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JoanDZombie2RC
Thu Jun 15 19:06:21 2017

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My Review of In The Park by vivididol
these people don't appreciate what they already have...the little girl with the doll just wants to eat...maybe her parents don't feed her...I think they can all get together and help each other...its sad that the guy with the black dog cant smile I would think one would smile with a black dog..but then he and the black dog need to eat...perhaps the woman with the parasol can feed them and shelter them all...I don't know...
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Thu Jun 15 19:00:12 2017

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My Review of Uncrowned King by vivididol
Sounds to me like a good meditation song...just a soft weird song I see them walking on the beach at different ends trying to get to each other...and they don't even know each other!!! and its at sunset...and its beautiful...and it might be at the end of a movie...yeah...
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Thu Jun 15 18:55:08 2017

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My Review of hope you find by vivididol
I see you walking along a dirt road with trees all around and you are saying good bye to her...you cant have a healthy relationship when someone steals from you...sounds like you still love her...if you love her let her go...
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Thu Jun 15 18:46:02 2017

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My Review of Strange Girl by vivididol
So this girl probably suffered some weird mental health cases...I feel sorry for her but she is probably highly creative...that's a positive... art makes the world go round and makes the happiest of people actually feel feels...strange people are creative and other strange people may be able to understand...you are not strange...you don't understand, anyways
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Thu Jun 15 18:36:15 2017

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My Review of simple mathmatics by vivididol
So its not just a math problem...its a life problem!! kinda reminds me of my poem "Are You Soup?" kinda has underlying tones to it instant therapy session!
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Sat May 20 21:43:44 2017

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My Review of The Light at the end of the Tunnel by SAnthonyH
The ultimate zombie poem!! I saw him dying then I his den and then dying again...definitely spot light material!!
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Sat May 20 21:38:43 2017

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My Review of Mirror World by SAnthonyH
Donald Trump is the worst president America has ever had...this relates to the little child who is just discovering a mirror...that child IS Donald Trump!! enough said...
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Sat May 20 21:32:17 2017

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My Review of Suspended in a sunbeam by SAnthonyH
yeah...kinda like the way I want today to start over so I can see my sexy Jazzercise teacher again...but I totally realize that I'm going again tomorrow!!! what a treat!! anyway...good job...im off to read more or yours
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Fri May 19 22:11:01 2017

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My Review of Pathway by MJMitchell
Nature is really awesome! its nice to be in fresh air! I'm going to go outside right now!!this is so fun to explore! have fun outside!!
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Fri May 19 22:08:00 2017

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My Review of Communion by MJMitchell
Communion is a good way to be spiritual...it really makes you think about everything...an it makes you think about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ who died for us!!
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Fri May 19 22:04:25 2017

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My Review of Carmen by MJMitchell
I see a little girl sitting on the floor on a rug playing with her dollys in the living room with the sun beaming from the window...almost a ghostly figure of nostalgia for you!! for you were that little girl once...or you were a boy who watched her sister and thought "that's stupid to play with dolls" yet you sit there playing with your action figures which is basically the same thing...really fun simple poem!!
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Fri May 19 21:58:29 2017

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My Review of To Mommy by MJMitchell
This is adorable! I love how the baby cant talk but you give it a voice!! I love that you love the Lord makes me happy to be in Christ with you!!
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Fri May 12 21:16:40 2017

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My Review of Moe and Afreen by EltonCamp
Omg she was trapped! and then she stabbed him??? I guess they loved each other for a while and then something happened I hate when that happens!
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Wed Apr 19 00:38:17 2017

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My Review of My Soldier by PoetGLG123
I really enjoyed this eve tho it ended too soon for me ...I once wrote a poem that is somewhere on my 2 sites that is called "Pineapple Happiness" it was a random poem I wrote but one of my friends said that it sounded like a war poem or something...I think you will like it if you can find it...
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Wed Apr 12 20:56:04 2017

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My Review of OODLES OF OO'S by richom
I thought this was going to be about spaghetti O's... or something...or at least a noodle...maybe the couple were just noodles themselves...I thought it was engaging!
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Sun Mar 26 01:06:51 2017

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My Review of One-Way Conversations by odinroark
That's soo sad!! I imagined a sad guy sitting at a diner eating all depressed and stuff!! how sad is that? and he is probably going crazy sorry about your friend
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Sat Mar 25 21:50:04 2017

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My Review of WHAT WE ARE HUNGRY FOR WHAT WE ARE NOT by Galacticbeam
We are hungry for knowledge all the time ad if we didn't learn things we would be soo bored!! I like how you talked about the jewels!! great writing! something to think about!!
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Sat Mar 25 12:54:11 2017

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My Review of So Little Time by odinroark
I love the part with the tortoise! must be a big pet! I liked that it was about the ocean..ad that it was in the future? was this the guys that will land on Mars? some great great grand child of someone? I loved this poem! I am going to have to read more of your writings!
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Sat Mar 25 12:44:58 2017

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My Review of Sagacious Lens by odinroark
it seems like when your on the road to life you are going farther away from your parents and you have to look back once in a while... then you see your name in lights because you did something awesome!! you don't have to be like an adult to become an adult...I still watch all kinds of cartoons!! you can be successful but don't ever grow up!!
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Sat Mar 25 03:11:45 2017

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My Review of New Field: Author Notes by support
I love this section because I can tell the people who read my writing everything about the piece!!! I often don't make sense of things so this is a good way to tell something!
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Sat Mar 25 03:08:04 2017

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My Review of A Writing Community by support
it took me a while to find a place that was an easy place to access everything very easily!!! and its fun to write!!! Thank you for making a site like this!
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Sat Mar 25 03:05:07 2017

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My Review of Week Long Giveaway! by support
hmm I wasn't a reviewer back then as much as I am now...im just trying to get to diamond reviewer just because I would like to see the word diamond on my profile!!
I wonder what is next? I need to just do more reviewing so I can get there...I do more reviewing then my own writing on here!!
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Sat Mar 25 03:01:03 2017

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My Review of Content Ratings & Filters by support
I don't always rat my writing..mostly because I don't use profanity or adult humor...most of my writing nobody can understand anyway cause its trippy!!
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Sat Mar 25 02:57:07 2017

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My Review of Importance of Writing Categories by support
I don't care if people read my poems or storys etc..I just want to continue to make my work safe from ripping papers on the floor..water spills...stuff like that
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Sat Mar 25 02:51:50 2017

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My Review of W-N Emoticons by support
This was fun to look at even tho I already know what is there!! I use these all the time in my writing!! na...im kind of a liar about that...but I know how to use the emoticons!!
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