and really added so much more to this poem. In just those simple lines it showed how strong and true their love was. This whole poem was really sweet and gorgeous
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Mon Jan 29 20:13:04 2018

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My Review of Original Goodness by AdaezeMbakwe
This reminds me of Genesis 2:15 "The LORD God took the man and put him in the garden of Eden to work it and keep it" God made the world good and gave us the responsibility of keeping it good. We must try and do what good we can in the world. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I loved the point that you were showing.
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Sun Jan 28 23:29:46 2018

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My Review of Old Mail Road by Malpa
I loved the simplicity to this because it really added a lot more depth to it and gave it this wonderful sense when reading. The imagery in this was so good, and you created such a vivid picture. It was great to read.
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Fri Jan 26 23:48:25 2018

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My Review of The Singing Frog by terrygodwin
Love it, I cracked up at the end. I was waiting to see where it was going, where the punchline was and I was actually starting to wonder if there would be one but it was definitely worth the wait. I enjoyed reading this tremendously, it's a wonderful little story in it and I had a great laugh over it.
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Thu Jan 25 16:00:57 2018

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My Review of The Day of Trouble by JohnCreekmore
This a very intriguing poem, and I think there's a lot that can be said within it. I liked the idea of staying strong and having no fear in the day of trouble and even though it may be hard at the time, it's something to look back on as having only made us stronger. You have a very important point in this poem, it was great to read.
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Thu Jan 25 15:55:27 2018

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My Review of On A Bright And Sunny Day by michaelgallatin
This was wonderful and I'm sure your grandson will love it. This is so reminiscent of Winnie the Pooh, the story in it is so great. Really lovely
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Thu Jan 25 15:48:48 2018

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My Review of A Sad Memory by raidonce
The last line is really sweet but it's got that sad undertone to it which lies throughout the whole poem. I think the poem could've benefited a little from a more consistent structure, it didn't really stick with one and it did at moments appear more like prose than poetry. Still though I enjoyed how your poem really captured the feelings of love that's gone. It was good to read.
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Archia
Tue Jan 16 21:24:19 2018

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My Review of A Touch too far by matelotrod
This was such fun to read. I was wondering how they're cooking adventure would go and I think the right choice was made to leave it to the wife. At least he almost tried though, it was a nice thought. It was really fun to read, and now it's got me thinking about what I'm having for dinner (and if I can convince someone else to make it).
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Fri Jun 2 01:30:53 2017

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My Review of She is childlike by sunnisha
This was so beautiful, I loved seeing how you described this person, and you painted them as such a gorgeous girl. I thought the line "She is a dreamer and thrives on immortal hope" was the best line out of it, everything that it captured was so wonderful. It was a really nice poem to read, and so beautiful.
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Fri Jun 2 01:27:00 2017

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My Review of The Guitarist by LouisCypher
This was haunting, I loved how you built up the tension. I was really curious to see why the man was doing this, and I thought the idea of him getting younger at the end was so good; it really showed more about his character and his motivations and also the evilness behind him. I really enjoyed reading this, it was horrifying but great.
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Thu Jun 1 08:18:22 2017

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My Review of Laté Da Le by shomurio
You've created such a beautiful poem, it was so lovely to read and wonderful to see your inspiration behind it. I am wondering was Late Da Le means, I'm curious to know how it fits in with the poem. I could just imagine someone painting this gorgeous picture, you really described it all so beautifully.
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Fri Apr 28 23:05:40 2017

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My Review of Short but sweet by Aljosa
This made me go awww, the love that it tells of is so gorgeous and sweet. There's just a few little things here and there which look like typos, so maybe just give this a quick read over. I really enjoyed this; the last line just captures all of it together and really shows the everlasting nature of this love. Overall it was just so sweet.
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Fri Apr 14 22:37:39 2017

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My Review of 004. The Computer Prayer by Profanisaurus
This is very clever. It's a different take on the Lord's Praer but one that I wonder if many people would be hoping for their computers each day. Great poem, it gave me a good laugh.
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Fri Apr 14 22:36:13 2017

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My Review of 558. by Profanisaurus
This is an excellent point, and it makes me wonder, which way is it better to be rich in? I liked how showed both sides of these people, in their richness and their poorness, it was great poem to read.
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Fri Apr 14 22:27:36 2017

