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Leopassion7
Mon Jun 24 19:26:30 2013

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My Review of Ms. Understood by TheVirghost
deep
You always deliver the thought provoking realism that many in society wish to ignore. Still love your work!

-Lp
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Leopassion7
Fri Mar 22 23:35:36 2013

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My Review of Fair Warning Given by EltonCamp
Cute
Nice and light with a consistent rhyme. The simpleness lets it flow without confusion amd matches the theme perfectly. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
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Leopassion7
Sun Jul 24 01:26:38 2011

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My Review of Alone by poet101
Sad
Seems you have many thoughts here. deep thoughts about love and its loss. thanks for sharing.

-Lp7
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Leopassion7
Sun Jul 24 01:23:45 2011

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My Review of My love for you by poet101
Sweet
Endearing and thoughtful. Your friend is very lucky to have you in their corner. Appreciate the read.
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Leopassion7
Wed Mar 30 01:39:27 2011

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My Review of The Moment by Caesar
Inspiring
This is a piece beckoning one to share the thoughts it invokes. Indeed, I really enjoyed reading this one and reflecting on "the moment". And I can't even begin to put into words the focus on your word choices...they were to say the least, impeccable and very well placed. Wow. Thanks for sharing. I hope to read more of your work soon.

-Leopassion7"
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Leopassion7
Tue Oct 26 10:22:02 2010

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My Review of MOON RAIN by plato
Took my breath away. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful work!

~Lp
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Leopassion7
Tue Oct 26 10:19:36 2010

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My Review of MIND INSIDE by plato
Interesting to say the least; though I'm not sure I care for the erratic rhyme scheme format.

~Lp
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Leopassion7
Tue Oct 26 10:16:38 2010

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My Review of BREATHING AGAIN by plato
very beautiful write Plato! Thanks for sharing. Has a lot of detailed imagery.
~Lp
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Leopassion7
Thu Jan 14 20:32:11 2010

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My Review of Daddy's Gun by TheVirghost
Yep, you've still got it!! Keep em comin'

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Thu Jan 14 20:30:28 2010

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My Review of Cold Night Thoughts by TheVirghost
Nice Ghost! Keep em comin' friend.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Tue Nov 3 09:20:56 2009

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My Review of Suddenly by bamzoozler
Overall this was good. I must say this piece would have read much smoother with a few changes. Just the following:

Haunts me, like a shadow never disappearing even though I cannot see it.
Screaming.
Oh God, help me. >>>> ..."never disappearing--though sight abandons me."<<<<

Your angel voice keeping my fears at bay.
You caress me, press your lips to my neck.
>>>> ..."Your angelic voice..."<<<< >>>> ...."caress me, pressing..."<<<<

In our own small kingdom. >>>> ..."In a kingdom all our own."<<<<

Hope this helps dear. Good job.

-Lp"


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Leopassion7
Tue Nov 3 09:14:28 2009

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My Review of Bearins Foxxe : Chapter one-Good old London Town. by bamzoozler
Powerful wording
Loved the strength of the words you've used to bring about a vivid tale of life depicting the dead and hollow of this story!! Indeed, you've captured my interest and intrigue and I'll be back to follow the next chapter so keep going. I want more.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Thu Oct 29 19:10:59 2009

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My Review of Alpha Q (The P.U.A) by Caesar
For some reason, there's just something about these lines that really bring a smile to my face:

His presence becomes the wind; ranging freely above the earth’s atmosphere
Maneuverability capable of mimicking the most agile of bird-- most deviant of microbe

Very powerful word play combined with sparks of alliteration adds to the appeal of this amazing piece. As usual, your work is always fresh and nothing like the typical cliche of cookie cutter pieces I usually read.

Thanks for asking me to read. Great write!

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sat Jun 6 15:16:37 2009

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My Review of Today by Skyblusweetie
Good Job
I found the sporadic rhyme here interesting as I normally don't take to it; however given the specific theme it somehow seems appropriate. As you're seeking critical reviews, I will suggest the following:

-Try incorporating metaphors here and there as they will bring imagination and life to your work
-Adding a few marks of punctuation would bring out the drama in the piece as well as guide readers in where to pause for the intended effect
-Try broadening your expressive vocab to inflict the pain you're feeling. Such words as decay, drought, incessant would provide that empty feeling

Just a few suggestions. Use them if you want. Need any help or ever want a review let me know. We're all here to help one another grow and expand as word artists.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sat Jun 6 15:03:44 2009

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My Review of MEDITATE by plato
Very Soothing
Loved it!! Your writing abilities awe the muse and causes a plethora of emotions. Great penship. Beautiful writing!

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sat Jun 6 14:59:31 2009

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My Review of SEARCHING by plato
Quite a Write!!
What caught my attention right off was the alliteration you penned so exquisitely. I am very impressed. The metaphors bring all sorts of images to the mind. What freedom you have expressed here.

Great job and a pleasure to read. I shall read more soon.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sat May 23 17:42:49 2009

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My Review of The Noise of Silence by Layde4Real
Different indeed
Loved the title...the oxymoron of it all is amazing. Great catch, would have done more for me if the presentation had been more revealing but good job overall. Thanks for sharing. Indeed, we can all relate to a time or two when the noise of silence seemed to be screaming without surcease.

Keep em coming!

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sat May 23 17:39:41 2009

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My Review of Love & Justice by Layde4Real
Short and Sweet
Just the way Love and Justice should be. Good write. Liked the flow here as well. Keep up the good work and I shall return for more.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sun May 10 22:08:11 2009

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My Review of Mutual Need...Duplicitous Greed by Layde4Real
Nice!!
I loved the flow on this as well as the word play. The deeper meaning behind this is beautiful as well. Isn't it neat how relationships and love works? Keep writing and keep up the good job.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Tue May 5 11:37:53 2009

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My Review of When I Fell in Love by Luvanpoetry
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Leopassion7
Tue May 5 11:37:11 2009

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My Review of When I Fell in Love by Luvanpoetry
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Leopassion7
Sun Apr 26 16:29:20 2009

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My Review of " SOUL MATE " by AnnaandJames
I teared up at the end...what a subtle but heart-rendering way in which to conclude this most romantic piece!! Loved it and I love your writings. I shall indeed have to come back for more.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sun Apr 26 16:23:37 2009

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My Review of " THE QUICKENING OF LOVE" Beautiful write.. by AnnaandJames
The Perfect Love
Your heart is very much so in love!!! The words were just right: not cliched and not overemphasized. The perfect poem of an expression of true love! Indeed, no more words will do it justice from my lips.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sun Apr 26 15:23:33 2009

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My Review of The Beast in Me (Tha_Darknight) by Tha_Darknight
Yep....indeed
So true for so many! Great write. Looking forward to catching up on the others soon.

-Lp"
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Leopassion7
Sun Apr 26 15:21:20 2009

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My Review of You said... by Tha_Darknight
Damn!!
Sounds all too familiar to me. So many countless times we've all encountered the 'I promise to love you' bit and yet, we are always failed. But this is because humans are not perfect and therefore will disappoint us everytime if we put them on high expectations.

I've learned from my previous relationships to go with the flow and not to expect anything more than what is said to me. Great write.

-Lp"
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