Chellyrene
Thu Jul 5 01:39:29 2012
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| My Review of HE FORGIVES by
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It's so short, but your poem holds so much, really. I like the length and the simplicity created out of something that really isn't so simple. Well done  |
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Chellyrene
Thu Jun 14 13:36:15 2012
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| My Review of Heroes by
LadyAeryn
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| Love. |
| Ahhh I love this! I especially love the last stanza. Fantastic! |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 23:19:10 2012
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| My Review of nothing is as it seems by
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It seems like you're going through a lot right now. I'm sorry  God is faithful and He is there, just run to Him. I'll pray for ya, dear. Things will get better. |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:59:04 2012
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| My Review of People and their disappointing ways by
M-a-l-l-a-r-y
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| Yeah, I agree. Everyone will let you down at some point. It's inevitable. But conflict is part of relationships, and trust is a beautiful thing. The trick is knowing who to trust. Good poem. |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:46:38 2012
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| My Review of Eternity and One by
KyleBrosnihan
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| Amazing |
| Wow, this is awesome! I love how you personified day and night, and described the sun as "both stoic killer / And jubilant mother" .. So cool. |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:38:31 2012
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| My Review of She Is by
Sunray02
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| This is actually really cool. It makes you think a lot about the people and names you see every day, and wonder who those people really are. I like this quite a bit |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:35:01 2012
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| My Review of Destiny, by
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| Short and sweet, full of meaning. I like it |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:17:04 2012
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| My Review of Bridge of Stone by
BlinkyTompot
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| creative :) |
| This is great, I really loved how you took this bridge and wrote about all the different 'experiences' it's had. Good poem! |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:06:54 2012
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| My Review of MEDIOCRITY by
Galacticbeam
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| I like this. So many people just go through life trying to take the easy way out in everything they can, and only form opinions based off of other people's opinions instead of really understanding what's going on. So superficial. |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:59:37 2012
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| My Review of Feast your eyes by
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| Very intense, I'd say. Sorta condemning the ways of the world. Makes me think of my brother because he's made a lot of poor choices in his lifetime, and I don't think he understands how much his decisions affect and hurt the people around him. |
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:52:49 2012
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| My Review of I'm Just Old by
JeffM
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| Funny ^.^ |
| Hahaha.. this is great. I really like it. The only thing I would change would be the fact that lines 2 and 4 don't really rhyme. Very funny though |
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Chellyrene
Thu Feb 23 22:11:05 2012
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| My Review of Late by
The_Fictionist
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| Wow... |
| This made me cry.. it was beautiful, and so sad. I love the repetition of the ".. for she was late" part. Very well written. |
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Chellyrene
Thu Feb 23 22:07:18 2012
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| My Review of The thing I think by
Jandaiio
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| Great |
| People don't think for themselves these days.. they just take what they've heard and make it their own opinion, even when they know nothing. So frustrating. Nice poem. |
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Chellyrene
Thu Feb 23 22:04:44 2012
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| My Review of Not What I Expected by
snulf
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| Love it |
| It makes me sad, but I really like it. It's crazy how a thousand small choices can take you in a different direction than you ever thought you'd go. |
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Chellyrene
Thu Feb 23 22:01:51 2012
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| My Review of Dear Dad by
Nellie5
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| Powerful |
| So full of emotion, and very, very powerful. |
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Chellyrene
Fri Feb 17 22:51:59 2012
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| My Review of haunting by
atralupin
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| I love the last line. That can be so true... my mistakes often haunt me as well. |
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Chellyrene
Fri Feb 17 22:49:23 2012
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| My Review of frozen by
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| Very ... real. I like how simple but powerful this poem is. It makes me think of myself and how much I'd thought I'd changed in some ways, but when I really look at myself, I see that I haven't changed at all in those areas, which is disappointing. Anyway, good poem. |
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