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JoanDZombie2RC
Wed Mar 22 20:34:06 2017

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My Review of Little Miss Molly's Costume by ThePriestess
I love the Miss Molly poems!! I love the discriptions of the wings and her dog being a cloud...but is Miss Molly going out by herself? GOOD ONE!!
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Wed Mar 22 20:23:37 2017

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My Review of Little Miss Molly Visits The Zoo by ThePriestess
That was fun! it was like taking a trip to the zoo right here at my computer! soo Hey Timmie do you remember me? I am the zombie queen... sorry I don't know how to figure out how to get mail from this site but I hope you will text me @ 530-318-8264!! that's my cell phone number! please contact me!! I am full of magic to be sure!! I would like a high priestess to help me with stuff
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Wed Mar 22 20:10:09 2017

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My Review of Jellyfish by DWilkin
The death of a Jellyfish?? at first its talking about you getting stung by a jelly fish and then suddenly I see the poor jelly fish dying! possibly the poor jelly would be used for the prevagyn medication (the one where your trying to get your memory back) it eventually goes back into the ocean but hes cold dead poor jelly
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Wed Mar 22 20:03:10 2017

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My Review of Ode to Burritos by DWilkin
OMG I WANT A BURRITO NOW!!! you made it sound sooo delicious I could have a burrito everyday for the rest of my life!! I usually have Mexican food when I am feeling depressed or something bad is going on in my life that is trying to work itself out...usually a burrito will make the problem seem less big I usually eat the hot stuff in place of cutting myself when I'm having a problem! it couldn't hurt cause its fresh vegetables right? yummy!
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Wed Mar 22 19:53:16 2017

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My Review of Green Lamp by DWilkin
This poem was way relaxing to read!! I would love to hear someones lovely voice reading this one poem before I go to bed in a dark room with a crystal lamp makig the room feel like something from a story book or an old dusty Christmas hope what I just wrote inspires you to write something else!!
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Wed Mar 22 19:39:48 2017

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My Review of I don't Hate You by demon_love
Sounds to me like a couple who has been together for a very long time...and sometime they fight but they love each other very much and they can not stop loving because they are soo very attracted to one another!! Awesome!
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Wed Mar 22 19:28:17 2017

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My Review of Top Of The Tree (That's Tricky) by Silverblue
one day I thought to myself that I need an on line locker for all of my writings so I found writers network not knowing what it is or how it works...so I put a few pieces on and somebody wrote a review! somebody actually saw what I wrote!! from there I just kept writing and finding inspiration for everything!! writing down everything I know about things and submitting them! and lots of poems came out of the wood work and I got to save them all! and I don't have a clutter box of poems in my room anymore cause I put them all on here! of course you can only submit 5 a day...I got them all on there because I put 5 on a day...redundant much? now I'm soo happy cause I can just start writing on this site and its here forever
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Tue Mar 21 21:56:41 2017

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My Review of Listen To Your Inner Voice by Constance_
A lot darker then your other poems...altho i don't know if this is a poem...i also like classical music...
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Tue Mar 21 21:44:11 2017

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My Review of Using Invisible Ink by Constance_
That sounds like its definitely from somebodys head! i like how you said and emerald ocean instead of blue... and the leaf in it!! wow!
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Tue Mar 21 21:34:46 2017

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My Review of The Butterfly In Me by Constance_
purple feathery dress!! another flowy poem from you!!
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Tue Mar 21 21:32:00 2017

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My Review of Harmony by Constance_
I am going to try one of these for my own collection!! I don't quite understand it but i like it!
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Tue Mar 21 21:16:54 2017

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My Review of Forever by Constance_
Maybe you can go to France with him!!! French love!! while eating a baguette!
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Tue Mar 21 21:13:20 2017

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My Review of Paris, My Destination by Constance_
You will have to know French!!! start with videos called "Telifrancais" on youtube... we watched it I French class in high school!! we called it the ananana show!! (pineapple) have fun in France!!
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Tue Mar 21 21:08:31 2017

