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benjamin006
Wed Oct 12 13:50:36 2011

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My Review of Contemplating by BellaDonaLea
Sad But True
It's ashame that there are people like this still around in the world.

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benjamin006
Fri Jul 22 11:04:40 2011

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My Review of why by boobie
Great Poem!
What a beautiful talent you have! Keep up the wonderful writing!
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benjamin006
Fri Jul 22 11:03:27 2011

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My Review of LIFE'S POSSIBILITIES by llancre
Sad
I have always loved the city of Paris, France. I have been there. Its lovely. And, the people are much better than some American people. JMO
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benjamin006
Fri Jul 22 11:00:33 2011

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My Review of Good-bye lovley teacher. by kellytaylor500
Inspirational
It's always sad when you have to say Goodbyes to those who have inspired you.
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benjamin006
Thu Jul 21 22:58:35 2011

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My Review of Monster Anxiety by boobie
Dark and Coldhearted
Very well written!
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benjamin006
Thu Jul 21 02:29:22 2011

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My Review of An Orgasmic Epiphany by midnight_pixie
Pulchritudinous
Wow, I must say that is one intense moment with Epiphany.

Great poem! I love it!
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benjamin006
Wed Jul 20 23:00:33 2011

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My Review of I Am Who I AM by Ellaina_Faye
The Truth is Out There
I will just say this.

You are most certainly are who you are. What you believe in is entirely on what you want to believe in. It's not our place to judge others solely on what they believe in or not believe in. That is why this world is the way it is. Just as you said, "It is what it is".

For many of centuries, decades and what have you...people have fought to believe in what they believe in. Our forefathers have declared a nation that would be about democracy and Beliefs. That is why we went to war for our Independence in 1773. To fight what we believe in....a free country without government telling us how to behave.

There are reasons why we believe in what we believe in. Many may not approve or want to start wars all in the name of Religion. Some may just see it as some sideshow...where they can mock Jesus and God.

As for one, I do not mock them. I don't personally believe they exist. And, yes...that is what I believe in. Others may deny otherwise their premises. But I am not afraid to tell anyone what my beliefs are. Whether you agree or disagree.. At least, I do not hide behind the mask, and pretend to be someone else. I am who I am. And, for the most part. It is what it is.

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benjamin006
Wed Jul 20 21:53:24 2011

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My Review of A Forbidden Life "Part 1" by Ellaina_Faye
Pulchritudinous
Very good story, Ella.

And, not sure if this goes along with the story, but I will say it anyways.

It's hard these days, to help out the people who feel they really need help. Even though, in reality, they don't need help in the first place. They just want something in return, so they "act" like they are the victim. Then steal you blind.

I say this, because that happened to me many of times. I try to be the good samaritan. But when I try to "do the right thing". All I get in return is disrespect. As if I am somehow the enemy now. As if I just committed a crime, and will be sentenced to death by stoning. So, I really wonder, especially these days....just what is really the "right thing" to do when someone is in dire strait? When someone needs a helping hand. But then be turned to totally something else?

I just thought I mention this, since most of the story was based on trying to be the good samaritan.
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benjamin006
Mon Jul 18 22:51:58 2011

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My Review of Know Me by Ellaina_Faye
Hmmm....Interesting
That is quite a poem I must say.
For we all have sinned in more than one way.
But all I can tell you,
I would not ever flee from the truth.
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benjamin006
Mon Jul 18 03:41:44 2011

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My Review of Reinvention of beauty by Drunn
Pulchritudinous
Wow, I remember her. I don't know if she was hot. But perhaps sexy. I didn't really know her that well, as you probably did. Nonetheless, its a great poem!

Very well done Drunn!
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benjamin006
Mon Jul 18 03:39:12 2011

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My Review of Kinetic Harmony by Kinetic_Ambiance
Pulchritudinous
This is a remarkable poem. I love how you describe vividly about harmony. In this case, being in kintetic harmony.
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 19:31:07 2011

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My Review of Laying Beneath The Truth Prepared For A Death Full by ClarkthePoet
Pulchritudinous
My favorite line from your wonderous poem is:

"Turning into a storm that is meaningless
eyes spread wide to the view of emptiness
with only the sweet taste of loneliness "

it describes life as we know it...sometimes, whether we are aware of it or not. JMO
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:41:47 2011

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My Review of To Be Me by ScatteredThought
Pulchritudinous
Man, I love this poem! I believe that everyone should be themselves. There is no sense in this uncertain world, that anyone should try to or want to be, anyone else. It may take you places and stuff....but only for a brief time.

Life is short, and to go farther in places and be real....just be yourself. That will take you farther to places you want to go in life. Much farther than if you try to be someone else. JMO
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:38:30 2011

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My Review of Bam. by Emmy13
Pulchritudinous
How this is all seem true! Its call a Reality Check.
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:36:01 2011

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My Review of Do You Want To Cross The Sidewalk Today? by TheStargazer
Pulchritudinous
A cute poem and very creative. Great job!
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:34:12 2011

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My Review of best Wishes by kellytaylor500
Pulchritudinous
Sad but wonderous
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:33:06 2011

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My Review of My Door Is Open by grruvy1
Pulchritudinous
Very Angelic.
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 17 11:31:23 2011

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My Review of Ready by Jademynn
Pulchritudinous
Well, it does seem that you are "Ready" for his devine Return.

GL!
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benjamin006
Sat Jul 16 11:22:18 2011

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My Review of Sir Bencalot by Ellaina_Faye
Pulchritudinous
Wow....I am speechless! Thank you!
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benjamin006
Wed Jul 13 03:19:44 2011

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My Review of Bromance by reecer52
Dark and Coldhearted
Wow! Talk about being screwed by your bro. lol
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benjamin006
Wed Jul 13 03:16:38 2011

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My Review of One More Time by Ellaina_Faye
Man, I Can Relate!
I used to feel like that a very long time ago. I used to go through these raw and dark emotions. But no one would either care or want to listen.
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benjamin006
Tue Jul 12 20:06:58 2011

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My Review of When You Are Alone by Keneisha
Pulchritudinous
Many years ago, I used to feel alone. But I was never lonely. I was alone most of the time. but I had a good circle of friends. That was 20 years ago.
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benjamin006
Mon Jul 11 21:32:44 2011

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My Review of It can't be help!!! by kittybaby13
Intriguing!
Very well done!
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benjamin006
Sun Jul 10 20:43:31 2011

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My Review of Swordersen Crop (Revised) by WyattJaymes
Pulchritudinous
Very good start! Looking forward to reading Chapter 2.
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benjamin006
Fri Jul 8 00:00:43 2011

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My Review of Such A Tired Cliche by grruvy1
Pulchritudinous Powerful!
I love how you constructed your words. They seem to stand right out of the page. Or in this case, your wonderful poem.
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