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My Review of Take Me by calsdarkembrace
I could imagine this as a song, it's got that feel to it. I enjoyed reading this and seeing the emotions of this person's love. I thought these two lines were great "Those blue eyes glowing in the dark/ Will be my light" I loved the idea behind that and I think it really added a lot more. Great poem.
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Fri Apr 14 02:51:37 2017

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My Review of hope you find by vivididol
Lovely poem, it did have a sad element to it but there was also that idea of wishing them the best and moving on, which was really one. The small thing that was a bit off-putting though are the abbreviations. 'u' should be 'you' and, maybe it's just me, but when I see things like that I feel that if someone doesn't go to the effort to spell properly then there's probably not a lot of effort in the poem. And I'm not saying it means your poem is bad or there's not a lot of effort in it, I know my own work is riddled with spelling issues, but it looks a little careless. That aside though I really enjoyed the meaning and the story in your poem. I liked the use of prince charming and the princess, and that fairytale idea it brough with it. The flow of it as well was really good. It was a great poem to read.
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Thu Apr 13 05:58:48 2017

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My Review of Never Shatter by Filmgirl39
This had a really nice flow to it, I could imagine it sung. I really liked the idea you used of comparing love to glasses never shattering. There's just a small typo in the least line. This is a just short poem,the flow's great and it has a nice meaning in it.
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Thu Mar 30 08:22:46 2017

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My Review of Wishing by Maelona
This is such a gorgeous poem, it's so beautiful. I loved the rhyme and I think it adds to the beauty of this poem because it makes it flow so smoothly. You painted such a beautiful picture and I could imagine the butterfly, and leaf and robin, it encompassed the whole feeling of nature. Very gorgeous.
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Tue Mar 28 02:23:39 2017

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My Review of Catching the Bus by RamSlade
It's so sublte and simple and it makes it so sad. It puts so much more impact in the end which, despite this being so short, is really strong. It's a great, simple poem but has so much more to it.
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Tue Mar 28 01:43:41 2017

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My Review of Perfection by Book-worm14
This came across as very deep and complex, with a lot behind it. I loved the idea of this relfection on the other side of the glass. My one suggestion would be to put some paragraphs in, it looks like you had the intentions of it, there's obvious pauses, so maybe something just went wrong in the formatting, but it would be easier to read. I loved the imagery of this beautiful person, and the rivers of tears, it was really great. Overall it was a great poem.
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Tue Mar 28 01:39:26 2017

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My Review of A Fine Dream by michaelgallatin
If only the world could always be a dream and we could spend our time laughing joyously amongst our friends and happiness. Unfortunately that can never be and we must all wake up from the sweetest of dreams. I really enjoyed your poem and for a moment being able to imagine this peaceful place. The poem was executed beautifully, it was great to read.
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Sat Mar 25 01:12:23 2017

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My Review of The Wounded Bird Becomes A Dragon by EdwinBozie
Reading this by itself, because I haven't read Dragon Zone or Dream Weaver, I really ejoyed this. I could almost imagine a character singing it to another. I liked how it started with the wounded bird still flying and then they emerged as a strong dragon. I did feel like the last part wasn't as hopeful as the part before it, perhaps I missed a point in it but it didn't seem as hopeful for the future as the idea of a bird becoming a dragon was. Still though this was a great poem and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Wed Mar 1 08:14:59 2017

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My Review of Computer Headache by matelotrod
This did give me a laugh. Once I get used to one type of computer or program I never want to have to change it. I have Windows 8 but I changed it so I could stick with Windows 7. Anyway your poem reminded me of that and the struggles with computers. There's always someone who just knows everything about them and it's so much easier to let them sort it out. It was fun to read a poem about a topic that was a bit different and I had to laugh about it.
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Wed Mar 1 08:05:49 2017

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My Review of Meet Me In The Stars by weemick1960
This was so beautiful, the expression of love that came through in this poem was wonderful. I did love the line 'Meet me in the stars' and how it was your key line. The idea of stars, and moonlight and dancing conjures up such a beautiful image. The rhyme also worked really well in your poem and it made it flow smoothly which made the poem all the more lovely.
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Wed Mar 1 07:56:54 2017

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My Review of The Sounds of Nature by loverofpoetry7
This really beautifully captured the essence of nature. I think expressing nature through its sounds is such a wonderful way to do it. Great haiku.
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