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vuriz
Tue Apr 17 00:06:05 2018

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My Review of Twilight Has Entered My Life by babyboomer68
Good job
I enjoyed your piece. The refrain "Twilight has entered my life" is affective. Good job.
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vuriz
Sun Apr 15 16:09:49 2018

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My Review of poetry by numbers by erichkessner
good job
Crazy little piece, strange, but in a good way. keep up the "out there" style and do your thing. thanks Victor.
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vuriz
Sun Apr 15 16:05:33 2018

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My Review of Lightning Johnson (Attention - Uses The N Word) by michaelgallatin
good job
I like the fighter metaphor. Good use of language and imagery. Keep on, keeping on and float like a butterfly and sting like a bee, you can't hit what you can't see. thanks man, Victor
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vuriz
Thu Apr 12 10:04:00 2018

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My Review of Memory by Silverblue
Good
Very picturesque, that feeling of permanence. Who can tell if it is ones heart or mind that holds on to things. The way I interpret this may not be what you intended, but I found my personal meaning-----good Haikus are like that. Good job, keep up the great work and thanks for the read, Victor
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vuriz
Fri Jun 9 17:28:14 2017

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My Review of Sonnet- XXX by darkelegy
good job
A nice piece. I like the old fashion style and use of a carefully composed piece. It sounds like or reads like a piece composed by a poet from the past. Nice job and good use of rhythm and syntax. Keep up the good work and well done. thanks for the read, Victor
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vuriz
Fri Jun 9 17:25:34 2017

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My Review of Last adieu by sunnisha
good job
Very nice and touching. Seems a bit sad and full on passion and love. keep wringing, good job, keep up the good work.
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vuriz
Fri Jun 9 17:18:27 2017

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My Review of Untitled by blossomwriter
Nice job
Nice use of visionary cures. Etherial and majestic. It has an eerie quality about it as well. Very nice haiku, keep up the good work and write-on, write-on and write-on.
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vuriz
Mon Apr 17 18:21:10 2017

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My Review of MORE APRIL FRAGMENTS OF MAMA'S DIARY & POETRY BOOK by MaryHazelUpton
Nice piece
I love finding old places that have a mystique about them. There must be a thousand stories of the things that have happened there. Stories of picnics, love and things gone amiss------innocence lost, stolen kisses and maybe even an unexpected ending to a love affair of like?????? Creepy but in a good way. thanks for the read. Keep up the great work. I enjoyed you skill and talents. Victor
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vuriz
Mon Jan 9 14:06:40 2017

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My Review of
Blizzard of Love
by DeviantWriter88
nice job
A very timely piece. The snow is falling and love is all around. I liked your use of a winter metaphor. With global warming now upon us, there will be a lot more warmth and melting to fall into. thanks for the fun read. Keep up the great work, Can't wait to read your spring piece. thanks again, Victor
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vuriz
Mon Jan 9 12:08:49 2017

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My Review of
Doors
by DeviantWriter88
Got it
Yep, you write and speak the truth. I like the directness and starkness of your piece. It seems that more folks choose to shut the door, as it is often to painful to open it and let others in. So as Thoreau said, "We live out lives of quiet desperation". This is why I applaud poets and writers, they are the ones who still have the courage to open their door and be vulnerable to the world. Keep writing and keep that door open. Great job. Thanks for the insightful read. Victor
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vuriz
Wed Dec 28 12:12:52 2016

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My Review of Flower # Haiku by JonLondon
I like it
Good job, and a nice metaphors. I'm kind of missing spring in the heart of winter. Thanks for the reminder of the seasons yet to come. Good job and keep up the good work. Stay true to the course and write what you feel, be fearless with your words, honest with your creativity and true to your heart. thanks again for the fun read, Your's truly Victor
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vuriz
Thu Dec 8 10:22:57 2016

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My Review of I NEED YOU MIA AMORE by seriouspoet
nice job
Pretty race stuff. But the poetry allows such love expressions to feel pure and genuine. You rock, keep up the great word and thanks for the read Victor
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vuriz
Thu Nov 17 20:58:51 2016

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My Review of The Nominee by DonaZeroZero
Love it
Great job. A creative way to put the man into perspective. Thanks for the read, Victor
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vuriz
Wed Nov 16 15:31:25 2016

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My Review of Anywhere But Here by Littlesong
good job
I enjoyed the read. Often times poetry can come off as sappy or lame, but this piece is different. It's sexy in a tender way, it sounds organic and genuine. You are lucky to have someone who has ignited your muse within....Thanks for the nice read. Keep up the good work.
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vuriz
Sun Aug 28 17:34:36 2016

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My Review of Love in rhythm by PoetGLG123
I liked it
Good imagery, nice analogies, good rhythm and groove. Nice ending too. thanks for there read Victor
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vuriz
Sun Aug 28 17:32:50 2016

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My Review of Elemental Beauties by blossomwriter
interesting
Ever changing and interesting....thanks for the read....
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vuriz
Sun Aug 28 15:54:11 2016

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My Review of A Smile by blossomwriter
good job
I totally agree. Your simplicity is pure Zen. I try and follow the advice within your Haiku. Thanks for the great read, Victor
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vuriz
Sun Aug 28 15:51:51 2016

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My Review of Love Is A Flame by blossomwriter
good job
Good job, keep up the good work, thanks for the nice read, Victor
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vuriz
Sun Aug 7 13:20:54 2016

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My Review of Haiku poems by cwoof
Good job
I enjoyed your unorthodox style. Good use of visual cues, nice tempe and rhythm. A fine piece and thanks for the nice read. thanks again, Victor
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vuriz
Fri Jul 1 17:23:47 2016

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My Review of Tongues and Roses: The Savage War by Hardy_Cooper
feeling it
You took me there, through smell, taste and sound. I felt as if I were in the room, not sure as a voyeure or a participant, but it was fun read. Keep it up (so t speak) hah hah
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vuriz
Wed Jun 29 14:17:39 2016

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My Review of INSOMNIA by babyboomer68
Great job
I suffer from insomnia at times and find this piece entertaining and extremely clever. "Clever" is a poor choice of words, bette yet, a great use of irony. The last line nailed it down tight.......
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vuriz
Wed Jun 29 09:35:28 2016

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My Review of MIDNIGHT IN SITKA PARK by babyboomer68
Good job
Your project took me there. A playground can be a lonely place when deserted and the hour is late. Something about an article of clothing left behind seems sad. Childhood is a place as well as a time and an age. Good job and keep up the interesting work. All the best with your writing----Victor
PS don't let editors or rejected submissions bring you down.
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vuriz
Mon Jun 27 17:18:11 2016

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My Review of Bad Lighting by blossomwriter
nice piece
Lots of stuff going on with this piece. It could be about a lamp, or about getting old or the ambiguity of life etc......good read, thank and keep up the good work. Victor
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vuriz
Tue Jun 21 16:10:36 2016

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My Review of Love Sold Separately by augustrush
good job
Nice piece and I really dig the title.....a good if on "batteries not included" . Love it..
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vuriz
Tue Jun 21 13:11:47 2016

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My Review of Zen and the Art of Laughing Last by StayingFrosty92
good job
A great variety of haikus. Keep up the good work. Very eclectic and interesting. I would say they a very abstract, but I think that is the beauty of writing and reading dense pieces in a Haiku format. thanks again for the read. Victor
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