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JoanDZombie2RC
Wed Apr 19 00:38:17 2017

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My Review of My Soldier by PoetGLG123
I really enjoyed this eve tho it ended too soon for me ...I once wrote a poem that is somewhere on my 2 sites that is called "Pineapple Happiness" it was a random poem I wrote but one of my friends said that it sounded like a war poem or something...I think you will like it if you can find it...
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Wed Apr 12 20:56:04 2017

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My Review of OODLES OF OO'S by richom
I thought this was going to be about spaghetti O's... or something...or at least a noodle...maybe the couple were just noodles themselves...I thought it was engaging!
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Sun Mar 26 01:06:51 2017

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My Review of One-Way Conversations by odinroark
That's soo sad!! I imagined a sad guy sitting at a diner eating all depressed and stuff!! how sad is that? and he is probably going crazy sorry about your friend
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Sat Mar 25 21:50:04 2017

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My Review of WHAT WE ARE HUNGRY FOR WHAT WE ARE NOT by Galacticbeam
We are hungry for knowledge all the time ad if we didn't learn things we would be soo bored!! I like how you talked about the jewels!! great writing! something to think about!!
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Sat Mar 25 12:54:11 2017

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My Review of So Little Time by odinroark
I love the part with the tortoise! must be a big pet! I liked that it was about the ocean..ad that it was in the future? was this the guys that will land on Mars? some great great grand child of someone? I loved this poem! I am going to have to read more of your writings!
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Sat Mar 25 12:44:58 2017

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My Review of Sagacious Lens by odinroark
it seems like when your on the road to life you are going farther away from your parents and you have to look back once in a while... then you see your name in lights because you did something awesome!! you don't have to be like an adult to become an adult...I still watch all kinds of cartoons!! you can be successful but don't ever grow up!!
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Sat Mar 25 03:11:45 2017

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My Review of New Field: Author Notes by support
I love this section because I can tell the people who read my writing everything about the piece!!! I often don't make sense of things so this is a good way to tell something!
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Sat Mar 25 03:08:04 2017

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My Review of A Writing Community by support
it took me a while to find a place that was an easy place to access everything very easily!!! and its fun to write!!! Thank you for making a site like this!
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Sat Mar 25 03:05:07 2017

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My Review of Week Long Giveaway! by support
hmm I wasn't a reviewer back then as much as I am now...im just trying to get to diamond reviewer just because I would like to see the word diamond on my profile!!
I wonder what is next? I need to just do more reviewing so I can get there...I do more reviewing then my own writing on here!!
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Sat Mar 25 03:01:03 2017

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My Review of Content Ratings & Filters by support
I don't always rat my writing..mostly because I don't use profanity or adult humor...most of my writing nobody can understand anyway cause its trippy!!
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Sat Mar 25 02:57:07 2017

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My Review of Importance of Writing Categories by support
I don't care if people read my poems or storys etc..I just want to continue to make my work safe from ripping papers on the floor..water spills...stuff like that
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Sat Mar 25 02:51:50 2017

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My Review of W-N Emoticons by support
This was fun to look at even tho I already know what is there!! I use these all the time in my writing!! na...im kind of a liar about that...but I know how to use the emoticons!!
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Sat Mar 25 02:48:19 2017

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My Review of Login Issues: Privacy & Cookies by support
I like cookies...I didn't understand this...but I don't think I nee it anyways...but cookies are always good! especially Oreos!! and peanut butter cookies!! sometimes I get crumbs I my computer from eating cookies!! and remember C is for cookie!!
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Sat Mar 25 02:42:57 2017

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My Review of Reporting a Rule Violation by support
We need a safe community!! thank you for making rules!
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Sat Mar 25 02:38:41 2017

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My Review of Writing Portfolio & Folders by support
It took me a long time to figure this out and all you have to do is put a number and add a screen and click the outside of the page! so easy!
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Sat Mar 25 02:29:04 2017

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My Review of Getting Started on Writers-Network by support
I have been a member of this site since 2004 and I love it!! I started putting stuff online so that I don't have a junkie old box of stuff hanging around for other people to touch or go in my room and snoop...I just wanted a safe place to put m things and then I saw some people were reviewing my work!! and more and more people did!! I was happy that I would wake up in the morning and find that I had another review...but I'm still pretty much just doing it so I have a safe spot where people can look at my stuff but not mess with it!!
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Sat Mar 25 02:20:08 2017

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My Review of Tutorial: Adding Music Player by support
I tried doing this before...but in a couple of months it just stopped working and I couldn't get rid of the video player and nobody helped me to do that so I had a friend help me get if off...that's it...
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Sat Mar 25 02:14:29 2017

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My Review of Tutorial: Add Pictures Using HTML by support
I will have to try this one too at some point!! Thanks! and keep writing poetry and stuff!
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Sat Mar 25 02:11:00 2017

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My Review of Tutorial: Adding a Custom Background Image by support
Cool!!! I'm going to try this one day!! I really need a new background of a grave yard from the movie Phantom of the Opera...that would be zombie-ish right?? cant wait to do it!!! see ya!
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Sat Mar 25 02:04:56 2017

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My Review of Tutorial: Basic HTML Tags (Part 1) by support
I like the color thing!! sounds fun!! and I also like the font thing!!! sounds easy!
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Sat Mar 25 02:00:12 2017

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My Review of Test Upload by support
Testing 1-2-3 is this thing on?? that was a creative way to test things!! keep writing!!
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Sat Mar 25 01:51:35 2017

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My Review of My Lord, what have we done. by dmph84
I think that time is slipping away for me because I keep living at my parents house...where will it end??? but in my group therapy I'm told that its nothing to be ashamed of to be living with your parents...where will I be when they die? homeless? will other family members care for me?? can I start living in some kind of group home? I'm scared...
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Sat Mar 25 01:46:14 2017

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My Review of Time by dmph84
Poetry is my new writing called "Camping time!" come read it on my site!! its my newest poem!!! its really fun!!
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Sat Mar 25 01:42:00 2017

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My Review of They Hold Us Here With Paper Chains by dmph84
Ya there is a lot of evil around...and it will never stop!! cant we just have love? no? you want to kill me? k
Dan! this is your friend Joan!!! remember me? your silly American friend??? you need to try to text me or something...I don't know if texting works over seas but we need to communicate again!!! amandalynnetaylor.8@gmail.com
e mail me please?
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Wed Mar 22 20:34:06 2017

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My Review of Little Miss Molly's Costume by ThePriestess
I love the Miss Molly poems!! I love the discriptions of the wings and her dog being a cloud...but is Miss Molly going out by herself? GOOD ONE!!
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