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darkdragonhunter
Wed Apr 18 11:05:54 2012

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My Review of Perfectly Imperfect by XxEyesWideOpenxX
Amazing!
I loved the rhyme scheme and your diction. I also loved how you painted your images.
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darkdragonhunter
Wed Apr 18 10:58:35 2012

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My Review of Blades by CloudNumber9
Really Good
I love your word choice and use of differnt words. I also love how you paint an image and then paint another, but you never leave the main point or theme. I loved the poem and hope to read more of your work.
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darkdragonhunter
Wed Apr 18 10:49:18 2012

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My Review of Liam (ch. 1) by AmberIsSmiling
Pretty good.
I thought the story was great, but the sentences were kind of choppy and incomplete. You stopped in random places and then went on. If this was the way you ment to write it though, I apologize for interjecting my thoughts. Also, when you say "Hes too good for me," you need to put a punctuation mark in He's.
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darkdragonhunter
Wed Apr 18 10:26:14 2012

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My Review of My Final Midnight Sky by ForeverTogether
Great
I love your writing.
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darkdragonhunter
Tue Apr 17 18:05:42 2012

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My Review of The Girl With No Emotions by ForeverTogether
Great
I love how you rhyme your poems, but they still flow when I read it.
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