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My Review of Raindrops Falling by Constance_
Short and sweet!!
This is something you can say to the plants to start up a conversation...yes with a plant!!
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Tue Mar 21 21:00:17 2017

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My Review of In The Corner by Constance_
This poem made me feel like I was gliding!! I pictured in your room a giant hole that has all of your ideas spinning and going into your head...a place where you can also fly out of your room into a blue sky where there are cotton candy clouds (that have nothing to with anything sticky) if there is anything sticky just use the flying sinks with wings...you should write a story out of that I don't mind just give me credit
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Tue Mar 21 20:46:57 2017

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My Review of Memories, In The Silent Dust by Constance_
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Now this is the stuff I like you read!! nailed it!!! I loved the part about silent dust...I can just imagine the treasures!!! what great things can you find up there? a penny farthing? a sexy pic of your gramma when she was young? and old type writer that you can restore and write the greatest story on?
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Tue Mar 21 20:38:10 2017

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My Review of What Will You Wear To Walmart? by michaelgallatin
I saw an older man wearing some clown pants and an ill fitting Indian jacket top vest it was short sleeved and skin showing under...gross...I think he might have been homeless...cause he smelled when I went past him...
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Tue Mar 21 15:47:37 2017

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My Review of The Great Wall Of Trumpiness by michaelgallatin
I wish we could give land back to the Indians...we should start an army of Indians to kill Trump!! I mean it was their land!! why not have a Trump killing spree!! that is the only thing I would do to be scary and violent in my life...the rest is just verbal anyways...
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Tue Mar 21 15:41:34 2017

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My Review of It's Not That I Hate Trump by michaelgallatin
Buffoon!!!
I love how you used the word buffoon!! I love that word!!and ya Donald Trump as we all know is that word...ill say it again BUFFOON!!!! love that word...Trump is messing everything up...I wonder why so many people still like him? maybe they are BAFFOONS too? yupperooni!!!
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Tue Mar 21 15:32:42 2017

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My Review of Riding by michaelgallatin
I like the first stanza the best!! I like how you talked about deleting and going to go ride your bike...but you didn't delete anything!!and you decided to keep writing the poem! probably because there is nothing else to do on a miserable winter day...
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Tue Mar 21 15:27:57 2017

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My Review of Baptized In Blood by michaelgallatin
This reminded me of the gold rush in my state California...The white man took land because they wanted gold or whatever...and they were greedy...we could have learned so much more from them!!
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Tue Mar 21 15:20:36 2017

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My Review of Time Was by michaelgallatin
oh noo you don't!!! I am the next nut case in line!!! I practically live at my group therapy spot!! but even if that is fun its still good to know that it will end someday and we will all be somewhere else...Time is short I guess...that is who I am trying to teach all the things that I know to other people and having them see what my opinions are...before I die so they can read them at my funeral or something...altho I would have to die again...
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Tue Mar 21 15:13:43 2017

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My Review of Dear Old Fellow by michaelgallatin
I liked how it was another poem about war (possibly) and about an old friend who stuck by you when you had times of trouble...its nice to have someone older than you to look up to... to trust and get you through the hard times cause they have been through it!!!
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Tue Mar 21 15:06:35 2017

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My Review of Religious Questions (Lord's Prayer Redone Sequel) by michaelgallatin
I think we are all here to learn from our past and our elders tell us storys and we listen (if we choose to do so) and your poem made me learn something so I came here for a learning experience from you!! I think we are here to learn and if things get bad we use our imaginations to get out of life a little bit...I think that people secretly put us in schools to be bored and then get distracted so we can make cool new stuff and laugh when we are actually learning about boring stuff...this is why we have swimming pools...hot tubs...cars...fish tanks...most of the time we don't see those things at school!! so yay for being distracted in school so at least we can enjoy other peoples imagination!!
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Tue Mar 21 14:49:19 2017

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My Review of This Sad Farce (For Jim Slaughter) by michaelgallatin
Ya we are totally a mistake that God shouldn't have kept...but I guess he likes flawed things!...
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