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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sun Jan 27 20:36:37 2013

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My Review of When Shadows Dance by Whiskurz
I thought this was a very good piece of work, flowed perfectly
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Fri Jan 11 19:56:44 2013

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My Review of Don't Dampen a Poet Spirit by DemeraraLady
sadly Ive been hearing that poetry was a lost art, and i always wondered why it became this way... maybe its the reason you've stated here? I enjoyed your poem though great work
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Fri Jan 11 18:55:04 2013

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My Review of Cuckoo Clock by smallfry
Talented
Love the flow of this, love how lines seem to rhyme in the middle of a line also.. helps the pace, at least for me it did, great work
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Mon Jul 16 19:30:57 2012

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My Review of The Sun by GuillermoVera
I thought this was a good love poem (not always my favorite) but when i look pass that i see a very well written peice that a loved one would love, great work
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Mon Jul 16 19:22:48 2012

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My Review of MOST DAYS by JudyBall
Exceptional!
This was an awesome, easy, clever read, i really enjoyed it.. this line really stood out to me

"You've never said the things to me,
A woman wants to hear;
But if you're angry you make sure,
Your words are crystal clear;"

thats true in alot of cases, keep up the good work
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Mon Apr 9 22:30:36 2012

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My Review of The Things You Did. by PracticedPoet
flawless
Wow this to me is one of the best poems I've read in a while, the guy your describing sounds a lot like me, insecure when it comes to relationships and broken, well written you have my spotlight vote
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Thu Apr 5 21:05:03 2012

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My Review of The River by DeathNoteNinja
Sounds like a man searching for love, a love that last forever like a river flows but often cries as he loses hope, lol I don't know that's just what I took out of it, I enjoyed reading it
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Mon Mar 19 22:09:13 2012

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My Review of Hitchhiking Highwayman: Tribute to Johnny Cash by MarcusGrey
wow
This was an awesome song.. I'm not really familiar with Johnny cashs' music but this poem makes me want to look some up and listen; great write and great rhyme skeem
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Mon Mar 19 21:55:02 2012

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My Review of You never said you loved me by slippery_mind
Something about the last line in the first stanza and the last line in the second stanza that I really liked.. overall I felt like it was a nice poem but those lines stood out to me as favorites... its like a questionable statement if that makes sense.. good poem
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Mar 10 12:09:58 2012

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My Review of A Black Star by Poetic_Jeremiah
great
Love the message in this, very spirital and insightful, great write
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Mar 10 12:03:50 2012

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My Review of Discovering A Poet In Me by Poetic_Jeremiah
This piece reminds me a lot of me, even though it might be a personal poem about you and how u feel about your dreams as a poet, I think a lot of people can relate to this, good work my brotha
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sun Feb 26 09:20:25 2012

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My Review of Abortion by sashaj1313
I really like this, and. Love the message, abortion is one of those topics that everyone is gonna have their own opinion on, I must say I do agree with you.. but I can understand why SOME people get an abortion, either way this is a great touching poem
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Feb 25 12:42:37 2012

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My Review of Society Killed the Teenager by ZoeyMarie
I think the most important part of this poem is the message, I don't really see anything wrong with the poem itself.. I've always been a fan of deep subjects and thought provoking material which is why I like this.. plus the rhyme skeem flows well

Good job your fan- KP
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Feb 25 12:30:12 2012

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My Review of His Dieing Wish by teddy
I must say this is a great poem and great work of fiction.. I was feeling sorry for your lost until I read the notes, u made it really believe because its filled with emotions.. you did a great job with this.. their are just a few small typos.. which happens to me all the time..
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Feb 25 10:52:58 2012

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My Review of What Confusion Can Do by ZoeyMarie
I think this was a great poem, love the way u put it together, and I think we all can relate to that feeling of loving but not getting it back, would love to read more 4rm you
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Thu Dec 15 14:34:42 2011

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My Review of Loving You by DeviantWriter88
WOW
Sounds like someone is really REALLY in love, and thats has to be a good feeling, i'll have to agree with someone also, this would make a good song
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Tue Dec 13 19:05:00 2011

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My Review of Mixed Up Girl / Eating For Three by Kassandra
Lol a very funny write, not only is it funny, it flows perfectly as well.

- your biggest Fan KP
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Nov 5 22:02:34 2011

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My Review of The killer Who Must Die by Kassandra
Truth
This poem was very heartfelt, speaks reality, and i think more people should consider our actions, on how we treat the earth we live on, and that goes for how we treat the people on it as well i believe, awesome writing as always
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Wed Nov 2 20:03:42 2011

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My Review of Afraid of the Dark by Whiskurz
WOW
A wonderful piece and very sad, i've always respected your work on here and you been producing a lot of great writings, and this just adds to the wonderful collection you have on here, excellent poem
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Wed Aug 3 17:16:37 2011

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My Review of The Best is Yet to Come by jediallday
inspirational
I found this to be very inspirational, i think this is what keeps us all going, knowing that when times are hard, that it will always get better
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Wed Aug 3 17:10:21 2011

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My Review of She's not you by Truefreedom
I thought this was a very Nice poem, the rhyme didnt seem at all forced, it flowed naturally as i read it, and made perfect since, love your choice of words. really captured the feeling of ditching a wedding
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Feb 12 00:33:56 2011

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My Review of Whispers in the Wind by stephen_werdna18
Amazing
Ive always been a fan of repeating lines, i feel it adds to the mood, and emotion, and really helps pull out what u are trying to say, and i felt this poem really hit home to alot of the same feelings ive felt many times, alot of despiar, and troubled times, i think its wonderful when u can reach out to the reader and have them relate to you, and while keeping it in a perfect rhyme like you did here, this is great you have my SL vote
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Feb 12 00:20:40 2011

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My Review of Episode One:Claim Your Exsistence by NatureBoy
Interesting
I think this shows how versitle you are, whether its writing a song, or a peom, or a short story, you do all very well, forreal, and this came off to be kinda suspenseful at first, i was wondering what happened to jamie, its some cool ideas and concepts you have going here, and it has a humor to it also, i see all the aspects of a great story in this, keep it up, i know how hard it is to write a short story, which im still not good at doing it, and u made it look really easy, ur a Natural Writer they should call u Naturalboy lol keep up the good work
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Sat Jan 29 15:13:42 2011

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My Review of Stuck in love by FlyWithMe
I think Stuck in Love, fits it will, its good that u dont know what exactly what this was, u just wrote at let your emotions do the writing, without worring about the style of it, and i think thats when u get your realist work, I like this, But sometimes its better to let go than trying to understand a dead relationship, I would love to see more from you keep up the good work =)
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KPaka_Kpizzle
Fri Dec 10 16:12:50 2010

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My Review of Soulmates by XcherriesX
GREAT
I too believe in soulmates, sometimes ou cant help but believe someone is meant for you, especially when the bond it there, Great write, keep up the Good work, Your Fan -KP
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