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Chellyrene
Mon Nov 11 02:26:18 2013

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My Review of "Perazielle's curse: Shards of the fallen." by jimmy
Ooooh,,,
I am kind of in love with your use of the English language.. I absolutely love this. What an interesting story, too! I personally would have liked to know more about what the box looked like, but other than that... very, very nicely done.
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Chellyrene
Mon Nov 11 02:19:23 2013

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My Review of MOMMA AND HER GLASSES by brendacullen
Ha
"It's just her stomach that's all squashed in." Hahahaha. I like it. Anyway, I think it would be better if you added quotes, by that's just my personal preference I guess. Also I'm not quite sure what the difference between a "house shoe" and a normal shoe is. . . but maybe that's just me? Haha. Good job though!
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Chellyrene
Mon Nov 11 01:43:05 2013

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My Review of I FELT GOD CRY by SteveandRose
Fantastic
Really good flow and rhythm, everything about this is perfect. It's so true too, the world is in a sad, sad state these days. Very nicely written; well done!
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Chellyrene
Wed Aug 28 17:24:48 2013

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My Review of The Gateway by SAnthonyH
Very nice, I like the repitition. Well done.
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Chellyrene
Wed Aug 28 14:51:26 2013

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My Review of SOMETHING IS COMING by elfqueena
I really like your use of the phrase, "pleasant as peas."
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Chellyrene
Wed Aug 28 14:47:24 2013

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My Review of Quietly by Vashthestampede0
Lovely piece. I especially love the second stanza. Very nice
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Chellyrene
Wed Aug 28 14:45:20 2013

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My Review of The Hardest Goodbyes by xjustmex93
Very sad.. but very relatable. I like the line "This place is filled with memories I've only shared with you." It's hard when you lose someone that knows so much more about you than anyone else.
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Chellyrene
Thu Jul 5 01:39:29 2012

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My Review of HE FORGIVES by JudyBall
Love it.
It's so short, but your poem holds so much, really. I like the length and the simplicity created out of something that really isn't so simple. Well done
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Chellyrene
Thu Jun 14 13:36:15 2012

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My Review of Heroes by LadyAeryn
Love.
Ahhh I love this! I especially love the last stanza. Fantastic!
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Chellyrene
Wed Mar 28 22:35:47 2012

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My Review of The Midnight Bell by Adam
Great
Good word usage. I like it!
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 23:19:10 2012

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My Review of nothing is as it seems by katiehoward1
It seems like you're going through a lot right now. I'm sorry God is faithful and He is there, just run to Him. I'll pray for ya, dear. Things will get better.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 23:07:00 2012

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My Review of Say Cheese by EltonCamp
Haha, this is great. Loved it
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 23:05:22 2012

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My Review of Upright by SuchaRebel
Cheerful, encouraging poem Nice job!
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:59:04 2012

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My Review of People and their disappointing ways by M-a-l-l-a-r-y
Yeah, I agree. Everyone will let you down at some point. It's inevitable. But conflict is part of relationships, and trust is a beautiful thing. The trick is knowing who to trust. Good poem.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:51:09 2012

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My Review of The Birds of my Youth by jamie_c
Very refreshing poem good work!
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:46:38 2012

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My Review of Eternity and One by KyleBrosnihan
Amazing
Wow, this is awesome! I love how you personified day and night, and described the sun as "both stoic killer / And jubilant mother" .. So cool.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:38:31 2012

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My Review of She Is by Sunray02
This is actually really cool. It makes you think a lot about the people and names you see every day, and wonder who those people really are. I like this quite a bit
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:35:01 2012

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My Review of Destiny, by poetpat
Short and sweet, full of meaning. I like it
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:17:04 2012

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My Review of Bridge of Stone by BlinkyTompot
creative :)
This is great, I really loved how you took this bridge and wrote about all the different 'experiences' it's had. Good poem!
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:09:24 2012

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My Review of If I could change my life. by carolynmitchell
Sad I'm sorry about your friend. I really like the last stanza a lot.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 22:06:54 2012

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My Review of MEDIOCRITY by Galacticbeam
I like this. So many people just go through life trying to take the easy way out in everything they can, and only form opinions based off of other people's opinions instead of really understanding what's going on. So superficial.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:59:37 2012

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My Review of Feast your eyes by martyj13
Very intense, I'd say. Sorta condemning the ways of the world. Makes me think of my brother because he's made a lot of poor choices in his lifetime, and I don't think he understands how much his decisions affect and hurt the people around him.
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:52:49 2012

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My Review of I'm Just Old by JeffM
Funny ^.^
Hahaha.. this is great. I really like it. The only thing I would change would be the fact that lines 2 and 4 don't really rhyme. Very funny though
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:17:24 2012

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My Review of A Rose in Winter by atralupin
Beautiful love the last line
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Chellyrene
Tue Mar 20 21:05:56 2012

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My Review of The Songs We Sang by atralupin
I love this. I love the feeling and wording of the beginning. Very relate-able poem.
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