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EDP1996
Sun Feb 18 00:54:05 2018

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My Review of AT MY FUNERAL by seriouspoet
Beautifully Written! New
A poem I can see bringing comfort to those burying loved ones. It seems better to celebrate the life lived than to mourn the life lost. Wonderful write!
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EDP1996
Sun Feb 18 00:47:02 2018

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My Review of Something Is Amiss by michaelgallatin
So Sad New
So much senseless violence in this world. So many young lives cut short for no reason. It is a tragic world we face today when our children aren't even safe at school.
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EDP1996
Tue Feb 13 14:11:00 2018

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My Review of Dark Thoughts by annalame
Haunting and Dark
Your words are haunting. The pain that can be felt by one with these dark thoughts cannot be understood by anyone who hasn't struggled with it every waking moment. This is a beautiful, emotion striking write.
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EDP1996
Tue Feb 13 12:56:57 2018

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My Review of Strength by annalame
Amazing!
This is something I want to print out and frame. It is exactly what I, and anyone facing troubling times need to read. Not only does it carry an empowering message, it does so in a beautifully written way!
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EDP1996
Tue Feb 13 01:41:45 2018

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My Review of An Odd But True Friendship by michaelgallatin
Beautiful
I would love to see some kind of drawing to go with this. It reminds me of something you would see in an old fairy tale book! Honestly, I think wolves would make better friends than any human! I look forward to reading more from you!
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EDP1996
Thu Feb 23 23:13:42 2017

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My Review of Rain by Silverblue
Nice Imagery
Rain is my favorite weather. If it's raining, all I want to do is curl up in bed and sleep all day. Nothing better in my opinion. I could see myself laying in bed listening to the rain outside just by the awesome imagery you used here. Awesome read!
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EDP1996
Tue Oct 22 10:35:20 2013

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My Review of Lonesome Moon by BenjaminHyatt
Spotlight
This is a great write! Beautiful flow and nice rhyming structure. Flawless!
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EDP1996
Tue Oct 22 01:02:12 2013

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My Review of Through The Lens by SteveandRose
Beautiful Imagery
I could almost see this beautiful day as if I was actually there. Your words flowed beautifully and made for an easy read. Very nice piece.
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EDP1996
Mon Jan 23 17:53:05 2012

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My Review of A creative Writing Story by Military_Dream
Cliffhanger
This shouldn't be listed as a poem. Is there more to this, I'm so interested in what happened next.

This could use quite a bit of corrections in punctuation, spelling, and grammar. But this is really a great start.

It sucked me in and in the end I was almost screaming at my computer: "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????" lol

Really great, please say there's more! haha
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EDP1996
Mon Jan 23 17:16:23 2012

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My Review of Take Me Away by BrookeAmberLee
Wonderful
It's like this poem speaks to me. The ABAB rhyming scheme makes it such a smooth read. It's so great and I think more people should see it. Spotlight
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EDP1996
Mon Jan 23 17:06:45 2012

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My Review of I'm Sorry by BrookeAmberLee
Wow
This was so sad and so sweet. It was such a smooth, easy read and it has a great rhyming. Really great write and I can't wait to read more from you!!
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EDP1996
Mon Jan 16 12:11:12 2012

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My Review of For Keeping Me Safe by amhinnc
Wow
Amazing write. It grabbed my attention from the start and held me until the end. I could almost see everything in my head. Very nice job!
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EDP1996
Mon Jan 16 00:00:39 2012

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My Review of No one would forget by amhinnc
Love it
Wonderful piece. I really like the way you write.
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EDP1996
Sun Jan 8 13:45:22 2012

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My Review of The Girl Inside The Mirror by ekramunnisa
Nice
I really enjoyed reading this, it was a very interesting piece. Nice job!
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EDP1996
Sun Jan 8 03:10:40 2012

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My Review of Mr. Shadow by LoyalDogComplex
Nice
The rhyming scheme was so creative but seemed very hard to do. I love this poem so much, it's actually become my favorite. Nice work!
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EDP1996
Sun Jan 8 03:01:56 2012

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My Review of Smoking Is So Glamorous by EltonCamp
LOVE IT!
I really need to show this to my brother and my mom. Both are smokers. I really love this!
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EDP1996
Sun Jul 10 01:11:44 2011

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My Review of Lice Limerick by Dagmag
Cute
Haha! Put a smile on my face. Keep writing
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EDP1996
Tue Apr 5 20:30:37 2011

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My Review of The joke's on me by kashaw
haha funny...I love the rhyming a lot. Very nicely written.
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EDP1996
Tue Apr 5 20:25:07 2011

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My Review of Bad breath by kashaw
Nice
Cute and funny..Love the rhyming..Love the last four lines..Nice little piece here.
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EDP1996
Fri Nov 26 14:57:54 2010

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My Review of Christmas is here by romie99
Cute
This is very well written. You are a very talented writer. Good job.
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EDP1996
Tue Nov 16 19:35:20 2010

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My Review of The Crib part two (selling her soul) by gothpoet_2012
Soooo Creepy....
Creepy. Gave me the chills! Good job!
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EDP1996
Thu Nov 11 21:28:02 2010

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My Review of The Cat Wish by LuckyBlackCat
This is cute! I love the lines "Id wear a collar with a bell and tinkle wherever I went" It is very creative for an eleven year old.
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EDP1996
Thu Nov 11 10:40:25 2010

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My Review of promises turn into lies by DarkAndDeep3
This is very good. You are a very good writer.
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EDP1996
Thu Nov 11 10:28:42 2010

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My Review of Dreaming by Emmi
Great
This is very nicely written. It has a great rhyming structure. Love the third stanza. Good job!
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EDP1996
Thu Nov 11 10:09:56 2010

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My Review of The crib by gothpoet_2012
This seems to be a short story instead of a poem. It is very good, and it left me wondering what happens next.
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